Jazz
Thursday 23rd July 2009 14:51 | I Can Read You Like A... |
| I love all your stories with everyone's different POV's. It's always interesting to know what everyone was thinking at the same moment, |
gymnastgal19
Friday 26th October 2007 20:41 | I Can Read You Like A... |
interesting!
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Wooster
Sunday 26th March 2006 20:34 | I Can Read You Like A... |
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Ok, no time to review properly...must...read...
This has definitely grabbed my interest!
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PHsname
Thursday 25th August 2005 19:10 | I Can Read You Like A... |
fairly well done...not exactly what i'd picture Ginny as, but still...u did well, and i laughed on more than one occasion...haha.
one thing tho...the descriptions seemed to move a bit fast...i felt like i was watching some kind of synopsis at the start of a serial TV show or something, u know, where they go, "previously on..." or something.
either that, or i was reading through it too fast...hmm...
anyway, good job!! moving on to Ron now... |
Fuzzy
Friday 19th August 2005 22:53 | I Can Read You Like A... |
| Kool!Everything was so vividly described, I almost felt like I was Ginny! |
| Monday 22nd August 2005 05:54 | I Can Read You Like A... (Author Response) |
| Great! Hope you get the same feeling from the other chapters. |
Gin-Jess
Thursday 18th August 2005 19:42 | I Can Read You Like A... |
I love it!! It's a great story. And for some reason, Ginny is rarely in character. She is soo in character in the fic. Nicely done. I have one critique: "Harry and I going for a walk" "Bill and I will have a long talk" I know you've heard this many times from teachers and whatnot, but it is important. But generally, it was a brilliant chapter.
Gin-Jess |
| Monday 22nd August 2005 05:47 | I Can Read You Like A... (Author Response) |
When writing in the first person, I often find myself ignoring the rules of grammar - more often with Ron than others, I must admit
Thanks for the review! |
Jacynthe
Thursday 18th August 2005 11:22 | I Can Read You Like A... |
A nice start. I think you have Ginny's voice just right. Are you planning to give us the othe three perspectives as well? Quite a challenge for you to keep them distinct.
One small but important mistake you should fix if possible : when you write "Harry and I went back out to the meadow, and Harry told me things about my second year I didn't know." You really mean 'my first year' (Ginny's first -- Harry's second).
Looking forward to more ...
j |
| Monday 22nd August 2005 05:45 | I Can Read You Like A... (Author Response) |
Um... Whoops
As you can now see, all four characters got to have their say.
Thanks for the review! |
martita
Thursday 18th August 2005 08:39 | I Can Read You Like A... |
| This was really funny! I know I shouldn't start a WIP that's Pre-HBP, but when I saw your name on it, I knew it would be good, so I read it anyway, and this is really promising. Looking forward to the rest of it! |
| Monday 22nd August 2005 05:44 | I Can Read You Like A... (Author Response) |
| All done now! Thanks for the review. |
