gymnastgal19
Monday 3rd March 2008 16:28 | The Seventh Horcrux |
yay!!! Im glad that that horucrux was found and destoryed.... and that they are going home now
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zoemcfoe
Monday 3rd September 2007 22:01 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| Absolutely brilliant--your work gives me chills. It's been weeks since the publiction of DH, and I've been in serious Harry Potter withdrawal. Finding this story was like stumbling across another book 7. Thanks so much for the gift... you are an amazing talent, and I wish you all the best in your future writing efforts. I'll look forward to reading any other fanfics of yours, and hope to someday see your work at my local bookstore as well! |
tsujton
Thursday 30th August 2007 15:45 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| That was so exciting! |
gridley
Friday 20th July 2007 15:48 | The Seventh Horcrux |
The lady is indeed supposed to mark her champion. I'm glad you put that in.
Of course, being an SCA nut myself... |
RavenRayne
Wednesday 6th June 2007 11:03 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| I love your work and I have read all of it. You must be channeling some of JKR creativity, as this scene seems to be depicted right on the cover of the book!! It is a shame and, I suppose, compliment that people are sending this story around as the real deal. I have made sure to link all of this leaked nonsense back to this site and tell people that you put a disclaimer on EACH page to let them know you are just borrowing the characters and having some fun. Keep writing. I throughly enjoy your righting! Maybe you'll be able to pick up where JRK leaves off. |
| Wednesday 6th June 2007 13:01 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
Oh, thanks so much! Hee - I was a bit stunned when I saw that cover myself, lol.
Thanks so much for spreading the word about the leaked version, I do appreciate that.
There is a site called PotterFicWeekly that does podcasts of certain fics. They are about to start TSH (this weekend, I think). There is a forum where you can post some comments to be discussed in the podcast. |
siobh007
Tuesday 2nd January 2007 08:11 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| I've always had a weak spot for dragons..so I guess I won't be very neutral or impartial by saying Hurray! |
lacyrachil
Tuesday 21st November 2006 12:31 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| Great chapter. I love the action with a hint of the romance. Great. |
tsujton
Monday 23rd October 2006 18:32 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| The broom disappearing- I didn't expect that. And that's why I love your writing! |
simsanta123
Sunday 10th September 2006 23:41 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| It is superb!!!!! |
ninkenate
Wednesday 23rd August 2006 08:04 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| Wonderful scene. I love the use of a dragon. And Harry can feel the magic. He needs to tell his friends to keep that to themselves like Moody said. I bet that Muggle man out for a walk was Simmons. Voldy will know now and will be watching them. I wonder what kind of punishment his death Eaters will get for this. I'm glad they're all going back to headquarters but I fear Molly's wrath for them. I hope they can hold up under the pressure especially Hermione. She caved when Harry went to Godrics Hollow; let's hope she doesn't again but she is a different person now. Two thumbs up |
critmo
Saturday 5th August 2006 07:54 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| A replay of the first task? - I'm afraid that Ginny got her history right, but you didn't. The Parthenon is a temple with a rectangular layout, it does not have an arena and the roof isn't open, so Harry couldn't possibly "soar into the blue sky". - Quite a lucky stroke that the dragon could eliminate the horcrux ... |
| Saturday 5th August 2006 08:57 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
Here's the link I used for the information and picture of the Parthenon:
http://academic.reed.edu/humanities/110Tech/Parthenon.html
From that photo, I think it would work fine. |
DanAngelus
Thursday 29th June 2006 16:08 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| Aww wow brilliant! Finally got back in to catch up, this was a very well done chapter. Another Horcrux done and dusted.. as they say.. I love your work so far, you really are a talented author and you are fast becoming one of my top favourites! |
graup_hagrid
Tuesday 13th June 2006 19:32 | The Seventh Horcrux |
Wow, Triwizard tournament, part 2.
Good job on this chapter. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Tuesday 13th June 2006 13:12 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| Cool dragon. Nice save by the way to. I loved it! |
Summer Daisy
Monday 5th June 2006 06:04 | The Seventh Horcrux |
Awesome chapter! I really didn't see the destruction of the Horcrux coming but it was a great idea. Kinda reminded me of Lord of the Rings -- the only way to destroy The Ring of Power was the Crack of Doom (or whatever it was that destroyed it in the end) or from fire from an ancient dragon. So the Horcrux kinda worked like that.
