gymnastgal19
Monday 29th October 2007 14:44 | Precious Moments in Time |
whats wrong?!?!
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brios
Friday 24th June 2005 17:39 | Precious Moments in Time |
Ahhh shameful cliffie!! How could you?
great story, looking forward to next installment.
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| Tuesday 28th June 2005 17:53 | Precious Moments in Time (Author Response) |
There's more coming! Ch. 4 is in beta and should be up soon. Thanks for reading!
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jeanne
Friday 24th June 2005 17:02 | Precious Moments in Time |
| This was so short,but good,but short. |
| Tuesday 28th June 2005 17:54 | Precious Moments in Time (Author Response) |
I'm glad you're enjoying the story. There's more coming. |
tbouloy
Friday 24th June 2005 04:10 | Precious Moments in Time |
| Great Story! Keep the updates coming. |
| Tuesday 28th June 2005 17:52 | Precious Moments in Time (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
Wolf's Scream
Thursday 23rd June 2005 14:55 | Precious Moments in Time |
Very nice; well-written. I've not had the dubious pleasure of
being on the receiving end of the hormones of a woman who is in labor,
but what you wrote is believable to me. I dod see one small
error, I think:
After the pain past -> After the pain passed
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| Tuesday 28th June 2005 17:51 | Precious Moments in Time (Author Response) |
| Thanks! My husband would tell you that being on the receiving end of those hormones isn't fun, but I can tell you as a woman that has had two babies that labor isn't exactly a walk in the park either. Seeing those beautiful faces though makes it all worthwhile! |
J.R. Lewis
Thursday 23rd June 2005 13:26 | Precious Moments in Time |
Ooo... Leave us hanging, huh. :) I'll be waiting.
Good job. Keep at it. Nice change from the OotP stuff.
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| Tuesday 28th June 2005 17:52 | Precious Moments in Time (Author Response) |
I'm glad that you're enjoying the story, and I can promise that this won't be the last cliffhanger! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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