dogstar
Sunday 10th June 2007 16:52 | Air |
Things are moving on for Oliver, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next but I'm a little worried about that bump on the head.
I'd say Catherine has done very well
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| Tuesday 12th June 2007 00:23 | Air (Author Response) |
Hi dogstar!
Oh yeah, I'm a little jealous of Catherine. Thanks for reading! |
Ladybug
Friday 16th February 2007 07:12 | Air |
| Very enjoyable. I often get bored silly reading Quidditch matches but this chapter kept me interested. I do worry about Oliver's head now, though! I hope he'll be all right. Loved his little gentlemanly display in the pub. |
SillyGillie
Sunday 1st October 2006 22:23 | Air |
| I hope Oliver's alright, I'm glad he has someone to look out for him! |
| Monday 9th October 2006 00:43 | Air (Author Response) |
Hi SillieGillie,
We should all have an Uncle Will looking out for us. Thanks for reading and commenting! |
Evelyn
Saturday 30th September 2006 14:58 | Air |
My first impression wasn't wrong: this is a very enjoyable story! I really like Oliver's relationship with his uncle, and I'm curious about the other team members, how Oliver'll get along with them. Glad he's found a friend already.
But what is that about the coach's daughter? Maybe some ...? |
| Sunday 1st October 2006 20:56 | Air (Author Response) |
Hi Evelyn,
So...the coach's daughter, huh? Should I give anything away? All right, you give me no choice. Yes. There is a bit of fluff ahead for Oliver. But remember, most of this is from Oliver's POV. (And that's all I'm going to say about that!) |
Alena
Friday 29th September 2006 18:55 | Air |
| I'm definitely enjoying this... can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Saturday 30th September 2006 08:34 | Air (Author Response) |
Hi Alena,
Thanks so much for reading and commenting. Ch 3 is already with beta - and this one will have a little Oliver fluff, along with the drama. |
Aggiebell
Thursday 28th September 2006 21:57 | Air |
I meant to tell you that I *still* giggle when I read the part where Oliver first gets to Puddlemere Headquarters. I can just see him trying to impress the receptionist--and his reaction when he sees that she's anything but impressed. It reminds me of some of the college guys I see around here.
I like your Oliver more and more each time I read about him. I like that you haven't written him as perfect. He's got flaws -- he's obviously got some issues to deal with (like with his father), and there's still a bit of immature boy in him (as evidenced by the scene I mentioned above), for example--but his flaws make him human. This all makes him a much more interesting character.
Julie |
| Thursday 28th September 2006 23:42 | Air (Author Response) |
| Aggiebell - my beta! After all your hard work, you still left me a review! Thanks so much. Poor Oliver. He does have a bit of growing up to do, but he means well. I so appreciate your help! |
