eggjock
Monday 22nd July 2013 12:37 | Shadow of the Serpent |
| Great beginning, really cool |
gymnastgal19
Friday 8th February 2008 13:12 | Shadow of the Serpent |
well that was an interesting chapter
i hope that stephan comes and helps harry.... and i wonder what dumbledore and albus's history is... doesnt sound good
whats hunters destiny...
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Narumi
Wednesday 13th June 2007 10:12 | Shadow of the Serpent |
| That poem is absolutely incredible! And the 'legend'- wow, that took some serious planning. And sneaky! But it works so well! I'm majorly impressed, I can't wait to read more now! A totally different angle on the prophesy, and tying it into mesoamerican cultural legend as well- fascinating! Hunter seems to be very much like Harry, especially in his relationship to Dumbledore- hopefully this will help them to connect. You've set the stage for a very interesting story. I can't wait! |
Aqua Fountain*
Monday 12th March 2007 06:42 | Shadow of the Serpent |
It was prophesied that Xolotl would return the true Prince to the world, ultimately saving it from destruction at the hands of the evil sorcerer, Tezcatlipoca. Xolotl is of course Stephen, Tezcatlipoca is Volemort and the Prince is Harry. Right?
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Dumbledore is so cruel to remind Stephen about his dead wife and son.
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Interesting... |
Patches
Sunday 4th March 2007 23:52 | Shadow of the Serpent |
| This is a great beginning to this story. I read the first story and I am looking forward to this sequel. Thank you for writing. p |
GryffindorDragon
Thursday 14th December 2006 14:05 | Shadow of the Serpent |
'as you very well know' -- aren't Dumbledore and Harry the only ones who know the prophecy?
Interesting legend, nice twist on Quezlcoatl.
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| Saturday 16th December 2006 21:42 | Shadow of the Serpent (Author Response) |
| Good catch. Maybe you should read and and find out exactly why DD would write that... It proves to be important later. |
Believer
Sunday 20th August 2006 19:27 | Shadow of the Serpent |
| This is so great! I'm so excited to find out how this story plays out. I wonder what past demons put Hunter and Dumbledore against eachother? I'm liking this new prophecy too. Very intriguing. |
lorgbb
Saturday 17th June 2006 00:34 | Shadow of the Serpent |
| those verses in the beginning were really cool, and the little background story was nice too. can't wait so im gonna start reading the rest hehe |
daniel_r_crazy22
Friday 2nd June 2006 15:36 | Shadow of the Serpent |
| Nice, begining. I was debating if I should start reading the story, and I did. So I hope it is a good one. It sounds good so far. |
| Saturday 3rd June 2006 02:14 | Shadow of the Serpent (Author Response) |
| Thanks. You should read the first story Home Alone: Shadow Rising first. It's archived here at PS. Much of this story will make sense then, especially by the end of Home Alone. The story is set in the summer over one weekend. The events from that weekend are followed up in this story. |
IHateSnakes
Friday 31st March 2006 13:15 | Shadow of the Serpent |
| Great start, it certainly got my attention! S. |
sweety_sorbey
Monday 27th March 2006 08:26 | Shadow of the Serpent |
| I really love this story - it's one of my favorites. Can't wait to read more! |
mary-v
Tuesday 21st March 2006 19:56 | Shadow of the Serpent |
| *whistles* Woah... very, very interesting debut. |
Anakin
Sunday 5th February 2006 12:50 | Shadow of the Serpent |
| intersting... is Hunter an immortal, or just a decendent? What's Harry up to now? Can't wait to read more. |
| Sunday 5th February 2006 17:57 | Shadow of the Serpent (Author Response) |
| Hunter is not immortal, nor is he a decendent of the people on the island. He is English, an ex-auror, and in many ways he is an older version of Harry. He's lost a lot in the First War with Voldemort and that's the reason he left the Wizarding World behind. The first 15-16 chapters chronicle the growing realtionship and trust between Harry and Stephen Hunter, with some mystery and action, angst and romance (via Harry's connection with Ginny), etc... in the chapters to come. The next chapter will be up in a few days or you can check it out on a different site. I publish on SIYE, WT, FF, SQ, and Checkmated. Please leave a review whereever you read. I love to hear what people think, even the negatives (however, being human... I'd rather hear the positives, lol...). Thanks for reading! |
