Patches
Tuesday 27th March 2007 15:13 | Follow Your Heart |
People do the stupidest things in times of stress. Ginny and Harry are meant for each other. Voldemort is the biggest flea in the soup, ever.
Thanks for writing. I look forward to what happens when Ginny goes in to see Harry. p |
Bookworm
Sunday 30th July 2006 16:42 | Follow Your Heart |
| You've outdone yourself!!! Great chapter! |
southpaw
Monday 26th June 2006 17:57 | Follow Your Heart |
That was a gut-wrenching chapter. I love Ginny forever but that was a bad choice. I hate seeing these two hurting. Nice twist haveing those three teach DADA, i like it. Nice work with the characters so far.
You are definitely on my email update list now. I hope you write more soon. |
PHsname
Tuesday 23rd May 2006 00:03 | Follow Your Heart |
Wow...the dialogue you write is very good...
I'm thinking this in comparison to many authors. For example, the scene in which Ginny gives Harry her ultimatum...As soon as I saw that coming, I was afraid of another cheesy exchange of professions of love and whatnot.
Instead, I was pleasantly surprised with dialogue that was very believable, and didnt make me feel like my teeth were rotting uncontrollably. Everyone likes fluff, I just happen to not like it particularly when it makes one cringe.
So...great job!! |
Wooster
Monday 1st May 2006 06:14 | Follow Your Heart |
| Can't make long review...must...find...out..what...happens! |
EmeraldPrincess
Tuesday 18th April 2006 22:20 | Follow Your Heart |
You should write a story about Harry teaching, I love fics like that.
There so interesting when you read about him teaching, to seew how he would react to a crowd of students. Unlike the DA when they were his classmates...
*sigh*
Update soon! |
| Wednesday 19th April 2006 01:16 | Follow Your Heart (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the read! Updates will always come on a Monday! Please look for it then. |
paladin
Tuesday 18th April 2006 04:53 | Follow Your Heart |
Awesome chapter!
You carried the tenor you built up in the first chapter over to this chapter very well and transitioned nicely into Ginny's reflections. The dialog and scene from the wedding conveyed great emotion to various degrees. Describing facial expressions and body language really helps in trying to imagine yourself in a similar situation; you provided that here. The conflict withing Ginny is great and I am looking forward to what you have in store.
~Great job! |
Tesgirl123
Monday 17th April 2006 21:09 | Follow Your Heart |
| I'm confused...Harry, Ron and Hermione were teaching at Hogwarts while in their 7th year? That doesn't sound like it makes much sense but I like the angst and I like the steadfastness on Harry's part. Keep it up! |
| Wednesday 19th April 2006 01:19 | Follow Your Heart (Author Response) |
Uh...yeah. It all falls into the category sprung from my imagination. I wanted to build Harry up as a great teacher, but he still needs the help of his friends.
Plus, the level up in status means they can go in and out of Hogwarts as they please to search for the you-know-whats.
Thanks for the read!
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EJH0904
Monday 17th April 2006 18:58 | Follow Your Heart |
| Man, this is good! Please PLEASE hurry with the next update! This cliffies are killing me!!! |
ImmortalPhoenix
Monday 17th April 2006 12:34 | Follow Your Heart |
Ok I have one thing to say; UPDATE!!!! I can't wait until next Monday to continue reading... PlEASE????... PREttY PlEASE???
ok anyway if you couldn't tell already I love this chapter and I absolutely love the story. If all of your chapters come to be this great, you will be the author of my favorite story.
Update asap please!!
Kortnee |
critmo
Monday 17th April 2006 10:43 | Follow Your Heart |
| Well, that's extremely difficult. The idea is intriguing, of course, but you'll need to explain very carefully why Ginny was so very touched by Harry the one moment and presents him with an ultimatum the next second, PLUS blaming him for the result afterwards. If you don't, she'll come across as a spoilt little girl, because she obviously didn't listen to what he was saying. She could have argued, but she only made things worse by giving him the choice between two extremes. Not a good strategy, if you deal with someone as desperate as Harry, and not one I would have expected from the Ginny we know from the books. |
daisymom
Monday 17th April 2006 07:09 | Follow Your Heart |
| Oh man, you did it again. Why can't you post more then just one chapter? I really can't wait to see what else happens! Great job on this chapter! |
