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mollyw4 Wednesday 3rd October 2007 07:52 | Harry Potter and the Rampage of Ages | I just found this story. I'm really enjoying it. This chapter was particularly good. Thanks for sharing. | Lindaleeann Monday 1st October 2007 11:33 | Harry Potter and the Rampage of Ages | There's a typo that you may want to correct if you can: "continued as if he hadn't been uninterrupted..." Professor Dumbledore speaking to Ginny at her first Occlumency/Legilimens lesson in his office.
Otherwise I find the story well written and intriguing enough to forgo the housework I need to be doing and reading instead. | GryffindorDragon Thursday 10th August 2006 09:03 | Harry Potter and the Rampage of Ages | Nice one with Harry and Ginny invading Voldie's thoughts. But I think you're making Ginny a little on the weak side, unless Hermione is wrong and overreacting in what she tells Ron . If they made both Voldie's and Dumbledore's combined legilimency rebound, why weren't they seeing Dumbledore's thoughts, too -- a little convenient glitch there .
| daniel_r_crazy22 Sunday 4th June 2006 19:25 | Harry Potter and the Rampage of Ages | Poor Ginny. | Jake Tuesday 20th December 2005 20:52 | Harry Potter and the Rampage of Ages | Great story so far, I like the idea of double teaming occlumency and legilemency. Keep up the great work and update soon!
-Jake
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