And of course, the twisted side of me somehow likes to see Harry get severely injured. Not sure why. I'm just weird lol! At least Mrs Weasley's maternal instincts towards an injured Harry should override her fury! And the fact that Ginny remains unharmed should also pacify her.
Nice work! xoxox |
Spark Soliton
Sunday 4th June 2006 16:26 | The Seventh Horcrux |
Hi Melindaleo. Yet another belated review I'm afraid, I'll have to see what I can do to reverese this lamentable trend. But now onto the important stuff: the review!
This was a ROCKER of chapter - I mean WOW! This is like the best ever - forget chapter 34 of PoE and chapter 29 of CoD, as good as they are they don't hold a candle to the nail-biting action is this chapter!!! I swear that after I had read the action of this chapter I was thinking that this was up there amongst the best action-scenes I've seen on cinema, like Ob-Wan/Qui-Jin/Darth Maul lightsaber duel in Episode I or the climatic Obi-Wan/Anakin lightsaber fight at the end of episode III - it felt that real and vivid and powerful and fast and furious and tense and WOW, basically. I could write praise-words for a long time and still not be able to convey properly how much I loved the action between Harry and the Dragon - to qoute Ron "Bloody brilliant!"
The whole set up of the chapter, the way you told it made the tension almost palpable and real - a real nailbiter. I think you captured the characters aboslutely spot on and your story-telling rocks like KISS, Iron Maiden, Aerosmith, Rolling Stones and The Who all playing at the same time - unbelievable!!!
Your writing has matured immensly and this is so impressive, so PROFESSIONAL it's scary. If authors like Dan "Da Vinci" Brown can make zillions on other peoples stories I don't see why wouldn't be able to make it as a pro! I would certainly pay to read your books!
Excellent stuff, thanks for writing and sharing this!!!!!!!!!!
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jeanne
Sunday 4th June 2006 07:11 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| End of the seat adventures. This was great. I read the shortest horcrux fic[2 chapters], last night. it was the best short fic ever. Yours is the best long fic ever. I await updates anxiously, Thank you for this one. No reply necessary. just know I am enjoying it. J. |
Wolf's Scream
Friday 2nd June 2006 22:32 | The Seventh Horcrux |
Excellent -- I like the way Ginny's coming to appreciate that her mother really is "tough." And the scene with the dragon -- I was wondering ('til you explained it) why Harry & Ginny didn't set out to double-team the critter from the start.
Yeah, there were some serious injuries -- wonder how Hermione's hair that was lost will grow back: will it be bushy, like what was lost, or something else? -- but none quite mortal.
Molly & much of the rest of the Order are likely about to freak. |
| Sunday 4th June 2006 15:08 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Molly and the Order are coming up next. Yes, Ginny's beginning to see her mother through grown-up eyes - always a painful part of reaching adulthood, right? |
patch
Friday 2nd June 2006 08:20 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| This is gonna sound massively nit-picky, but there's no such dragon as a Siberian Scythe-tail in Cannon, JKR named all the Dragon kinds in FBWFT and the Serb doesn't make the cut. |
| Friday 2nd June 2006 08:31 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Yep, it's called creative license. Since I'm writing this one - I get to make stuff up. |
parakletos
Friday 2nd June 2006 05:48 | The Seventh Horcrux |
Well after several attempts to read this and then review I've finally nade it
This chapter shows why I'd be no good at a horcrux hunt; I just don't have the imagination for the hiding places. I am really looking forward to the confrontation with Molly in the next chapter.
R |
| Friday 2nd June 2006 06:59 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Yay! Thanks for keep trying to come back despite real life's other plans. Oh, and I think you'd be GREAT at a Horcrux hunt. Once you start writing, the ideas will come. |
jessy
Friday 2nd June 2006 00:28 | The Seventh Horcrux |
wooaaaaaa! that was gr8!
but weren't voldemort's death eaters(crabbe,or goyle....u said previously)guarding these horcruxes! but there was no one there!!!! |
| Friday 2nd June 2006 06:58 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Yep. You remembered something Harry didn't. That will come back to him in the next chapter. |
alannad
Thursday 1st June 2006 18:52 | The Seventh Horcrux |
I so enjoyed reading the last two chapters, I thought the hiding place for the Horcruxe was so perfect just like something Voldemort would do. Your creativity is endless. Great as always.
