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Sunday 9th July 2006 11:22 | Summers with the Dursleys | | That was good. I can't wait to read the rest. | Evelyn
Sunday 9th July 2006 07:27 | Summers with the Dursleys | You fill the missing moments in the book very nicely! I especially like how Harry thinks back to the events from last term (Only would he think of Quirrell as just "hurt"? Wouldn't he think about his death? Feel guilty maybe?).
Anyway, well done. | | Sunday 9th July 2006 07:37 | Summers with the Dursleys (Author Response) | Thanks!
You fill the missing moments in the book very nicely! I especially like how Harry thinks back to the events from last term (Only would he think of Quirrell as just "hurt"? Wouldn't he think about his death? Feel guilty maybe?).
Harry is still only 11 not quite 12. He hasn't yet got used to everyone dyign, also we don't know for sure what happened to Quirrell. He may have fallen into a coma. I don't think Dumbledore told Harry the full extent anyway with his protective instinct.
Anyway, well done. | clancy21
Sunday 9th July 2006 07:06 | Summers with the Dursleys | | Good chapter! Looking forward to reading more... |
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