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Aimee Granger
Friday 26th August 2005 08:03 | Life After the Old | Hi,
Excellent begining. Please carry on with this story. I like your writing style and i hope you continue.
Aimee | Cherry
Thursday 25th August 2005 23:23 | Life After the Old | Wow that was great, I hope you will be making more chapters, also I really felt like the charactors were really in charactor, if you understand what I mean, sorry if you can't I not with it. Have you sent the 3 chap to beta? if so hurry up
Cherry xxx | amamama
Thursday 25th August 2005 05:22 | Life After the Old | So... I'm not convinced Harry would work for the Prophet, but ok - it's
your plot. It'll be interesting to see where you take it.
| graup_hagrid
Wednesday 24th August 2005 17:10 | Life After the Old | |
Interesting first chapter.
I've never imagined Harry as a Prophet correspondence, since he has struggled with those who work
at the Prophet for his entire life. Guarding his privacy, and all.
I also can't picture Ron just sitting around learning Muggle-isms. Boys just out of school and freshly
married want to make their mark, and feel they have something to provie.
We'll see where it goes in future chapters.
Thanks for sharing. | jeanne
Wednesday 24th August 2005 06:50 | Life After the Old | | I knew I,d read this fic before,and did you change your "Name " also?as I don,t remember this one.It was ages ago I read it though and you,re no farther along.Will you be completing it this time??I should hope so as it has great potential. | jeanne
Wednesday 24th August 2005 06:42 | Life After the Old | | I knew I,d read this fic before,and did you change your "Name " also,as I don,t remember this one.It was ages ago I read it though and you,re no farther along.Will you be completing it this time??I should hope so as it has great potential. | Wolf's Scream
Tuesday 23rd August 2005 17:56 | Life After the Old | Pretty good. The twins moved their shop from Diagon Alley? Or opened a new one in
Hogsmeade? I look forwar to the next chapter.
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