Patches
Thursday 25th October 2007 16:30 | Monster |
| That was a very interesting interview for Harry and Dumbledore. I like the fact that Harry and Ginny are not the only ones who wear each other's hand prints. It is good that Dumbledore is going to talk to Molly. That way Harry won't have to stumble around and probably say too much. It is also good that Dumbledore admonished Harry to not try to save his friends and love by distancing himself from them. That would be so wrong. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. p |
mione_weasley
Wednesday 11th April 2007 18:19 | Monster |
This story is too good to have this one small error: "he is not nor never was craven." I don't know if it's too late to change typos like this, but this is a double negative and should be either "he is not and never was craven" or "he is not nor ever was craven."
But especially hear the first part of that criticism. This is a great, very well-written fic, with unique and creative theories. Also, although there is stuff I seriously doubt is going to happen in DH, you still manage to make it seem like it could be canon. Everyone is wonderfully in character and the little details are terrific. I especially enjoyed the scene with Harry and Hermione on the landing.
Typos are expected in fanfic, and I normally wouldn't give feedback like spotting a double negative...it's just that everything around that error is so...not erroneous.
Anyway, I have to go finish the story now. Fine job so far! You're raising the bar. |
GryffindorDragon
Monday 9th October 2006 16:36 | Monster |
'hunting enchanted objects' -- I think that would tip Voldemort off very quickly as to what Harry was up to .
Nice chat with Dumbledore .
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IHateSnakes
Monday 27th March 2006 10:21 | Monster |
| Excellent! |
Ladybug
Monday 27th March 2006 06:20 | Monster |
| How satisfying to get Dumbledore back for some counsel - isn't magic wonderful! Masterfully done. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Sunday 26th March 2006 20:18 | Monster |
| i like it. i cant wait for the epiloge. |
daisymom
Sunday 26th March 2006 17:10 | Monster |
| I like how you started the story, picking it up from number six. Can't wait till you finish it! |
critmo
Sunday 26th March 2006 08:50 | Monster |
| Sorry, last comment was mine. |
critmo
Sunday 26th March 2006 08:49 | Monster |
| Sorry, last comment was mine. |
Dizzy Lizzy
Saturday 25th March 2006 23:39 | Monster |
I like how, after all the \"shocks\" of the previous two chapters, you\'ve done a great job in tying it all together. And I\'ve a soft spot for Luna, good to see her having a starring role in the last threechapters.
Lizzy |
jgkitarel
Saturday 25th March 2006 22:58 | Monster |
Nice series you got going here.
I like how you have Luna as Dumbledore's granddaughter, it makes so much sense. |
EmeraldPrincess
Saturday 25th March 2006 17:50 | Monster |
This is soo good!
You brought out everyone's characters so well!
And Neville Gay? Is Charlie also gay?
That was a big surprise
Well..
Update soon!!!
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AmandaM
Saturday 25th March 2006 16:55 | Monster |
The amount of emotion that you convey with your stories is brilliant. I love the way I can almost FEEL what the characters are going through after reading your description.
My only criticism of this chapter would have to be that Dumbledore's speeches were a bit difficult to read sometimes. Lots of elevated language, perhaps a bit more than was strictly necessary.
Absolutely love the story so far, hope to see another update in the near future! |
cckeimig
Friday 24th March 2006 18:32 | Monster |
| Absolutely wonderful chapter! I look forward to the next. |
Dragonmage
Friday 24th March 2006 04:05 | Monster |
'Brilliant'
Thats all I have to say.
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bjon66
Thursday 23rd March 2006 22:43 | Monster |
| LOL,, That Mr Weasley- Harry talk went a lot better than mine ahh so many years ago...lol.. A betting pool on their relationships,, good one... Too bad the story is almost over,,, could use another 20 or so chapters..lol |
hermionegreen
Thursday 23rd March 2006 21:59 | Monster |
A most awesome chapter. Thanks for the update. I hope Harry and the others remember to have a little fun as they go about this nasty business of destroying the horcruxes.
'Mione |
