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Ladybug
Saturday 8th April 2006 23:44 | Can it Get Any Worse? | | Oh, yes, I thought James and Sirius (and Peter) were perfect! Loved ALL your dialogue, no need to apologise for it. The different perspectives from the Blacks/Potters senior regarding the Duel was great. And, don't know if you'll think this kooky or not, but I found this chapter rather fluffy! Yes, I just loved James' attitude and thoughts about Lily - perhaps it's blokey fluff, rather than the more commonly written girly fluff. Great work - eagerly awaiting more! | | Tuesday 11th April 2006 06:00 | Can it Get Any Worse? (Author Response) | | Fluffy? Thanks. James is still a bit of a at this point, but he IS serious about Lily and if Sirius doesn't get this into his head soon there Will Be Trouble. Next chapter has Remus in - hope you like him as well. Thanks for the lovely review. |
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