potters_love_redheads
Wednesday 12th August 2009 00:37 | Monster |
| OH MY GOD! Ok I was going to wait until the end of the last chapter to review but - HOLY CRAP! Haha this is such an awesome story! Charlie and Neville gay - I could have guessed with Charlie and I was thinking so with Neville too if JKR hadn't said anything. Mrs. Weasley being head of the Order; dude after Bellatrix she so should have been. And Luna being Dumbledore AND McGonagall's grandaughter!!! Holy Crap!! It was so amazing, so many shockers, just had to express my incredulity some how! I'm loving it by the way Luna and her blase attitude are great, but I think Ron's comment at the end there was the best I can't wait to finish!! |
gymnastgal19
Monday 11th August 2008 22:42 | Monster |
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D.A.D.A.chik
Monday 21st January 2008 09:47 | Monster |
| oh, ronald. so nieve/ |
Patches
Thursday 25th October 2007 15:43 | Monster |
| That was amazing. Mrs. Weasley has really covered everything that needed to be covered. Ginny is solidly supporting Harry. Hermione has gotten Ron in trouble over Lavender. Luna, as always is the blatant voice of truth. I look forward to the scene with Harry and Dumbledore's painting. That will be very interesting. Who would have thought that Dumbledore and McGonagal had a daughter and that she was Luna's mother? That is one idea I have never seen before. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. p |
GryffindorDragon
Monday 9th October 2006 16:17 | Monster |
Molly is too much . Don't you think that's rot today about women's reputations?
Oi, will someone smack Ron on the head.
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Ladybug
Monday 27th March 2006 05:56 | Monster |
| Ok, I'm just about convinced that you could write pretty much anything and I would enjoy it and believe it. I love the idea of Molly being head of the Order. She certainly has the commanding nature for it! But really, Ron stole the show in this chapter - fantastic. How are Ron and Ginny different? Ron looked as though he’d just smelled one of Slughorn’s fouler potions, while Ginny looked as though she’d just seen a unicorn. Great! |
AmandaM
Friday 24th March 2006 21:30 | Monster |
“So, Mum,” Ron said, “does Neville get to cook in here because he’s gay, or what?”
Sorry to be quoting your own story back to you, but you have the PERFECT ending sentences. It's just such a comic relief sort of ending to the serious content of the rest of the chapter. And leave it to Ron to burst out with something like that.
Good work! |
cckeimig
Thursday 23rd March 2006 20:54 | Monster |
| Oh, yeah, and the surprise about Luna being A & M's granddaughter was just icing on the cake. Nev being gay was almost anti-climactic with all of that going on. I must say, though, that Ron's last comment was perfect...kind of put the candles on the cake, to stick with the same metaphor. |
cckeimig
Thursday 23rd March 2006 20:51 | Monster |
| Good Lord! Talk about your surprises! Molly Weasley as the new Head of the Order of the Phoenix! Very cool. Can't wait for the next chapter, and I just know I'm going to be grumbling for a sequel. |
ironicofoeva
Wednesday 22nd March 2006 15:58 | Monster |
| Uh-May-Zing-Guh! write more please you are an incrdible write and must must must write more |
Milygo
Wednesday 22nd March 2006 14:54 | Monster |
| I just caught up. Yeah! The last three chapters were excellent. I love where you're taking the story, even the part with Luna and Neville (Especially how thier coming with). I can't wait to read more. It's a nice break from my hectic work schedule. |
Jacynthe
Wednesday 22nd March 2006 13:05 | Monster |
OK ... this chapter lays it on a bit thick for my personal taste (was it really necessary to make Molly Head of the OofP AND Luna the grandchild of Albus and Minerva?), but Ron's last comment makes up for it all.
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critmo
Wednesday 22nd March 2006 05:24 | Monster |
| Full of revelations. You've really outdone yourself finding surprises for everyone. - Poor Ron. |
| Wednesday 22nd March 2006 10:49 | Monster (Author Response) |
Full of revelations. You've really outdone yourself finding surprises for everyone. - Poor Ron.
