Billie Bowtrunckle
Tuesday 11th April 2006 19:00 | Dog Star |
| I enjoyed reading all of the parental reactions. I'd never reallly given it much thought how the news would be taken by each of the Ministry 6's parental figures (with the exception of Harry's). It was nice to see them interacting; it bumped up the drama. But poor Neville! His Gran just left him there in the hospital ward! I hope Neville still has is diary on him so he can fill it up with more angsty thoughts. |
| Wednesday 12th April 2006 13:54 | Dog Star (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review, again,lol. I just thought that none had done the parents view. I'm glad you liked it. I must also tell you that I had only started writting about six months before. (We didn't do literature studies at school.) So a 33 yr old learning from scratch, how to write fic's. Reviews mean more to me than readers know. Thank you. |
tante
Sunday 6th November 2005 13:41 | Dog Star |
Absolutely LOVELY!
I've always maintained that you grow the most brilliant of plot bunnies. You're expressing them beautifully now as well. Here's to many more HWNN fics!
Cheers! |
| Monday 7th November 2005 11:49 | Dog Star (Author Response) |
| Thank you so very much. It was you who gave me all the help and support I ever had. And for that I salute you. |
Delfino
Thursday 3rd November 2005 13:33 | Dog Star |
| This was so amazing. I was almost sobbing by the end of this! Are you continuing this? Please say yes! I'd love to see a confrontation of Mr. Granger with Harry. Amazing writing, keep up the good work! |
| Thursday 3rd November 2005 13:45 | Dog Star (Author Response) |
| Almost!... Almost! I shall have to try harder next time. Yes there are three more after this one. All have never been done (Cross my fingers.) I hadn't thought about when Harry meets Mr Granger. Well I had but that was another fic. (Long may it never see the light of day.) Thank you for the review. It meens a lot. |
Melindaleo
Thursday 3rd November 2005 06:07 | Dog Star |
| I enjoyed this chapter and seeing all the parents reactions. I think what struck me the most, and left a lump behind in my throat was the fact that there was one set of parents missing. I did enjoy seeing Molly defend him so. |
| Thursday 3rd November 2005 13:24 | Dog Star (Author Response) |
| Thank you for your review. To tell you the truth, I'm amazed that readers find things in my fic's even I don't see in there,lol. Hopefully the last one will get you crying buckets. I did and I wrote the thing. But as I'm a man I told my kids I was cutting up onions, LOL. (I have a reputation to keep you know.) |
amamama
Thursday 3rd November 2005 04:56 | Dog Star |
>sniff< Great chapter, wonderfully written emotions.
Gran Longbottom sure is a sentimental old lady... Not! Your
Luna is just as far out as she is in canon - lovely. And Molly...
she's precious, that one. One ferocious mama tiger.
Thanks! I loved it.
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| Thursday 3rd November 2005 13:17 | Dog Star (Author Response) |
| Wow thank you. Way to go Granny damper women. I tried to tie this in with Neville's thoughts. Now you know why he was so upset. If not read the last chapter. (Please I need the reviews. It feeds my ego,LOL.) I just wrote Luna as I see her, bless her. I really do love her. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. The next one is different I hope you like it, I'm afraid none of you will get it. As NO-ONE has done this I promise,LOL. Once agian thank you for your review. |
Arnel
Thursday 3rd November 2005 00:00 | Dog Star |
This is a great look at the parents' reactions. You gave Molly the perfect role as the main "translater" for Mr. and Mrs. Granger; she does very well when she has people to fuss over and educate. On the other hand, I was disappointed that Mrs. Longbottom didn't give Neville an inkling that she was pleased with his actions, that she let him think that he was very much in trouble for going with Harry. It would have been satisfying to me if she'd said something encouraging to him before she left; she is obviously proud of him and for once I think he should know it.
I'm looking forward to your next installment. |
| Thursday 3rd November 2005 13:05 | Dog Star (Author Response) |
| Thank you for your review. I agree with your thoughts about Mrs Longbottom. I also know she fails to see the real person behind Neville. She still looks at Neville as the dissapointing little boy who hardly shows any magical ability. We all know she comes around in the end. Bless her, she really is an old duffer,LOL. Once again thank you for the review. The next chap will get people guessing.lol. |
