Dad
Sunday 22nd November 2009 09:59 | Neither Can Live |
| I am not sure how I began reading this story, but I am hooked. I happen to think that the words did just flow for this reader. Onwards and upwards! |
Sheepie_101
Tuesday 17th June 2008 01:47 | Neither Can Live |
| + = LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Ladybug
Wednesday 13th December 2006 06:18 | Neither Can Live |
| This is gorgeous so far, I'm really loving your story. I just adore the little scene after The Kiss, it's quite original but very true to character, I think. The bit at the very end was great - I loved Hermione's elbow! Those boys just don't get it! LOL Lovely writing! |
eaglesnest
Saturday 9th December 2006 22:49 | Neither Can Live |
| Ch.3 Altho' you agonized, I enjoyed. Suffering along with Harry's anguish was not pleasureable but it was well written. He is really struggling and yet you give us subtle hints about his slight confusion or lack of total conviction concerning his strategy with Ginny and even going alone on the hunt for the horcruxes. And that parting tide of wisdom overheard by Ginny was just too much for her. Come on Harry, when are you going to see the light? |
GryffindorDragon
Wednesday 1st November 2006 11:16 | Neither Can Live |
'barring the odd argument here or there' -- like half of third year when Ron and Harry were upset with Hermione over the Firebolt and half of fourth year when Ron wasn't talking to Harry because of the TriWizard Tournament and much of sixth year when Ron was making an of himself with Lavender .
Does Harry realize the advice he's giving Ron is advice he should be taking? Ginny apparently does .
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| Wednesday 1st November 2006 14:25 | Neither Can Live (Author Response) |
| We all know Harry can be a bit dense about things |
Jai-kun
Thursday 31st August 2006 18:35 | Neither Can Live |
"Tale-tell"?
That is actually how I've always spelled it. I read The Tale Tell Heart when I was in second grade, and it stuck |
MercuryBlue
Thursday 31st August 2006 17:19 | Neither Can Live |
| "Tale-tell"? |
| Thursday 31st August 2006 18:46 | Neither Can Live (Author Response) |
"Tale-tell"? (Crud, I reviewed instead of adding to this comment > |
daniel_r_crazy22
Tuesday 27th June 2006 12:43 | Neither Can Live |
| Well. I wonder what is going to happen between Harry and Ginny 'cause they both still have feelings for eachother. And Harry needs to stop caring for others like they are going to die in the next 10 sec. They can die, but, he needs to live one day at a time, and live it happily. |
critmo
Monday 26th June 2006 04:25 | Neither Can Live |
| Interesting speech from Harry there, and Ginny's right of course, but: Harry's a slightly different case from Ron, isn't he? Ron, for example, doesn't have a mental connection to Voldemort. Will you elaborate on that? |
| Monday 26th June 2006 07:35 | Neither Can Live (Author Response) |
Interesting speech from Harry there, and Ginny's right of course, but: Harry's a slightly different case from Ron, isn't he? Ron, for example, doesn't have a mental connection to Voldemort. Will you elaborate on that?
I think it will be elaborated on in the next chapter, depending on if Harry wants to dwell on it. However, Ron is a little... er... dense about interpersonal relationships, don't you agree? |
southpaw
Sunday 25th June 2006 19:46 | Neither Can Live |
| just two questions...Where is the next chapter? How many chapters is the story total? I like it so far, great socialization between the characters! Can't wait to read more as we have a lot more time 'til Book 7. |
| Monday 26th June 2006 07:37 | Neither Can Live (Author Response) |
just two questions...Where is the next chapter? How many chapters is the story total? I like it so far, great socialization between the characters! Can't wait to read more as we have a lot more time 'til Book 7.
The next chapter is still undergoing the tedious process of transferring from brain to computer. The story will be either 5 or 6 chapters long. I think 5, but something new has developed and I may need an extra chapter to explore it. |
hp4-sauce
Sunday 25th June 2006 15:40 | Neither Can Live |
| I meant to say, also, that I thought Harry's memory of him and Ginny following "the kiss" was nicely done and very much in character for both of them. So far you've handled the challenges of the aftermath of the events in HBP very well. Hope the creative juices keep flowing! |
| Monday 26th June 2006 07:38 | Neither Can Live (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much for the review, it encourages me no end! |
hp4-sauce
Sunday 25th June 2006 15:25 | Neither Can Live |
| Well the first three chapters were very good. Well written; and I think you've captured the characters, Harry in particular, really well. |
