harry_ginnyfan Thursday 20th December 2007 17:55 | A Welcome Reprieve |
Cute story! Cheers!
MERRY CHRISTMAS!!
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pyromain Sunday 9th September 2007 04:52 | A Welcome Reprieve |
lovelly story, thanks for it. |
Ashley06 Thursday 29th December 2005 23:13 | A Welcome Reprieve |
This is a cute story.. |
levotatingT Monday 11th July 2005 20:01 | A Welcome Reprieve |
AWWW how cute I absolutley loved it. You portrayed the characters perfectley, especially Harry with the modesty
great job, keep writing, and Plez write back
levotatingT |
Delani Tuesday 5th July 2005 12:26 | A Welcome Reprieve |
This scenario was most welcome. In a sea of kisses and sweet whisperings and fluff (though still ejoyable to read) it's nice to see these cautious yet realistic approaches. Well done!
Delani |
TigerLily8186 Monday 4th July 2005 23:10 | A Welcome Reprieve |
I loved how embarrassed Harry was with being shirtless in front of Ginny. How adorable. The ice treat was sure original. The way you ended the story had just the right mix of hope and promise. |
snowball Monday 4th July 2005 18:07 | A Welcome Reprieve |
Nice touch on Harry/Ginny r/ship. While Harry still broods over events at DOM, I can feel a certain push towards the Weasly girl. It's quite like canon Harry, to get to know Ginny better before pursuing a r/ship. |
PadfootLives12 Sunday 3rd July 2005 16:27 | A Welcome Reprieve |
I loved this story!! I wish I had one of the Icy Delights right now!!
That was a really great idea!! I'm glad Harry got to laugh, it always
makes me happy to see that.
-Padfoot Lives
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x_Rose_x Saturday 2nd July 2005 05:03 | A Welcome Reprieve |
I like this story I think it's really sweet, I like that it didn't end
with a cliche kiss or cheesy sentance even though that can be good
sometimes it's like a refreshing change! It's good I like it, your a
talented writer.
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Kelleypen Friday 1st July 2005 08:33 | A Welcome Reprieve |
I liked your idea of the magical cooling dessert cube.
And this is probably a little more realistic about Harry and Ginny. Too many fics jump straight to snogging as soon as they realize they both like each other. You didn't do that.
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Arnel Friday 1st July 2005 00:22 | A Welcome Reprieve |
The longer I stayed with this story the more I liked it. You’ve done a really nice job of setting the scene (and making me feel the heat as much as Harry and Ginny do). Your characterizations of both Harry and Ginny are spot-on: I can easily picture the two of them sitting by the stream and sharing Ginny’s last sweets. Also, your Icy Delight is a very clever invention and I find myself wishing that there was something similar to it in the Muggle world for real!
I enjoyed reading this story a lot. |
Sib Thursday 30th June 2005 23:00 | A Welcome Reprieve |
You know what I like about your story is that it's realistic. It's a
simple little moment, but lays the foundation for things happening in
the future.
And Harry inching toward his shirt is funny.
Good job!
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Greta_Prewett Thursday 30th June 2005 19:28 | A Welcome Reprieve |
The story flowed easily and really nicely. The characters were quite IC. Good job. |
Melindaleo Thursday 30th June 2005 17:28 | A Welcome Reprieve |
I liked this, very plausible and it's nice seeing Harry lower his defenses. I loved the concept of that dessert. Mmm. |
Cambryn Thursday 30th June 2005 15:26 | A Welcome Reprieve |
very sweet. :) |
DDragon Thursday 30th June 2005 09:17 | A Welcome Reprieve |
that was a nice read, wish i had one of those Icy Delight.... it's burning hot today |