bleeblahblee
Wednesday 7th April 2010 08:31 | The Flat Above the Store |
| I love it, it's just as good as the 2nd one. Congrats! |
bleeblahblee
Wednesday 7th April 2010 08:30 | The Flat Above the Store |
| I love it, it's just as good as the 2nd one. Congrats! |
cckeimig
Thursday 29th September 2005 22:21 | The Flat Above the Store |
| Wow. Never knew Fred had such poetry in him. Pretty intense. |
| Thursday 29th September 2005 22:29 | The Flat Above the Store (Author Response) |
| Thanks. Yeah, Fred surprised me, too. I guess that's what Angelina does to him. |
Black_White_And_Grey
Thursday 29th September 2005 19:31 | The Flat Above the Store |
| Wow. I hate to say "just wow", as I do for so many fics and this one is just way above the rest I've read- which is quite a feat for me to be able to say! :O I'm a poet myself and I'm just plain jealous. This is ridiculous, this is amazing, it's so powerful... and in the end, it almost made me cry. It's a wonderful poem that could work for anybody's love, I think, even though it's mainly for Angelin and... Fred, right? George? Ahh, who knows. But wow.... in awe. *Shakes head* |
| Thursday 29th September 2005 22:28 | The Flat Above the Store (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much. It is Fred, of course, but George is supposed to be the sensitive one. Who knew? I hope you enjoy chapter 2. |
Cherry
Thursday 29th September 2005 10:05 | The Flat Above the Store |
| So sweet! |
| Thursday 29th September 2005 22:26 | The Flat Above the Store (Author Response) |
| Thank you. I hope you enjoy chapter 2. It should be up soon. |
Cherry
Thursday 29th September 2005 10:05 | The Flat Above the Store |
| So sweet! |
Mariposa
Thursday 29th September 2005 07:47 | The Flat Above the Store |
| OMG this was great! Hot and sweet! I loved it! As I read it I really
felt the emotion intensify and then release and the ending was so
sweet! Great job!
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| Thursday 29th September 2005 08:56 | The Flat Above the Store (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I wanted to capture that feeling of joy, and how it mingles with love. The next chapter will be from Angelina's POV. I hope you like it. |
Sassenach
Wednesday 28th September 2005 11:13 | The Flat Above the Store |
| Very nice. It was sweet, and exotic at the same time. Your words are very poetic and they flow like Shakesperian rhymes. Very good indeed. |
| Thursday 29th September 2005 08:50 | The Flat Above the Store (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much! I was thinking of Shakespeare's Venus and Adonis while I was writing this. |
