lacyrachil
Tuesday 5th December 2006 13:02 | A Picture Paints A Thousand Words |
| Nice abstract story. Thanks for writing. |
| Tuesday 5th December 2006 13:04 | A Picture Paints A Thousand Words (Author Response) |
| Thanks, glad you liked it. |
aschowin
Saturday 27th May 2006 11:27 | A Picture Paints A Thousand Words |
| Great job. This was well written and really enjoyable to read. It's bittersweet to think about Dumbledore like this. It may have started as a drabble, but this turned out great, I'd actually like to read more. Well done. |
| Saturday 27th May 2006 13:38 | A Picture Paints A Thousand Words (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review and I'm glad you enjoyed it! |
Connor Landon
Wednesday 17th May 2006 20:15 | A Picture Paints A Thousand Words |
| This is really good, but it also makes me feel hopeless and helpless for the Trio. Dumbledore was all-powerful and nearly all-knowing and he could do ANYTHING! But now without him...I dunno how Harry etc. can possibly survive Lord Thingy. You just made all these thoughts resurface and I needed to get them out. I very much enjoyed the PoV switching that you had going on. Great work! |
| Saturday 27th May 2006 13:37 | A Picture Paints A Thousand Words (Author Response) |
| Sorry to make you feel hopeless but don't fear thinks too much, because as Harry says in his segment he does survive and triumph! Thanks for the review and I'm glad you enjoyed it! |
Kari Lynn
Wednesday 17th May 2006 20:10 | A Picture Paints A Thousand Words |
| Wow, I really love the way you portreyed each characters mindset. For a first-person I think you could have worked on more character-oriented diction, but regardless you had the situations and their feelings spot on. Awesome piece. |
| Saturday 27th May 2006 13:35 | A Picture Paints A Thousand Words (Author Response) |
| Thank You, glad you enjoyed it! I was specifically trying to keep the word count down so I had to make some compromises, or I would certianly have made some other tweaks. |
lucky_black_cat
Wednesday 17th May 2006 12:27 | A Picture Paints A Thousand Words |
| That was amazing! I like this kind of introspective fics, they always put a smile on my face. It's extremely well-written, by the way. The short sentences (In Ron's paragraph, for example) express the finality of it all. Good job! 10 out of 10. Keep up the good work! Thanks! -Sonia |
| Saturday 27th May 2006 13:29 | A Picture Paints A Thousand Words (Author Response) |
| Wow! Thanks for the lovely review. |
Evelyn
Wednesday 17th May 2006 05:26 | A Picture Paints A Thousand Words |
| Very enjoyable! |
| Saturday 27th May 2006 13:27 | A Picture Paints A Thousand Words (Author Response) |
| Thank You, glad you enjoyed it! |
tante
Tuesday 16th May 2006 17:06 | A Picture Paints A Thousand Words |
*raucous applause*
Absolutely Brilliant Bart. I can't choose favourite lines, I'd have to cut and paste the entire thing in the review.
It was powerful, insightful and emotional. Practically perfect in every way. |
| Saturday 27th May 2006 13:27 | A Picture Paints A Thousand Words (Author Response) |
| Wow! Thanks for the lovely review. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Tuesday 16th May 2006 16:33 | A Picture Paints A Thousand Words |
| umm. that was differant than i expected. im not saying it wasn\\\'t good, just differant, i have a question, well more like a statement typ question. the first person, is that McGonagall?, 2nd, Hermione?, 3rd, Ron?, well it says it is, and 4th, Harry which i know is. |
| Saturday 27th May 2006 13:26 | A Picture Paints A Thousand Words (Author Response) |
| Thank You, glad you enjoyed it! No the second person was Snape. |
critmo
Tuesday 16th May 2006 08:05 | A Picture Paints A Thousand Words |
| Very well done, feels quite realistic. The changing perspectives work nicely. |
| Saturday 27th May 2006 13:25 | A Picture Paints A Thousand Words (Author Response) |
| Thank You, glad you enjoyed it! |
