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Ladybug
Monday 17th April 2006 02:39 | Dog Star | | Gosh, it's not very pleasant to read about, but it sounds very realistic to me. Well done on giving us a dark and horrible chapter. I think it's interesting to see how Voldemort came out of that encounter at the Ministry - he's still powerful, but I think your description is perfect - how he is frustrated and weakened as well. Bellatrix gives me the shivers - she is just plain evil. Good job. | | Monday 17th April 2006 11:52 | Dog Star (Author Response) | | Thanks for the review. I tried to portray Bella as the victim in all of this, but try as I might, she just kept on getting more and more evil,lol. In the end she actually enjoyed her punishment, go figure. There is just one more left that ties itself to Harry's point of view. I hope you will like it. |
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