webster Wednesday 17th March 2010 08:52 | Irony |
Delightful Story, great ending! It's always nice to see Fudge get what's coming to him |
jeanne Monday 6th October 2008 08:44 | Irony |
Since you are still submitting, you will get this little bit. How did not only you but your betas miss the fact that Hermione was reading a 'tomb' and not a 'tome'? Not a very light weight object to be reading from was it, mmmm!? |
Prongs739 Friday 22nd August 2008 10:13 | Irony |
WOW! |
gymnastgal19 Friday 2nd November 2007 20:16 | Irony |
I loved this story! I take it that when harry fainted, it was because that hermonie told him that he may end up becoming MOM?
loved the ending!!!
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Astrid Sunday 18th March 2007 15:12 | Irony |
Haha, love it. |
Astrid Sunday 19th November 2006 21:58 | Irony |
Fun stuff. |
Pottercope12 Monday 23rd October 2006 19:01 | Irony |
Very Interesting. Like I said in The Wrinkle In Time you are a good I writer and I look forward to reading more of your storties. Good Job!! |
crazyredhead Sunday 30th July 2006 21:38 | Irony |
lol thats good 12 kids i always knew harry wanted a big family. I love this chap. So much i dont know were to start. I like how everything went. it was funny. and great. i like harry's job too |
Wooster Sunday 30th July 2006 08:20 | Irony |
I love this story. It's kind of silly, kind of funny, and absolutely perfect. Definitely worth the reread. |
Jorgie Tuesday 23rd May 2006 15:41 | Irony |
Very good story I enjoyed it could there be a part Three? maybe 20 or 50 years later? |
snuffles007 Monday 22nd May 2006 20:45 | Irony |
Very nice story. I loke how you worked in that favorite old line of Trelawney's. Keep it up! |
critmo Monday 22nd May 2006 02:31 | Irony |
Okay, that does explain Fudge. I didn't get the fact that Harry's triumph over V. had remained a secret. - Amusing idea. |
red5 Sunday 21st May 2006 23:19 | Irony |
*joyous whoop*
just the way every good story should end.
although i must ask...you've left us clues that she's already preggers, haven't you, Mr. Tricksy Intel?
anyways, brilliant job as always, and looking forward to your next works. cheers! |
Antosha Sunday 21st May 2006 13:13 | Irony |
Twelve kids? Guess Trelawney was right!
Raw deal for Ginny though... |
willow Sunday 21st May 2006 06:15 | Irony |
loved this! i especially loved the fact that roteen produce just appeared from the local grocery in time to hurl at the aurors when they took harry away- very convenient
never saw harry as minister- bet that would make for an interesting plotline (i wasn't hinting that you write it by the way, but as we're on the subject...! just kidding).
look forward to reading more of your work- are you updating 'the first horcrux' soon? |
martita Sunday 21st May 2006 01:57 | Irony |
Hehe. Jolly good ending. This was a pleasant story, and an enjoyable read. Good work. |
Stormrider Sunday 21st May 2006 01:20 | Irony |
So, since Fudge had him tried on 3 charges of using an Unforgiveable, does that mean he's spending 3 life terms on Azkaban? That sounds...unpleasant. And I take it that the addendum to Contra Proferentum is how Harry made Minister?
I remember one story where Fudge was tried and convicted of fraud; 10 years in Azkaban per count, to be served consecutively. Did I mention he was convicted on 2,597 counts? 3 days later he hung himself.
(Same story, Dolores was convicted and sentenced to...I think 7 consecutive life terms, plus community service, just in case.) |