eaglesnest
Saturday 9th December 2006 22:25 | Neither Can Live |
| Ch.1&2 Good opening to an angsty romance while getting ready to chase the horcruxes. There is alot of humor and lightness mixed in with your tension. Dudley and Petun ia supplied some tender moments. Charlie and Tonks are as loveable as ever and gave harry a friendly heads up of the difficult disxussions to come with the twins and then Ginny. I do hope that harry turns around sooner rather than later. I really like it when Ginny gets involved in the horcrux hunt. |
GryffindorDragon
Wednesday 1st November 2006 09:33 | Neither Can Live |
'Buy you'll have to watch' -- But you'll . . .
Interesting . . . Charlies seems to be the calmest. Gred and Forge obviously have something planned . Poor Ginny . . . back to her 1st crush awkwardness.
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| Wednesday 1st November 2006 14:25 | Neither Can Live (Author Response) |
I'd try to pass it off as obscure british slang, but... the fact is, humans are fallable, and spellchecker software doesn't CARE...
I had to tread a fine line with Ginny. I don't want to paint her as a victim, but she can't be completely unaffected either. I hope I can pull it off |
daniel_r_crazy22
Tuesday 27th June 2006 12:32 | Neither Can Live |
| That was prob. the most akwardness I would hate to endure. |
IHateSnakes
Friday 19th May 2006 09:50 | Neither Can Live |
| Nice story, keep it up. S. |
aschowin
Thursday 11th May 2006 19:45 | Neither Can Live |
| I thought this chapter was fun, with all the awkwardness, but it did seem a little rushed, not terribly though. I really enjoyed the conversation with Charlie, and the relationship between Harry, Ron, and Hermione. You did a great job writing this. It will be interesting to see where this strain between Harry and Ginny leads. Can't wait for more, well done. |
cckeimig
Thursday 11th May 2006 15:48 | Neither Can Live |
| Excellent tension so far between Harry and Ginny. I think you're doing a great job so far. Especially because there are so many fics about this time period out there. I look forward to the next installment! |
obsidiana
Thursday 11th May 2006 02:16 | Neither Can Live |
Oh, very nice I can't wait to find out where you are going with this one.
Thanks for sharing I am really liking the addition of Charlie.
Sid |
Milygo
Wednesday 10th May 2006 19:23 | Neither Can Live |
| Good first two chapters. I think the interactions between the characters have been perfect so far. I can't wait for more. |
