Majyk
Monday 19th April 2010 17:14 | Lost |
| This story is coming very close to making me cry, its good though. Although I could use the assurance that Harry isn't dead and that, at some point, he'll come back |
Clare
Tuesday 8th December 2009 21:50 | Lost |
| wow ginny is heartbreaking in this story and it is written so well |
| Tuesday 1st January 2002 05:11 | Lost (Author Response) |
| thank you |
gymnastgal19
Saturday 20th September 2008 23:41 | Lost |
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| Sunday 21st September 2008 05:43 | Lost (Author Response) |
| thank you |
blue_and_white_witch
Sunday 31st August 2008 07:53 | Lost |
| I just feel so heartbroken for Ginny, this is so sad, she is truely lost without Harry isn't she? |
| Tuesday 2nd September 2008 05:52 | Lost (Author Response) |
| Indeed, they are truely two sides of the same coin. |
gymnastgal19
Thursday 14th February 2008 06:49 | Lost |
| nice chapter! Im glad that gin stood up to her mom... I can understand why molly is like that and i think that it is partially true. |
| Saturday 16th February 2008 03:54 | Lost (Author Response) |
| Well it would have been a very short story if Ginny hadn't stood up to her mother. |
LisaPotter
Wednesday 6th June 2007 18:20 | Lost |
whoa. in a way this is something like that one story by legobean. harry dissapeared.... i only wonder if he is still alive...
signed,
AKA: LisaPotter |
| Sunday 24th June 2007 01:34 | Lost (Author Response) |
in a way this is something like that one story by legobean.
I have to confess I don't have time to read much so comparsions to other authors are lost on me. |
brown_eyes
Tuesday 10th April 2007 08:34 | Lost |
| What an exceptional and unique storyline. Ginny's story is heartbreaking and the way your writing draws the reader into the action, it can't help but tug on the heart strings. |
| Wednesday 11th April 2007 09:05 | Lost (Author Response) |
| They say you hurt the characters you love the most, and things will get worse for her before they get better, so that speaks volumes to what I think of her as a character. |
Patches
Friday 23rd February 2007 02:26 | Lost |
| This is a good story. I look forward to see where you go with it. Thanks for writing. p |
| Saturday 24th February 2007 03:40 | Lost (Author Response) |
| thank you |
Dragen
Monday 12th June 2006 12:18 | Lost |
| Great chapter, I hope Ginny dose find Harry, as they both should be happy after what fate had handed them in life. |
| Monday 19th June 2006 15:19 | Lost (Author Response) |
| I think everyone hopes Ginny finds Harry, but as with all stories there's always the odd twist. |
Wooster
Friday 9th June 2006 01:31 | Lost |
| Ginny's heartbreaking in this story. Simply heartbreaking. She's so disconnected without Harry you simply can't help but ache for her losses. Poor thing. I hope she gets a happy ending. |
| Sunday 11th June 2006 16:18 | Lost (Author Response) |
Poor thing. I hope she gets a happy ending.
Here's to hoping. |
cckeimig
Thursday 11th May 2006 16:45 | Lost |
| Very harsh, and therefore rather realistic, in my opinion, as far as how she'd be if this happened... |
| Sunday 14th May 2006 06:39 | Lost (Author Response) |
Thank you for the review.
I always like to think my story are realistic so your words mean a lot. |
hpgirl7777
Friday 28th April 2006 20:57 | Lost |
| This story is great so far; can't wait to read what's next. Keep up the great work. |
| Saturday 29th April 2006 04:40 | Lost (Author Response) |
| cheers for the review. |
ViviRed75
Thursday 27th April 2006 17:31 | Lost |
I really like it. Your portrayal of Ginny is exactly on mark, imho. I can't wait to see how you develop her character as she goes through the stages of mourning. And, of course, the twist...is Harry alive, or isn't he? That's the question I can hardly wait to be answered until the next update!
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| Saturday 29th April 2006 04:38 | Lost (Author Response) |
Your portrayal of Ginny is exactly on mark,
I think characterisation is the most important thing in fiction.
And, of course, the twist...is Harry alive, or isn't he?
You'll find out very soon. |
juliet
Thursday 27th April 2006 05:21 | Lost |
| Exceptional storyline - I look forward to seeing how this will progress. |
| Saturday 29th April 2006 04:34 | Lost (Author Response) |
Exceptional storyline
wow, thank you. |
Arnel
Thursday 27th April 2006 01:23 | Lost |
| I read both chapters this morning and have been thinking about it all day. I love Ginny's response to Harry's question in the Prologue and think she's very Gryffindor to tackle the refugee camp. I'm looking forward to more chapters no matter where your narrative takes Ginny because your characterizations of her and her family are beautifully written. |
| Saturday 29th April 2006 04:32 | Lost (Author Response) |
I read both chapters this morning and have been thinking about it all day.
I'm truely honoured.
I love Ginny's response to Harry's question in the Prologue
I actually thought her answer may get a bit of a backlash.
and think she's very Gryffindor to tackle the refugee camp.
I think the one thing you can never doubt is Ginny's bravery.
I'm looking forward to more chapters no matter where your narrative takes Ginny because your characterizations of her and her family are beautifully written.
Thank you very much for the high praise. |
Wild Magelet
Wednesday 26th April 2006 18:16 | Lost |
| Wonderful writing and a very intriguing, original plot. I'm looking forward to seeing how things progress! |
| Saturday 29th April 2006 04:27 | Lost (Author Response) |
Wonderful writing and a very intriguing, original plot.
It's always good to be original. |
timbers
Wednesday 26th April 2006 14:19 | Lost |
K, its a wonderful story and I'm glad to see it posted!
-LVC |
| Wednesday 26th April 2006 16:06 | Lost (Author Response) |
| Thanks mate. |
eaglesnest
Wednesday 26th April 2006 12:06 | Lost |
| This is a really good story. I really like the time you take to explore Ginny's and others' feelings and emotions. Your writing style is engaging and draws you into Ginny's world of coping with her dreams. The initial angst is sensitive but hopeful .... not really dark, a hard fact to achieve. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story, ther seems to be so much more to go. |
| Wednesday 26th April 2006 16:05 | Lost (Author Response) |
Thank you.
initial angst is sensitive but hopeful
there are small parts of hope in all the angst.
I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story, ther seems to be so much more to go.
Indeed, we've only just got started.
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parakletos
Wednesday 26th April 2006 11:50 | Lost |
| Great to see this posted, welcome to Phoenixsong. |
| Wednesday 26th April 2006 16:03 | Lost (Author Response) |
| Cheers mate. |
willow
Wednesday 26th April 2006 09:58 | Lost |
i really like this- it's a great start being both interesting and intriging!
i can't wait for the next chapter, to see how the story starts to unfold!
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| Wednesday 26th April 2006 16:01 | Lost (Author Response) |
| thank you and I can promise you a few for twists before the end. |
Curren
Wednesday 26th April 2006 09:25 | Lost |
| feel the same way... great start! |
| Wednesday 26th April 2006 16:00 | Lost (Author Response) |
| cheers |
