PHsname
Thursday 22nd December 2005 12:33 | Per Asperissima Ad Astra |
this is a very interesting story so far...
while i think u stretched Ginny a bit too far out-of-character to make this story, it's still turning out well so far.
one thing i liked in particular is the whole story-telling narrative u
used here, i think it fits well, and allows you to cover a wide
time-span in a short time...and you seem to be able to put in exactly
what information we need and whatnot.
lookin' good so far...time for me to read the rest of it...haha.
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| Thursday 22nd December 2005 13:29 | Per Asperissima Ad Astra (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you like it, but be warned. You don't know all the facts yet. - Thanks for complimenting the technique, it's a first. Hope you'll like it enough to leave more reviews. |
Bucktavius
Monday 29th August 2005 15:39 | Per Asperissima Ad Astra |
| wow, what an awesome story. very dark and well written. It moves along quite quickly as well. Please keep it dark for atleast 75% of the story! Most darker fanfic's loose conviction after a few chapters. I mean a happy ending is still what I'm pulling for, but after a ton of darkness it makes it that much better. good job! |
| Tuesday 30th August 2005 01:19 | Per Asperissima Ad Astra (Author Response) |
| Don't fear ... or do fear? ::confused:: Anyway, the "Per Asperissima" part is not over yet. |
Cherry
Sunday 21st August 2005 02:40 | Per Asperissima Ad Astra |
GREAT!!!! a little upsetting that hagrid got killed though but you are great!
cherry xxx |
| Monday 22nd August 2005 01:34 | Per Asperissima Ad Astra (Author Response) |
Thank you.
I didn't like to kill Hagrid, but I needed to make Harry as miserable as possible (::grabs lamp off desk and begins hitting himself over the head with it, shouting "bad critmo, bad critmo, mustn't be nasty to master" at the top of his voice: to justify the title phrase ("per asperissima"). I thought that Hagrid's dead would provoke the most emotional response from Harry and my readers ;-). |
weasleysrcool
Wednesday 17th August 2005 00:57 | Per Asperissima Ad Astra |
| Wow, that was a powerful chapter. Harsh is more like it. Poor Harry, he's down trodden and practically defeated. Ah, but here's the rub, he has a power the Dark Lord knows not. LOVE. Once his true love comes around, nothing will stop him. I can't wait to see how you turn things the corner and bring him back, and how you use Ginny. This is shaping up into one of my favorite stories. Keep it going. |
Delfino
Tuesday 16th August 2005 15:56 | Per Asperissima Ad Astra |
| Wow. Kinda depressing, but I LOVED IT!! That's really sad, isn't it? Anyway, this was awesome, please, please, please update soon!! |
| Wednesday 17th August 2005 00:56 | Per Asperissima Ad Astra (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you find it depressing. I nearly bawled my eyes out writing it. |
happydog
Tuesday 16th August 2005 15:36 | Per Asperissima Ad Astra |
| Well, if you're going to explain, hurry it up already! :). Good story! Keep going!
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| Wednesday 17th August 2005 00:55 | Per Asperissima Ad Astra (Author Response) |
| Sorry, can't. I don't want to spoil the fun for you. |
anniep
Tuesday 16th August 2005 14:47 | Per Asperissima Ad Astra |
| This is so sad--I'm surprized Harry hasn't thrown himself in front of a scarlet steam engine by now!
Is Tom back in Ginny's head, or is she honestly being this lousy to Harry? Looking forward to your next chapter.
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| Wednesday 17th August 2005 00:54 | Per Asperissima Ad Astra (Author Response) |
| Good question. |
wyadra
Tuesday 16th August 2005 13:01 | Per Asperissima Ad Astra |
Oh, you are just so cruel.
One thing, do you really think Ginny would not notice a voice in her head?
Apart from that, i am really liking this "alternative" look at you original idea. |
| Tuesday 16th August 2005 13:32 | Per Asperissima Ad Astra (Author Response) |
| Oh, of course, she does notice. After all, she reacts to what the voice tells her, she thinks about it etc. - But you'll have to continue reading to find out the reason, I'm afraid. |
Nimloki
Tuesday 16th August 2005 12:20 | Per Asperissima Ad Astra |
Wow! I take back the intense comment. It is dark and calling this
intense would be an understatement. I hope your beta(s) hurry because I
can't wait to see where your vision takes us.
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| Tuesday 16th August 2005 13:27 | Per Asperissima Ad Astra (Author Response) |
| Jenadamson is at it. - Glad you find it gripping. |