Alanna |
| Friday 2nd June 2006 06:55 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Aww, thanks! I appreciate that. |
Bagelz
Thursday 1st June 2006 14:26 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| Oh, that was good! Nice excitement, a little shot on impatient Hermy, and a real life Horcrux! All the good makings of a great story, woot! |
| Friday 2nd June 2006 06:54 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Hee, thanks! I like Hermine when she gets impatient, too. |
gwenstarr
Thursday 1st June 2006 13:09 | The Seventh Horcrux |
great chapter!! that was an interesting trap for the horcrux! (or, should i say, for the finders of the horcrux!) anyway, i have a feeling all of the horcruxes will be destroyed on instinct by Harry, even in canon. It makes sense to me, so I like how you did it! I can't wait for the next chapter to see everyone's reactions!
great job!
~gwen |
| Friday 2nd June 2006 06:53 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
I agree - Harry seems to go by instict a lot, and it works for him. JKR has said that Harry's learned more than he realizes, so...
Thanks! |
Xaphania
Thursday 1st June 2006 13:08 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| This was a great chapter - the dragon part was really exciting, and an inventive way for the Horcrux to be destroyed. I'm looking forward to Molly's reaction when they arrive back at Grimmauld Place battered and bloodied. |
| Friday 2nd June 2006 06:52 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I've wanted to do something with a dragon for quite some time, so I'm really glad it worked. |
Arnel
Thursday 1st June 2006 08:36 | The Seventh Horcrux |
I absolutely loved this chapter, Melinda--I love the borrowed chapter title! Oh, my! I have always loved the dragon scene in GoF and this one was just as exciting. You had me on the edge of my computer chair, riveted to the screen and hoping Harry's conjured broom would last, until the action ended. Thank goodness Ginny was with him to identify Tom's dragon (but I couldn't find this breed in Fantastic Beasts, so I'm assuming you took author's liberty to create a creature for your purpose ) and encourage Harry to remember he's a wizard!
Grumpy!Hermione was hilarious. More and more often I find myself feeling much like she was before my morning cup of coffee. And as for Ron's protectiveness of her, his affection and concern went straight to my fluffy spot.
Finally, the mother in me really felt for Molly and the fact that the tigress in her refused to give up looking for her wayward children. I have a feeling that true to Ginny's predictions, Molly's going to have a first class conniption fit when she sees the state of Harry, Ron and Hermione in the next chapter. I can hardly wait. Keep the chapters coming 'coz I'm glued to this story like Harry is to his Horcrux! |
| Thursday 1st June 2006 09:13 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
Squee! Aww, thanks! Yes, you're right - I did make up the Scythe-tip. My middle son is Dragon obsessed and we have more dragon "stuff" in this house than anyone should rightly own, lol. I went through his toys and picked out the parts I liked best, then put together a dragon that suited my purposes. I like the idea of a whip-like tail best.
You're the first to mention grumpy!Hermione, and I'm so pleased. I liked her, too, and I can DEFINITELY be that way in the morning. My oldest son has even asked me if I'd had my tea yet on occasion when I've been snapply, lol. |
siobh007
Thursday 1st June 2006 08:29 | The Seventh Horcrux |
I liked this chapter, although not as much as I usually like your story. I think Harry obtained the horcrux and destroyed it too easily(although I know fighting the dragon isn't an easy task...). Just look at DD's state when he destroyed the ring, or after he drunk the liquid.
ON the plus side, Harry being able to hear the hums of the anti apparition wards and Hermione not, Hermione being a little jealous about it, is nice, it's also consistent with the story.
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| Thursday 1st June 2006 09:09 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Yes, it's true Harry had an easier time than Dumbledore, but Harry had an easier time with the Diary, as well. In fact, he had an easier time than he did here, I think. Somehow, in canon, I think that's related. |
Domain
Thursday 1st June 2006 02:26 | The Seventh Horcrux |
Fantastic chapter!
The best so far!
Ron, Hermione, Harry and Ginny are so In Canon!
You are one of the most talented writers I know in HP Universe. And every chapter you write are here to prove it.
From your admirer
Domain (A K A Dome 36) |
| Thursday 1st June 2006 06:12 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Wow, thanks so much! I'm really blushing now, but I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
honourary_weasley
Thursday 1st June 2006 01:36 | The Seventh Horcrux |
Wow!!
