Rocky235
Wednesday 18th January 2006 20:08 | Through a Dark Mirror |
The cat, Smokey knocked my pumpin juice over the computer. Now that it's dry all the stories seem a bit short. lol
This looks to be a lot of fun. |
Eressea
Sunday 1st January 2006 22:50 | Through a Dark Mirror |
| Cool fic. I loved the serious Lockhart! When you started on Ginny, I thought she'd die as a baby or something. It's so sad that she died in the Chamber. Why didn't Harry save her? |
| Tuesday 3rd January 2006 21:01 | Through a Dark Mirror (Author Response) |
| The Harry from this universe couldn't speak Parseltongue. :)
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paladin
Monday 26th December 2005 19:56 | Through a Dark Mirror |
| Great
job at catching your audience's attention. This is a very interesting
storyline and I look forward to it unfolding as you post new
chapters. I love the fact that it starts out with something
F&G created. I can just see their faces looking at each other with
and 'oops' look.
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EmeraldPrincess
Saturday 24th December 2005 14:57 | Through a Dark Mirror |
So... Every1 is alive??
And er--- you no what im just going to wait till the next chapter comes out.
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Fisherdima
Saturday 24th December 2005 10:54 | Through a Dark Mirror |
Wow! Really great idea, i'm very interested. But the thing you need to make better are characters emotions, thoughts (Harry came to know that Ginny is dead, but he doesn't seem to be very sad ) and maybe you are making plot run a little bit faster than it needs. |
| Saturday 24th December 2005 12:58 | Through a Dark Mirror (Author Response) |
Heh. That's because he's being shuffled around too quickly to properly experience anything other than confusion and frustration. He also knows it's not his Ginny, so he's upset but not devastated.
As to why Harry could come to Albus when he's Chancellor of Medicine -- that will probably be revealed as the chapters unfold. Once we hit Derailment, the emotions are going to be a lot more promounced. and just you wait till chapter4, if you want emotions. Heh.
As for the plot moving quickly -- that's the nature of the story. :D
Thanks for reading!
Sorting Hat
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XXXmister-E werepony unit
Saturday 24th December 2005 08:36 | Through a Dark Mirror |
whens neville gonna show up?
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| Wednesday 4th January 2006 20:41 | Through a Dark Mirror (Author Response) |
| In chapter 5. :)
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Jake
Friday 23rd December 2005 21:37 | Through a Dark Mirror |
Well other than being just as confused as Harry, all I really want to
know is why Harry could come to Dumbledore whenever he needed...if
Dumbledore is head of St. Mungos. The story is well written and
intriguing, keep up the great work.
-Jake
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cckeimig
Friday 23rd December 2005 21:16 | Through a Dark Mirror |
| Wow, very cool twists so far. As confusing for us as for Harry... |
