potters_love_redheads
Thursday 18th March 2010 10:39 | Rusalka: Red Silk |
| Wow, very intense and quite mysterious. Nice work! |
Uzamaki-girl
Sunday 3rd September 2006 14:10 | Rusalka: Red Silk |
| This was truly haunting. Especially since I was listening to "Possession" by Sarah McLachlan. Brilliant writing.^^ |
| Sunday 3rd September 2006 18:27 | Rusalka: Red Silk (Author Response) |
This was truly haunting. Especially since I was listening to "Possession" by Sarah McLachlan. Brilliant writing.^^
Wow! Interesting combination!
Glad you found this fic... effective. ;-) |
DaFalcon
Wednesday 2nd August 2006 19:44 | Rusalka: Red Silk |
| This was very interesting. |
cckeimig
Thursday 22nd June 2006 12:55 | Rusalka: Red Silk |
| Wow. This was absolutely amazing! |
critmo
Sunday 30th April 2006 11:14 | Rusalka: Red Silk |
I like it, but:
“It’s fine,” she said, and he nodded.
Isn't that a bit anticlimatic? |
Ladybug
Sunday 30th April 2006 00:54 | Rusalka: Red Silk |
| Fantastically creepy and sinister! I loved it. What a tragic back story, though. I loved Ginny's thoughts about the whole wedding attack and Harry - I wonder if they also had anything to do with the spirit coming to her, along with Harry's own nightmare? Gosh, I love Fleur - she is just awesome - flaming Veela fireball and conjured blanket both. Thanks for a very different and powerful little piece. |
amhta
Saturday 29th April 2006 10:22 | Rusalka: Red Silk |
| that was amazing. I definetley was not expecting that. "Lily" started off so nice, and I loved how you subtley changed her to very creepy, and finally downright scary. It was very believable. And I loved Harry's ending reaction! |
Evelyn
Saturday 29th April 2006 07:48 | Rusalka: Red Silk |
I loved the descriptions here, all the adjectives that Ginny uses...
"And heaven forbid that Harry ever be cried on. Stupid git wouldn’t have the slightest idea what to do." Nice allusion to Cho.
It's a wonderful story. |
Delani
Friday 28th April 2006 22:46 | Rusalka: Red Silk |
"completed"? surely you jest..a piece as poignant, sinister and fabulous as this could surely not be completed...no? *sigh* alright, so I'm a wishful thinker, but you should think about what I said...I think.
Delani |
Milygo
Friday 28th April 2006 16:58 | Rusalka: Red Silk |
| Another good one-shot. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for writing itn. |
Astrid
Friday 28th April 2006 14:32 | Rusalka: Red Silk |
The explanation of the creature from Fleur, and the bit about Harry's nightmare, and Ginny's curiousity to the creature... all that is a little confusing. Maybe it's just me.
Otherwise, I LOVE this. It's so creative and so haunting. The details and the descriptive language are excellent. Good work! |