That was like ... like the best of Goblet of Fire, King Arthur, and Narnia, all rolled into one. You are so amazing! I honestly think that was my favourite chapter so far ... the descriptions were intensely amazingly real ... i could smell the smoke, and my heart was beating like crazy when the dragon had Harry cornered.
Another brillian chapter, thanks so much. I just finished my semester exams and really needed a little something to cheer me up. You rock Melinda!
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| Thursday 1st June 2006 06:11 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Aww, thanks. Glad it could perk you back up after your exams. GoF, King Arthur, and Narnia, huh? That's some might awesome company to be in. Thanks much! |
anniep
Wednesday 31st May 2006 22:27 | The Seventh Horcrux |
Draco told Harry (in chap 8) about the four DEs ordered to guard something, which Harry concludes must be the horcruxes. The teens noted the "muggle" repeatedly walking the block around the Smith house. Did it occur to Harry that the walker was probably working for Voldemort, thus confirming that they were in the right location?
Voldemort set up the horcrux protections so that it would be impossible for one person to get to them alone. It makes sense that a loner such as he would develop such a system. I rather think he can't comprehend a horcrux hunter having companions who love him enough to accompany him on such a dangerous task.
Obviously Molly is going to let the kids know her displeasure over their disappearance (after they recover from their injuries), but I think Harry is really going to get it from Remus too.
Fantastic chapter! I especially like how well the four work together. Many thanks for an exciting read! |
| Thursday 1st June 2006 06:10 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
You caught that...but Harry was a bit distracted at the time. Hang on until next chapter
You're also right that Remus isn't pleased with the way they disappeared. You'll see what they have planned next chapter. |
hpiknut
Wednesday 31st May 2006 17:57 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| Whoa, very exciting chapter! What an ordeal on getting that blasted cup! My goodness! Looking forward to the next chapter. I hope Mrs. Weasley isn't too hard on them - LOL! |
| Wednesday 31st May 2006 20:55 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Thanks! You'll get to see all the Weasley's reactions next chapter. I promise. |
met19
Wednesday 31st May 2006 17:55 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| more more more....one of the best if not the best 7th year story i've read...keep the chapters coming...hope one arrives fri or sat for some good weekend reading! |
| Wednesday 31st May 2006 20:53 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Oh, wow, thanks. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Sorry, but I don't think I'll have anything for you that quickly. That's only two days! |
mary-v
Wednesday 31st May 2006 17:14 | The Seventh Horcrux |
Wonderful chapter!! Action packjed and absolutely brilliant!! I was on the edge of my seat!!! And I really can't wait for the next chapter... somehow I think that facing all the Weasleys is going to be just a bit more difficult than facing that dragon.
Again, brilliant work!
~Maria~ |
| Wednesday 31st May 2006 20:51 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| I'm delighted by your reaction, that's just what I wanted to hear. Yes, the confrontation will be tough. |
aschowin
Wednesday 31st May 2006 17:10 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| Great chapter, this was very exciting. I really enjoyed the dragon, and the references to the First Task. It was also very touching how close Harry is with his friends, and with Ginny. Beautiful job. |
| Wednesday 31st May 2006 20:50 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
libertine
Wednesday 31st May 2006 12:57 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| Fantastic !!!!! Thats the best chapter of a fan fic i have ever read and i have read a few. Amazing keep it up |
| Wednesday 31st May 2006 15:08 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Aww, wow. Thanks much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
Ima Quidditch Fan
Wednesday 31st May 2006 12:31 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| Incredible chapter! I loved the battle with the dragon, and that Harry had to accept Ginny's help. Very nice Diagon Alley scene too. I wonder which Harry will think is tougher - the dragon or Mrs. Weasley.... |
| Wednesday 31st May 2006 15:07 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Heh, under normal circumstances, my money would be on Mrs. Weasley. His injuries should work in his favor though. |
bellissima
Wednesday 31st May 2006 10:22 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| My favorite chapter yet. Thanks so much! I am anxiously awaiting the next one. Your imagation is just wonderful! |
| Wednesday 31st May 2006 12:19 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Aww, thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. JKR said Harry's learned more than he knows, right? So, it makes sense to me that somehow the destruction of the Horcruxes should be through vaguely familar things. |
claireanne1234
Wednesday 31st May 2006 07:24 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| I love this story cant waite for some more |
| Wednesday 31st May 2006 09:38 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I'm working on the next one. |
IHateSnakes
Wednesday 31st May 2006 07:14 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| Excellent, Mel, keep up the good work. S. |
| Wednesday 31st May 2006 09:26 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Aww, thanks! I'm glad you're still enjoying it. |
UTChick
Wednesday 31st May 2006 07:01 | The Seventh Horcrux |
Nothing better than the "on the edge of your seat" action!!! That was a great chapter.
