harry'sgurl
Wednesday 15th June 2005 13:42 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
| The title to this chapter was very fitting. This is a complete and total disaster! |
rox_jazz101
Friday 10th June 2005 11:15 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
| I love reading this and am begging for more! It's a very well written story, the way you can see into both of the characters minds is awesome. Keep up the good work and update soon! |
| Saturday 11th June 2005 09:34 | Per Aspera Ad Astra (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much, I hope the next chapter will go up at the beginning of next week. I'm particularly glad that you like looking at H/G's thoughts. I wanted to try that. |
Fuzzy
Saturday 4th June 2005 10:44 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
Oh my gosh, this has got to be one of the best chapters I've ever read! It's so heart-wrenching and beautiful. Try to update soon. |
| Monday 6th June 2005 01:19 | Per Aspera Ad Astra (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much, I will. |
roastpuff
Friday 3rd June 2005 23:18 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
| You, sir, are breaking my heart with all this pain. Please, just let them get together and stop the pain! |
| Saturday 4th June 2005 06:04 | Per Aspera Ad Astra (Author Response) |
| If you find this one painful, you should definitely not read the upcoming variant of this ("Per Asperissima Ad Astra"). - I wouldn't mind if you did, though. |
p0tterfan
Friday 3rd June 2005 23:08 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
| Ah ... the teenage years. They will come out stronger in the end
I'm sure :) But Harry dueling F/G, that sounds like an
interesting chapter
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| Saturday 4th June 2005 06:02 | Per Aspera Ad Astra (Author Response) |
| It's not going to happen of course. Harry just overreacts, because of his feelings for Ginny and because he expects the twins to get protective. But that's obviously not what they're trying to do. |
Lulabelle
Friday 3rd June 2005 18:11 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
| Err...sorry about the 4 posts. My computer went a little wonky. By the way, I also liked the bit w/Fred & George. I just love them! |
| Saturday 4th June 2005 05:59 | Per Aspera Ad Astra (Author Response) |
| Yeah, me too. |
Lulabelle
Friday 3rd June 2005 18:09 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
| Oh no! I hate misunderstandings & confusion. But that's what life is all about, at least when it comes to relationships! I like your style of writing where we can see what's going on in Harry & Ginny's heads. Great job! Update soon so we can see if they can get themselves out of this mess. |
Lulabelle
Friday 3rd June 2005 18:09 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
| Oh no! I hate misunderstandings & confusion. But that's what life is all about, at least when it comes to relationships! I like your style of writing where we can see what's going on in Harry & Ginny's heads. Great job! Update soon so we can see if they can get themselves out of this mess. |
Lulabelle
Friday 3rd June 2005 18:09 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
| Oh no! I hate misunderstandings & confusion. But that's what life is all about, at least when it comes to relationships! I like your style of writing where we can see what's going on in Harry & Ginny's heads. Great job! Update soon so we can see if they can get themselves out of this mess. Nice |
Lulabelle
Friday 3rd June 2005 18:09 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
| Oh no! I hate misunderstandings & confusion. But that's what life is all about, at least when it comes to relationships! I like your style of writing where we can see what's going on in Harry & Ginny's heads. Great job! Update soon so we can see if they can get themselves out of this mess. Nice job |
| Saturday 4th June 2005 05:58 | Per Aspera Ad Astra (Author Response) |
| Thanks a lot. But you knew it was coming - at least if you read the title. But don't worry, now that the first part of the title has come true, it's time for the second part. |
levotatingT
Friday 3rd June 2005 14:00 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
This story is so awsome. I can't wait till the next chapter comes. How many total do you know? Anyway I'll be waiting.
Great job, keep writing, and PLez write back
levotatingT |
| Saturday 4th June 2005 05:55 | Per Aspera Ad Astra (Author Response) |
| One more chapter plus an epilogue. - However, a variant story is in the making: "Per Asperissima Ad Astra". Look out for it. |
Treck
Friday 3rd June 2005 13:30 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!
I have to wait to see what happens? Oh Fudge. Hurry up and get the next chapter done Jenadamson.
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| Saturday 4th June 2005 05:53 | Per Aspera Ad Astra (Author Response) |
| Coming soon. |
Melindaleo
Friday 3rd June 2005 10:53 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
Ouch! I really cringed when Ginny said those words to Harry. I could sympathize with her, but really, all my feelings went towards him at the moment. The line about watching all the doors slam shut was wonderfully vivid and evocative. Nicely done, and I enjoyed it.
The twins were great, they always are, but I really hope that Ginny is the one who makes the next move, since Harry did try and was shot down hard. It's really Ginny's turn to take a risk. |
| Friday 3rd June 2005 12:04 | Per Aspera Ad Astra (Author Response) |
I really cringed when Ginny said those words to Harry.
That's exactly what I wanted! Thanks so much. |
Wolf's Scream
Friday 3rd June 2005 09:25 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
Very well done! Some comments that came to mind as I was reading:
Yeah, Harry's response to Harpy!Ginny's "life's
not always what you'd like it to be" makes a lot
of sense to me; quite believable.
It's good that Fred & George are around; Harry
needed a clue-by-four upside the head. (Of
course, Ginny could use one, too. And it looks as
if F & G are about to apply same.)
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| Friday 3rd June 2005 12:02 | Per Aspera Ad Astra (Author Response) |
| So much for the protective Weasley brothers. |
dancinginmagic
Friday 3rd June 2005 08:23 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
I really like this description:
She saw his eyes change. It was like looking down a well-lit corridor: there were rooms on either side, rooms that had been opened by her during this last week. And now she could literally see how the doors of those rooms slammed shut, one after another, and the light falling through them into the corridor was blocked out; Harry's eyes went dark.
But Ginny! Ginny, Ginny, Ginny! Why, oh why did you say that? You couldn't even just let him finish, could you?
It seems love is never simple for these two. Ah well. If it was, he wouldn't be Harry, would he?
Can't wait for more!
Sarah |
| Friday 3rd June 2005 12:00 | Per Aspera Ad Astra (Author Response) |
The answer to But Ginny! Ginny, Ginny, Ginny! Why, oh why did you say that? is already there. - And who says that Harry is the complicated one. For once, he seems to be quite clear about what he wants. |
