hp4-sauce
Thursday 7th December 2006 22:54 | Just Enough Light |
| That was short, very sweet and sad. Very nice. |
luisa
Saturday 18th November 2006 13:43 | Just Enough Light |
| Oh, I wish JK Rowling had let us see stuff like this! It really was lovely, and the end, with Ginny putting fire on the dying embers, that is a very good metaphore for what she does with Harry. I looked into your profile to see if you had more fics and was very sad that you only had one more (a really cute one, by the way)... I'd love to see more of you! |
| Monday 11th December 2006 12:20 | Just Enough Light (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review! I just wanted to let you know I've got stories at the sugar quill, checkmated and simply undeniable under the same name, just in case you're still looking for some other stuff. Thanks! |
mapleandmahogany
Friday 25th August 2006 17:10 | Just Enough Light |
*sigh*
This was lovely. Aren't they just precious?
She wrapped her arms around him, breathing deeply as he pressed against her. She could feel everywhere that he was touching her, and she struggled to commit the feel of him to memory.
Yep. Remember that feeling, Gin!
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aschowin
Thursday 24th August 2006 20:25 | Just Enough Light |
| That was very.... intimate, since I'd hate to say cute. Seriously though, that was a great scene, and the understanding from both perspectives alone made this story worth reading. Really great job! |
pakismith
Wednesday 23rd August 2006 11:41 | Just Enough Light |
I understand Ginny's act, delaying the moment, not now, not yet...
Beautiful story. Thanks. |
hedwig5221
Tuesday 22nd August 2006 21:36 | Just Enough Light |
I like this story...great missing moment and you captured it well...Ginny knows him so well, doesn't she...
Thank you. |
GryffindorDragon
Tuesday 22nd August 2006 11:00 | Just Enough Light |
Cute story.
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keira azul
Monday 21st August 2006 23:02 | Just Enough Light |
| Very sweet. I liked that you have Ginny knowing - she's smart and she knows Harry, she would have known what he would say to her. I'm just hoping that JKR doesn't let her accept it. |
Felix Felicis
Monday 21st August 2006 19:03 | Just Enough Light |
This was a nice litte story. The feeling of their surroundings came across very well - I could really see the scene in my head. I love that you showed Ginny with enough perception to know what Harry was going to say. She must have understood what his plans were, but she wasn't going to let him push yer away... yet.
I really liked it! |
Narumi
Monday 21st August 2006 12:22 | Just Enough Light |
| beautiful. |
EmeraldPrincess
Monday 21st August 2006 10:19 | Just Enough Light |
At the moment before the flames became embers, she pointed her wand at the hearth, and the fire roared back to life.
That line just makes me think, like... I can't really explain it. I just like that line
Loved Your Story!! Good Job!!
(I love missing moments ) |
Arnel
Monday 21st August 2006 06:33 | Just Enough Light |
What a terrific little story! In Harry's section I can feel the loneliness and weariness in the part before Ginny joins him; after she sits down the tone changes to one of comfort. You show just how much she means to him and how reluctant to let her go Harry is. The fact that Ginny knows Harry so well as to wait at the top of the stairs for him is really sweet. Harry is really lucky to have her to care for him; he may not have anyone around to take care of his emotional needs in the next months and I can see just how easily Ginny's ministrations tame the "savage beast" inside Harry's mind. Finally, the full story of Ginny's broom riding brought a smile to my lips. You've imagined the situation beautifully and made it real.
All in all, a fun story to read. |
Novera
Thursday 29th June 2006 18:36 | Just Enough Light |
| awww so sweet |
critmo
Monday 7th November 2005 06:10 | Just Enough Light |
| Sad, but not unlikely. Well done! |
AKissInACrisis
Friday 4th November 2005 14:23 | Just Enough Light |
| I loved this one as well - twas very moving! |
dragon-breeder
Friday 4th November 2005 12:43 | Just Enough Light |
Wow... I love raw emotion that's not too angsty... I really like how you told the story in both POV, and I could kind of feel each of their emotions.
Hugs and Knuts for YOU!
_~*Briana the the breeder*~_ |
aschowin
Friday 4th November 2005 03:00 | Just Enough Light |
| Great missing moment. You wrote this really well, and I can't tell you enough how much I enjoyed it. |
SillyGillie
Thursday 3rd November 2005 18:12 | Just Enough Light |
Really nice job. Aww poor Harry, he should get over his hero-ness and just go with Ginny. *sigh* |
Krypa Dakay
Wednesday 2nd November 2005 20:33 | Just Enough Light |
| Wow, that was so sweet! Harry and Ginny need countless more moments like this. I'll be eagerly awaiting your future postings! |
EJH0904
Wednesday 2nd November 2005 19:20 | Just Enough Light |
| Oh god, I so loved this! Beautiful and poignant AND it left me thirsty for more! I could really see this fitting right in canon as well. Brilliant job! |
Cherry
Wednesday 2nd November 2005 11:29 | Just Enough Light |
| Aww, thats brill! |
Delfino
Tuesday 1st November 2005 17:58 | Just Enough Light |
| Hmm. Interesting. I didn't quite get it, but the writing was amazing. Good job. |
fitzette
Tuesday 1st November 2005 17:49 | Just Enough Light |
Thanks so much for your kind words. They are priceless.
and Antosha, yes, this is set right before the funeral.
You are all wonderful.
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Wild Magelet
Tuesday 1st November 2005 14:38 | Just Enough Light |
| Truly amazing fic. The emotions came across so well; I could almost *feel* Ginny's desperation to ward off the inevitable. It really is lovely; you're a wonderful writer. |
Antosha
Tuesday 1st November 2005 13:07 | Just Enough Light |
Lovely--the repetition of the story, the pain they're both going through in the second scene...
I take it that the last scene is the night of Dumbldore's death, right? |
Antonia East
Tuesday 1st November 2005 12:01 | Just Enough Light |
| That was gorgeous. Beautiful and gentle and sweet. I loved
the ease of them together, the way Ginny knew what was coming (she
must've known) and the simple little story that is just so typical of
what might've happened at The Burrow while they were growing up.
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