Hee!
Yes, Ron does try.
And this chapter felt like a farce at times--one jaw-dropping revelation after another. It was great fun.
Thanks for the continued feedback! |
roastpuff
Tuesday 21st March 2006 19:10 | Monster |
Ron = tact.
Love the statement. |
| Wednesday 22nd March 2006 10:48 | Monster (Author Response) |
Ron = tact.
Yes, Ron does have a sense of timing as well, doesn't he? |
Guns 'n' Ginny
Tuesday 21st March 2006 18:41 | Monster |
I think that all of these chapters are perfectly written.
And not to sound like a compleat idiot (even though I am), was it stated in the books that Nevel was gay?
Because if they did, then I mjst have missed it... =/ |
| Wednesday 22nd March 2006 10:51 | Monster (Author Response) |
I think that all of these chapters are perfectly written.
And not to sound like a compleat idiot (even though I am), was it stated in the books that Nevel was gay?
Because if they did, then I mjst have missed it... =/
No! No! You haven't missed anything--but they never state that he's straight, either, and for the purposes of this story (not least Luna and Ron's comic bits), it worked well.
I'm glad you're enjoying the fic! |
Dizzy Lizzy
Tuesday 21st March 2006 17:42 | Monster |
| Brilliant! I'm gobsmacked!! Luna was amazing!!! |
| Wednesday 22nd March 2006 10:51 | Monster (Author Response) |
Brilliant! I'm gobsmacked!! Luna was amazing!!!
:-D
I really love her. In case you couldn't tell!
I'm glad you're enjoying the story! |
hermionegreen
Tuesday 21st March 2006 16:46 | Monster |
I loved this chapter!!! especially the line about the woman's rib ... immediately brought to mind the rib that eve was given from adam. Keep up the good work.
'Mione |
| Wednesday 22nd March 2006 10:53 | Monster (Author Response) |
I loved this chapter!!! especially the line about the woman's rib ... immediately brought to mind the rib that eve was given from adam. Keep up the good work.
'Mione
I wasn't sure if anyone would catch that connection.
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the fic.
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bjon66
Tuesday 21st March 2006 16:42 | Monster |
Great chapter... i'm liking your Luna better and better..lol.. Also i like your opinion on the way boys and girls are percieved differently.. Its a lot better now than it was when i grew up... You wouldnt belive some of the stuff i was told...lol
I think you had Molly handle the situation very well.... I can't wait for the next chapter....... |
| Wednesday 22nd March 2006 10:55 | Monster (Author Response) |
Great chapter... i'm liking your Luna better and better..lol.. Also i like your opinion on the way boys and girls are percieved differently.. Its a lot better now than it was when i grew up... You wouldnt belive some of the stuff i was told...lol
I think you had Molly handle the situation very well.... I can't wait for the next chapter.......
Thanks! It was a real challenge to keep Molly in character... and not have her pull the "HOW DARE YOU MAKE MY CHILD A SCARLET WOMAN" rant that I think one would expect.
And I'm sure I'd believe some of the stuff you were told! |
Lillie Ann Potter
Tuesday 21st March 2006 16:12 | Monster |
| Wow!! That whole Neville's gay thing is awsome! Though he never struck me as a- well, what ever you call them- but, I love the whole Albus/Minerva idea. And the Luna and Dumbledore thing blew me away! It was an AMAZING chapter! |
| Wednesday 22nd March 2006 10:57 | Monster (Author Response) |
Wow!! That whole Neville's gay thing is awsome! Though he never struck me as a- well, what ever you call them- but, I love the whole Albus/Minerva idea. And the Luna and Dumbledore thing blew me away! It was an AMAZING chapter!
Glad you enjoyed the chapter! I felt as if I were setting up an elaborate mouse trap that kept going off an unexpected moments--all of those revelations! XD
And come one--would you REALLY be surprised to find out the DD and Luna were related? |
