gymnastgal19
Tuesday 30th October 2007 20:47 | Remember |
wow!!!!! I take it that harry killed voldemort... lol
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pyromain
Friday 10th August 2007 16:37 | Remember |
| A real nice story wraped around one word "remember". |
Uzamaki-girl
Saturday 9th September 2006 18:00 | Remember |
| Wonderful.^^ |
XXXmister-E werepony unit
Wednesday 21st December 2005 11:55 | Remember |
| realy good!is there to be a sequal,or am i unlucky?
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critmo
Monday 19th December 2005 05:46 | Remember |
| Beautiful. But Harry could've been a little more polite. |
EJH0904
Saturday 17th December 2005 10:21 | Remember |
| I love these Post-HBP one-shots! Very nicely done, indeed. |
Arnel
Saturday 17th December 2005 10:16 | Remember |
| Poor Ginny! I suppose no news is good news, but the best news of all is his presence. And with as much as Ginny loves Harry his second request is probably infinitely easier to comply with than the first. Well done, quite fluffy, slightly angsty, and altogether a good read. Thanks for sharing. |
juliet
Friday 16th December 2005 20:09 | Remember |
| I am absolutely speechless, but I will give it a go! This was so simple, yet so powerful. It has taken my breath away - well done.
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blankxinxthexmind
Friday 16th December 2005 17:18 | Remember |
| Wonderful! It's amazing how you can keep everything so vague and yet, we get it. I'm loving this story! |
WeirdSisters
Friday 16th December 2005 14:29 | Remember |
| This story is so sweet and so well written! I hope you write more stories. I loved it and can't wait to read more! |
tante
Friday 16th December 2005 12:52 | Remember |
| Amen to all the the reviews below and I must whole-heartedly agree with Ladybug's astute comments. You have a knack for setting up a scene beautifully. The way you craft sentences is particularly effective in drawing the reader into your story and making her/him feel part of the scene at hand. I can feel it, see it & hear it. You create a vivid image, without resorting to paragraphs of heavy-handed description. I look forward to much more! Brava! |
PHsname
Friday 16th December 2005 00:09 | Remember |
wow...
just...yeah...wow.
very beautifully written, and surprisingly moving chapter.
the ending was perfect...haha.
great job!!
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Ladybug
Thursday 15th December 2005 22:31 | Remember |
| Perfect. I like your use of repetition - three piles of presents, three places at the table, etc, and then understanding didn't ... - they were very effective in building her sense of waiting and hoping. I also love the practical details (A bad mood was poor reason to risk frostbite.) which made it so much more realistic and not just an emotional trip. Those practical details made the emotive words so much more powerful, i.e. this sentence - Her memories were blurred around the edges and the echo of their voices grew softer by the day. - was so much more meaningful and powerful in the story than it was on its own in the summary. Love the twist in the end - the whole piece was about remembering until he needed to forget - wonderful! |
aschowin
Thursday 15th December 2005 22:09 | Remember |
| I liked this story, it has a somber tone, which carries well with Harry's return from battle. Good Job. |
Wild Magelet
Thursday 15th December 2005 19:43 | Remember |
| This was lovely; sad, but lovely. Brilliant job. |
paladin
Thursday 15th December 2005 14:34 | Remember |
| This
is a really great scene. I enjoyed how you put Ginny in isolated,
cold surroundings and then brought warmth to it with her memories and
her love for Harry. Well done!
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zoltan42
Thursday 15th December 2005 14:24 | Remember |
| He, not they. I guess it's not hard to assume what he wants to forget.
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Kokopelli
Thursday 15th December 2005 13:45 | Remember |
Lovely - thanks for sharing this.
JEC
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