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Friday 10th February 2006 09:46 | Through a Dark Mirror | | This is a complicated story with an intricate plot. I can't wait to see how it unravels. keep up the good work! | paladin
Wednesday 1st February 2006 18:58 | Through a Dark Mirror | Great job with this chapter! I liked the edginess between H & Double-H, but then they find common ground to meet in the middle. I have really enjoyed your swapping of characters and how they impact each universe. You spun a good ending to the chapter as well. The various emotions felt, scenes viewed and thoughts experienced gave that hurricane/vortex feeling that the portkey travel you've described.
I can't wait for the next installment! | XXXmister-E werepony unit
Wednesday 1st February 2006 13:53 | Through a Dark Mirror | | yay!cant wait for chappy six! this is gonna be good | Evelyn
Wednesday 1st February 2006 08:30 | Through a Dark Mirror | So far, things haven't been too unclear, so I hope I'll understand the rest, too. I trust you to explain it properly!
This is still an intriguing story. | Jake
Wednesday 1st February 2006 05:24 | Through a Dark Mirror | I'd say the first part was more confusing, I think you should name the multiple Harry's or have them choose nicknames, it's what I did in my multiple Harry fic. It makes things A LOT less confusing. Keep up the great work!
-Jake | praesul femella
Tuesday 31st January 2006 20:06 | Through a Dark Mirror | | So Harry's back homoe now? Interesting chapter, I wonder why Harry's double didn't want to talk about Sirius. Poor Molly. | | Tuesday 31st January 2006 21:27 | Through a Dark Mirror (Author Response) | Yes Harry is back home. No, this isn't the end of the story, for those who might want to know. NOW things are going to get a bit strange.
As to why Harry's double didn't want to discuss Sirius -- in that universe, Sirius is a death eater. He's done some horrible things which have hurt harry.
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