gymnastgal19
Monday 25th August 2008 15:40 | Even Now |
hahahahahah
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majolie
Monday 7th January 2008 14:51 | Even Now |
| very cute |
Hihavaniceda
Sunday 19th August 2007 06:07 | Even Now |
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| Sunday 19th August 2007 07:38 | Even Now (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
cckeimig
Wednesday 7th March 2007 10:23 | Even Now |
| Very cute story, Sarah! |
BasketKiwi
Sunday 18th February 2007 19:37 | Even Now |
| Aaw! That was so cute! I especially loved the ending, though it took me a while, LOL. I don't know why I didn't get an e-mail when this was posted! It was posted all the way in October?? Gah! Well, anyway. I really liked this. *rolls eyes* Ron, come ON! It's completely ridiculous, and completely believable. That's totally the kind of thing he'd forget. I love the scene where he slowly... sloowwly realizes that Halloween=anniversary. Heh. ^^ This was great! |
| Monday 19th February 2007 14:41 | Even Now (Author Response) |
*tacklehug* Thanks! You didn't get an email because this was a competition entry, so my identity was shielded.
I love your reviews. They make me feel all chirpy! |
Ladybug
Thursday 26th October 2006 06:36 | Even Now |
| Great fun! I really enjoyed that, but I particularly love Hermione's job - that's just hilarious - she just can't give up telling people how to do magic!!! Thanks for a great little tale. |
St Margarets
Wednesday 25th October 2006 17:42 | Even Now |
| I like fiesty Ginny and this was fun told in her point of view. Poor Ron, still clueless after thirty years. |
ninkenate
Tuesday 24th October 2006 14:29 | Even Now |
| I like that the trio is still close. Ginny reminding Ron was cute. Why didn't Hermione remind ron the way she normally does? |
juliet
Tuesday 24th October 2006 04:05 | Even Now |
It was nice to see that despite the years that had passed, the trio remained close and took time out for each other on this anniversary. That troll certainly made them friends, very very good friends.
Good luck in the competition. |
paladin
Monday 23rd October 2006 13:16 | Even Now |
Simply splendid!
Please, tell you either did, or plan to do, a similar performance at your brother’s wedding. Especially including the tangent lines, then bringing yourself back to the main thread. People who can pull that off tell the best stories. You did that superbly here.
I enjoy first person stories and this was thoroughly enjoyable. Of course, it’s not like you didn’t have enough material to work with. The way Ron is characterized in canon can feed loads of funny stories. A sister setting her older brother straight must bring back loads of memories for anyone who reads this effort; I know that it did for me.
Thank you, for sharing this and best of luck in the competition.
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wokka42
Sunday 22nd October 2006 00:40 | Even Now |
| Another little slice of comic perfection! I love the initial tension, as we readers are left hanging and puzzled as to what anniversary (particularly a *thirtieth* when Ron is only 41!). I also love the idea of the trio celebrating that anniversary, and the idea of them beginning to celebrate it during their Great Horcrux Hunt. And of course, the moment of Ron's dawning comprehension is just brilliant. And I love the totally unnecessary non sequitur of an ending. Fabulously done! I love it. :-) |
Arnel
Friday 20th October 2006 21:32 | Even Now |
| You've done a nice job with this one. I loved Ron's costume and the fact that it is a cloud of purple material. However, the best lines are the last ones, especially the one about Ginny getting away with whatever she can when Hermione is happy! |
Mira Miracle
Friday 20th October 2006 08:15 | Even Now |
I really, really enjoyed this story. You took a great theme which JKR has also emphasized in her books: friendship, and you manage to show the strong bond between the trio. Being told from Ginny's perspective just adds the little humour it needs, and makes this one of my favourite fics.
Especially the ending made me laugh out loud; it's something Ginny would certainly do! Very good job! |
monkeyfish
Thursday 19th October 2006 12:35 | Even Now |
| I like the idea that the trio celebrates their friendship this way, but I have to admit that I found this story very difficult to follow. |
Astrid
Wednesday 18th October 2006 11:56 | Even Now |
| This is a great story. Ginny's POV is the perfect choice. I like how you don't immediately say *what* anniversary Ron forgot, but give just enough clues that the clever reader (in this case, me) figures out what anniversary it is right before Ginny describes it. And the end is very cute and Ginny-like. |
critmo
Tuesday 17th October 2006 13:55 | Even Now |
| ::Sniggers:: |
RdeHwyll
Tuesday 17th October 2006 11:59 | Even Now |
| Oh, I like this one! Very cute story, well thought out. Good luck in the competition! |
Grandma Kate
Tuesday 17th October 2006 09:40 | Even Now |
| Good ending. "Magical" giving out of sweets is a great concept. |
GryffindorDragon
Tuesday 17th October 2006 09:37 | Even Now |
Nice story -- you've got a couple little twists in there that make it interesting. But repeating the troll incident exactly (no body else there) makes it a bit hackneyed. Given the development in canon (6 go to the Ministry of Magic, not 3), I think it would turn out a bit different (probably other, likely from DA, present).
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