gymnastgal19
Sunday 31st August 2008 10:28 | The Last of the Horcruxes |
wow... that was intense...
at least they made it out alive...
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lacyrachil
Monday 27th November 2006 11:17 | The Last of the Horcruxes |
| While I find your imagination very well in tune, I just don't find this story or more so the characters believable. Harry would never outright kill anyone, even Malfoy. I don't know that I'm following the logic here. Keep writing though. |
| Monday 27th November 2006 11:36 | The Last of the Horcruxes (Author Response) |
While I find your imagination very well in tune, I just don't find this story or more so the characters believable. Harry would never outright kill anyone, even Malfoy. I don't know that I'm following the logic here. Keep writing though.
Before OOTP, I would've agreed with you. Since then, I think he's definitely been given the mindset that some people deserve to die. The next confrontation between him and Snape in canon should be interesting. |
tante
Sunday 29th January 2006 06:57 | The Last of the Horcruxes |
This is a very exciting chapter and great fun to read. I particularly enjoyed the way Harry and Ginny worked together.
The addition of Malfoy was a lovely bit of thinking. Your characterization of him is well done. His speach and end are quite fitting. It was satisfying to see him meet such an awful end, especially as he seemed to smugly confident in his cold-hearted success.
It's very difficult to keep Harry down. And, nigh impossible when Ginny's at his side. Great Chapter. |
| Tuesday 31st January 2006 07:40 | The Last of the Horcruxes (Author Response) |
Thanks.
This part was kind of fun to write. |
Bagelz
Friday 27th January 2006 13:57 | The Last of the Horcruxes |
| Harry as the punisher with no remorse or feelings ... could he be the next Dark Lord? I wouldn't think he'd leave anyone to die, outside of Voldemort maybe, but Snape ... interesting. I won't comment on Malfoy as most of us really don't want him alive anyway - fun chapter! |
| Saturday 28th January 2006 15:03 | The Last of the Horcruxes (Author Response) |
But ... he's been systematically eliminating the Death Eaters. Snape's an interesting case, as it was his reporting of the prophecy that directly lead to the Potters dying, he personally killed Dumbledore, and he made Harry's life a living hell for 6+ years.
While I can personally come up with reasons for Snape to be evil as well as good, in this particular universe, Snape is evil. Harry did what no one else in the Wizarding World had the ability or stomach to do.
It should be fun to see how it really comes out in the end. |
snuffles007
Friday 27th January 2006 11:08 | The Last of the Horcruxes |
| Great chapter! I liked the action sequence quite a bit. I guess that we'll just have to wait and see if Harry and Ginny run into Snape again, or is he really dead? Keep the updates coming! |
| Saturday 28th January 2006 14:57 | The Last of the Horcruxes (Author Response) |
| Nope. He's really dead. |
Ladybug
Thursday 26th January 2006 23:59 | The Last of the Horcruxes |
| Oh goodness! Can I let my breath out now? That was amazing action! A bit of justice all round, eh, with Harry getting Sectumsempra thrown back at him! I got chills when Draco threatened to make a horcrux and when I finally reached the end and look at the title ending again I gave a sigh of relief - I hope this will be the end of the horcruxes. Right? Thanks for an intriguing story and a great idea - go Harry! |
| Friday 27th January 2006 07:16 | The Last of the Horcruxes (Author Response) |
Thanks for reading.
I hadn't really thought if it that way, but it is kind of poetic justice that Harry got hit with the same curse that he used on Draco, isn't it? |