With them coming back to Grimmauld place wounded is probably the best way to get Molly over to them. She'll be angry, but more concerned about them being hurt. When they do get better - it should be a heck of a tongue lashing from her.
I like Harry & Ginny needing the constant touching. I think that will be important in pursuading the Order that they need to be able to continue their private quest as adults.
I just really like this story. You write so well. This is a pleasure & a great start to the day!!! Thanks! |
| Wednesday 31st May 2006 09:25 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Thanks! Yep, Molly will instantly go into "mother-mode" when she realizes they need her attention. Taking care of them a bit should soften her up. One of the injuries is rather serious... |
fraupapst
Wednesday 31st May 2006 06:55 | The Seventh Horcrux |
That was a brilliant action scene, especially the fight with the
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| Wednesday 31st May 2006 09:24 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I enjoyed the dragon part myself, so I"m glad you liked it. |
willow
Wednesday 31st May 2006 06:47 | The Seventh Horcrux |
oo next chapter!! that was so exciting! (i'm all giggly!! ) GO HARRY!! and ginny, obviously...i'm lovely harry's 'detecting' powers, can't wait to see what else he's capable of!!
some fave quotes...
Harry cursed, breathing heavily. “I swore I’d never battle another dragon again as long as I lived.
“Don’t thank me yet,” Ginny said wryly. “For all I know, yellow is the color that will make a dragon charge.”
loving this!
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| Wednesday 31st May 2006 09:23 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Thanks! Harry's insticts are really kicking in, aren't they? I'm glad you're enjoying it. |
Melian
Wednesday 31st May 2006 05:52 | The Seventh Horcrux |
Excellent chapter! Loved it! The best and most believable horcrux hunt scene I've read. You are so good at writing action sequences.
Nice touch with the ribbon and perfect timing on the "I love you."
Please update soon! |
| Wednesday 31st May 2006 09:22 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Aww, thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I really wanted to write a dragon scene, and I'm quite fond of my dragon. |
juliet
Wednesday 31st May 2006 05:20 | The Seventh Horcrux |
That was certainly an action packed chapter, and I loved every minute of it. I am so relieved that Harry and Co will make it back to Grimmauld Place to see Molly - had this horrible feeling that you would kill her off before she got the chance to yell at them!
What is pleasing to read is the mistakes that Harry etc make, and I realise that doesn't make much sense. They shouldn't be expected to know everything and do it all perfectly the first time. I thought the team work and especially their problem solving was brilliant.
One Muggle in particular appeared to be simply out for an evening stroll, passing them every few minutes while on the opposite side of the street, as if he was circling the block.
If it isn't important then why mention it? Who is this muggle and why is he keeping watch?
Hehe...I think the kids have managed to do perhaps the only thing that will stop Molly from screaming at them - three of them are injured, and Ginny will be bringing them back to her to fix up.
So many great things about your writing Melinda... |
| Wednesday 31st May 2006 09:21 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
Kill Mrs. Weasley?? Gasp! Bite your tongue! Who would ensure they all got something to eat?
Good catch on the "Muggle"
You're also right about being hurt - surest way to sooth thier re-entrance is by needing some TLC. |
valeriean
Wednesday 31st May 2006 02:46 | The Seventh Horcrux |
Whee! Yey for the destruction of one horcrux!
This chapter was very very sweet, especially the part about Harry wanting to touch Ginny. I can really see him wanting to feel as close to her as possible. I really feel sorry for Mrs. Weasley...I don't know how any mother can stand having their youngest children in the middle of danger. But they're on their way to see her so I'm pretty curious to see how she'd react. I bet that Ginny was spot on in her prediction.
