Narumi
Tuesday 15th August 2006 17:46 | Sixteen |
"I found something hidden in Godric's Hollow – Mum was a Charms whizz as well as a dab hand at Potions – that I'm keen to slide on your finger, if you'll have me.
That scares me more than facing Voldemort, actually."
... le-sigh. Well done. |
Delani
Saturday 12th August 2006 11:02 | Sixteen |
I know I've read this before but dammit it's so good. Oh I think I triggered the review filter. oh well. It's nothing gushy or over emotional but the sheer emotion it evokes has actually got me choked up. And I don't cry for fanfiction.
Your writing is wonderful, simply put.
Delani |
EmeraldPrincess
Sunday 14th May 2006 22:55 | Sixteen |
OMG!
That was.. so touching!
I think I've fallen for this fic, really, I think I'm gonna end up reading it every time I come accross it!
~Nancy |
BasketKiwi
Saturday 31st December 2005 20:02 | Sixteen |
| Oh!! I loved this one! It was amazingly spectacular! So cute and wonderful and sad and happy, all at the same time! n.n Marvelous job with it. But now I wanna know how Ginny's feeling. Some people write from Harry's point of veiw, and it's really good. And others write from Ginny's and it's good, too. But I'd like to have the same author write both. I really loved the way you wrote this story, so I guess I'd like to read a companion piece about what Ginny's doing at the same time this is going on... Anyway, fantastico! I totally lurved it. xD |
| Monday 2nd January 2006 03:42 | Sixteen (Author Response) |
Thank you muchly, BasketKiwi! I'm delighted you enjoyed this piece and dropped by to let me know.
As for a companion piece... funny you should say that! ;) |
PHsname
Sunday 27th November 2005 23:44 | Sixteen |
wow...it was very well done. if it was "leaping about" at first, it sure as hell isnt now.
very enjoyable read.
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| Thursday 1st December 2005 06:40 | Sixteen (Author Response) |
| Thank you for reading and leaving a review! Yes indeed, the smooth flow is all down to my amazing Beta, Katieay, who points out the 'jolty' bits to me! It would be much the poorer without her touch. |
Delani
Thursday 24th November 2005 21:11 | Sixteen |
Hah. The random-ness and quirks of being in someone's head were great. It had Hary's humor twisted with his darker side written all over it. Well done!
Delani |
| Friday 25th November 2005 09:43 | Sixteen (Author Response) |
| Thank you, Delani, for reading and leaving me such a lovely review! :D |
Arnel
Thursday 17th November 2005 00:04 | Sixteen |
| Oh, man is this good! You have Harry's voice down pat and know just how he thinks. Are you sure you aren't channeling JKR? Thanks for sharing this character study with us. I'll be coming back to read it often. |
| Friday 25th November 2005 09:42 | Sixteen (Author Response) |
| Thanks Arnel, for such a glowing review! I'm very glad you think it's in keeping with Canon!Harry. |
cckeimig
Wednesday 16th November 2005 21:02 | Sixteen |
| Wonderful story! I love it! |
| Friday 25th November 2005 09:40 | Sixteen (Author Response) |
| Well, thank you very much, CC! :) |
Ima Quidditch Fan
Wednesday 16th November 2005 11:24 | Sixteen |
That was amazing. I somehow picture scenese like this being in book 7. Well done! |
| Friday 25th November 2005 09:38 | Sixteen (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much, Ima! (But I do hope Luna doesn't die.) |
critmo
Wednesday 16th November 2005 09:15 | Sixteen |
| Great. Very nice monologue there, very believable, too. Sounds just like the way it might turn out to be. - Full marks on whatever the scale may be. |
| Friday 25th November 2005 09:37 | Sixteen (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much, Critmo! |
Cherry
Tuesday 15th November 2005 23:36 | Sixteen |
Aww, well done! beautiful!
Cherry xxx |
| Wednesday 16th November 2005 04:57 | Sixteen (Author Response) |
| Thank you Cherry! |
VanishingShmink
Tuesday 15th November 2005 23:13 | Sixteen |
| Sorry, forgot to login. I'll say it again -- wonderful story! |
| Wednesday 16th November 2005 04:56 | Sixteen (Author Response) |
| You lived up to your name then! lol. Thanks for logging in to leave a review --t'is much appreciated! |
EJH0904
Tuesday 15th November 2005 18:30 | Sixteen |
*Squee* I loved this story. I especially liked how positive Harry is about the almost insurmountable obstacles in his life and how Ginny is still a huge comfort to him even though she's not physically there with him. Nice job! |
| Wednesday 16th November 2005 04:55 | Sixteen (Author Response) |
Thank you EJH0904. (I had a 'Prisoner' moment typing that! lol Showing my age now!)
Yeah, Harry may have said he and Ginny can't continue being together but I think that when he needs her, she'll be in his head and heart. Thanks for reviewing. |
Sherylyn
Tuesday 15th November 2005 17:33 | Sixteen |
| Gahhhhhh....!! Baffy, this is just so perfect, it's beyond
words. You have perfectly, completely, brilliantly captured
Harry's "voice", and I can just "hear" him in every word of this.
Absolutely amazing, lady!!
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| Wednesday 16th November 2005 04:50 | Sixteen (Author Response) |
Colour me Weasley! Erm, thank you, Sherry.
A review off a Founder!! *faints* |
melray1228
Tuesday 15th November 2005 17:20 | Sixteen |
Baffy, I love it! You have captured Harry so nicely. He sounds just like a guy in his late teens with normal wants and needs, but that angsty quality isn't there. Another great one! Melanie |
| Wednesday 16th November 2005 04:40 | Sixteen (Author Response) |
| Aw, thank you Melanie! I think Harry is learning to lean on his friends and yet follow his heart --we saw that he has good instincts in HBP and this was what I tried to convey. |