Great job on this chapter! I think that this horcrux hunt fic is one of the best I've read so far. |
| Wednesday 31st May 2006 09:15 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Thanks! After going half his life without experiencing any gentle, physical contact, I think Harry would automatically seek it - much like a little child does. *shrugs* that's where the thought process came, anyway. Poor Mrs. Weasley is having a tough time. You'll get to see her next chapter. |
Scorcherer
Wednesday 31st May 2006 02:42 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| once, just once I'd like to see Ginny get hurt really really badly for her stubbornes and "I'm not a little girl, I can take care of myself" attitude. For some reason majority of writers make Ginny to bee this allpowerful heroine who's always right and there to save the day.. |
| Wednesday 31st May 2006 09:13 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Hmm...Yeah, I suppose teenagers never act stubbornly or resent being treated like a child, do they? All four of them have made mistakes, and all four of them will continue to do so. If you're looking for them to be hurt....just hang on, there are still three more Horcruxes to destroy. |
martita
Wednesday 31st May 2006 02:24 | The Seventh Horcrux |
Wow, brilliant. I'm so excited! That was an original, yet true to canon way to protect and destroy the horcrux.
Very anxious to see the next chapter
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| Wednesday 31st May 2006 09:08 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I'm thrilled everyone thinks its plausible. I'm working on the next one. |
PHsname
Wednesday 31st May 2006 01:15 | The Seventh Horcrux |
Placing the cup at Hepzibah Smith's mansion was a really interesting idea...along with tying Zacharias Smith to them.
This is definitely the most credible post-HBP horcrux fic i've encountered yet.
Great job!! |
| Wednesday 31st May 2006 09:05 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Aw, wow! Thanks much. I'm delighted you think so. |
hp4-sauce
Wednesday 31st May 2006 00:15 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| Wow! Very cool chapter. Great banter and interaction between the four, especially Ginny and Harry. |
| Wednesday 31st May 2006 09:02 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
sesshoumarusbitch
Tuesday 30th May 2006 23:11 | The Seventh Horcrux |
| Ohhh...Very exciting!!! I can't wait for more. I want to see the reactions when they get back...Please update soon! |
| Wednesday 31st May 2006 08:49 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Thanks! You'll see the reactions in the next chapter when they go back to GP. |
millercommamatt
Tuesday 30th May 2006 22:54 | The Seventh Horcrux |
Very nice. You should have titled this, The Dragon, The Witch, And The Wardrobe. Keep up the good work and don't let Molly be too hard on them.
-millercommamatt |
| Wednesday 31st May 2006 08:48 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
Ha! Oh, that's great - but I didn't think of it. I also forgot to give my nod to the Lion, Witch and the Wardrobe credit. Oops.
I should get you to title chapters for me. I always struggle. |
thisgrlrox
Tuesday 30th May 2006 22:44 | The Seventh Horcrux |
This chapter had everything rolled into one. It started out so sweet with Harry and Ginny craving touches from each other. Next, you almost made me cry with Mrs. Weasley's reaction. I could totally see her fierce determination to find her kids. Then, I was on the edge of my seat when Harry was battling the dragon. I was wondering why Ginny didn't help him. I'm glad you explained that. Again, your Ginny was superb. You have down her wit, stubbornness, and loving nature. I love reading her.
Poor Ron and Hermione. I am a bit stressed about her being okay. I knew that they jinxed themselves when they were talking about being unharmed. Stupid Karma! I have faith that all will be okay though. Keep up the great work! I can't wait to keep reading. |
| Wednesday 31st May 2006 08:46 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Thanks! The magic wouldn't allow Ginny to leave the stands. Hermione has a bit of recovery time ahead of her, but you'll see that next chapter. |
Gioia
Tuesday 30th May 2006 22:17 | The Seventh Horcrux |
LORDY!! You had me gripping the mouse with all my strength as I watched Hermione and Ron get burnt and then read through that terrifying scene with Harry and the dragon! I'm still keyed up and anxious to see how they are and how they'll recover!
I guess Harry's concern about not being in any condition to allow reporters to catch sight of them after the Horcrux turned out to be prophetic. *shivers* I'll betcha that coming home so injured is going to keep Molly from screaming quite as loudly initially, but what about in the long run? Will it make it harder for her to let them go when they need to return to the fight? Or will she at least feel better knowing that they do come home when they need help?
Anxiously awaiting more! |
| Wednesday 31st May 2006 08:41 | The Seventh Horcrux (Author Response) |
| Yay! That was just the reaction I was hoping for, so I'm so pleased you felt that way. All in all though, what better way for them to difuse Molly's anger than to come back needing her tender ministrations? |
