Gin-erva
Saturday 19th June 2010 09:12 | She Said Yes |
| I don't really get the "quicksilver moment of bright green eyes and messy black hair" thing. I mean, this story is one of my favorites (because like you, Lily and James are quickly becoming my favorite people to read-and write- about, besides Harry and Ginny of course) but why didn't Lily have the "quicksilver" moment and why is that even in the story? Would you mind explaining? |
Sheepie_101
Saturday 3rd January 2009 02:32 | She Said Yes |
= JAMES AND LILY
i xoxoxox heart this
i luv it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
u r a really talented writer!
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GinevraMollyWeasley
Sunday 28th December 2008 10:05 | She Said Yes |
| OK, that was weird, I think i liked Lily's POV better... |
gymnastgal19
Monday 1st September 2008 22:00 | She Said Yes |
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chiantiqueen
Wednesday 9th January 2008 08:49 | She Said Yes |
| Awww, superb. It's always nice when you can read a story from a different perspective. I love how you write these characters, they are exactly as I imagine them. Any chance of more L/J/Marauders stories?!?! |
gymnastgal19
Tuesday 2nd October 2007 21:49 | She Said Yes |
I was wondering why james and siruis were laughing so hard... now i know! lol
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lacyrachil
Thursday 30th November 2006 09:19 | She Said Yes |
| Great story. Fun and happy. Personally, one of my favorite words has become, "bloody"...but there was a lot of bloody this and sodding that in the story. Great idea though, hope to read more from you. |
Astrid
Thursday 19th October 2006 13:51 | She Said Yes |
| Adorable. Good work. |
| Thursday 19th October 2006 20:07 | She Said Yes (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
Mira Miracle
Thursday 19th October 2006 11:19 | She Said Yes |
| Wow, I reckon I like this one even more than "Yes", and that's hard to imagine... No, seriously, you've outdone yourself with James' voice. You do his character just perfectly, and I simply adore your Sirius... How he speaks... his jokes.... his statement about James singing "God save the Queen" starkers with a rose between his teeth made me just crack up! I'd love to read more about all of them, and am also thrilled how you'd depict Remus and Peter. Very good work, Mari! |
| Thursday 19th October 2006 20:11 | She Said Yes (Author Response) |
| Thank you sweetie! I so love getting feedback from my authors, truly makes me smile. I was worried about writing Sirius ... I'm always afraid he's not going to match the Sirius in my mind ... but I actually think he does this time. The "Queen" line still cracks *me* up too! LOL Thanks again *hugs* |
lantis222
Wednesday 18th October 2006 08:55 | She Said Yes |
| That was one of the sweetest things I've ever read. Thanks, it made me smile today! good work! |
| Thursday 19th October 2006 20:11 | She Said Yes (Author Response) |
| Awww, yay! I'm so glad to have made you smile! |
sweety_sorbey
Wednesday 18th October 2006 05:28 | She Said Yes |
Hell, I’d go to Hogsmeade with you if you did that, mate.
Ooh, that line made me laugh. Gotta love Sirius.
I loved this fic every bit as much as your last. Hope to see that Hogsmeade trip - or the return to the common room - coming soon! |
| Thursday 19th October 2006 20:12 | She Said Yes (Author Response) |
| Sweety!!! Oh it is so good to hear from you! Thank you so much for the review hon. And don't you fear, this isn't the last you'll see of our James and Lily, or their friends! |
meddymo
Tuesday 17th October 2006 13:46 | She Said Yes |
| I am SO glad you decided to revisit this story from James' point of view! That was just as brilliant as the first. You have a real talent for writing--you truly do. I am so impressed I really don't know quite what to say except that was just a lovely story, incredibly well written, and captivating to read. Please write more. |
| Tuesday 17th October 2006 19:10 | She Said Yes (Author Response) |
| Again, I am humbled. For a long time I doubted my talents as a writer ... even though I have been published before, I've never quite felt good enough. But yet here I am, receiving reviews like yours that just make me smile. Thank you from the bottom of my heart ... and no fear, my friend. I don't think you'll be rid of my writing anytime soon. James and Lily just won't leave me be. |
crazydaisy
Tuesday 17th October 2006 09:26 | She Said Yes |
| Love it!! Fab idea to have the fic the other way around....and I am waiting with baited breath for the Hogsmeade trip - I love your work!!! xx (ps James and Sirius even hotter than before ) |
| Tuesday 17th October 2006 19:09 | She Said Yes (Author Response) |
| Thanks so much!! It is so strange to me to know that there are people like you out there who are watching me and following my work .... OI!!! Thank you again and again and again! Hopefully you won't have too long to wait for the Hogsmeade trip. |
occlumens
Tuesday 17th October 2006 09:02 | She Said Yes |
| Oh Mari, I love it! James is so adorable, and Sirius too. It makes a wonderful companion to Yes. I like getting both sides of the story. Great job! |
| Tuesday 17th October 2006 19:07 | She Said Yes (Author Response) |
| Thank you sweetie!!! *smooches you up* I so love getting your opinion on things, I really truly do. It means a lot to me. I just want to flop in Sirius' lap ... maybe *I'll* go and sing for him! hehehe |
mary-v
Tuesday 17th October 2006 07:57 | She Said Yes |
I absolutely loved this, and I love how you managed to convey all their emotions and feelings and the depth of tehir relationship in just a few words. Honsetly though, I really, truly mourned the passing of James and Lily in this fic- something that never hapenned before. You really showed us how in love they were, and really you did an amazing job!
All I know is that I definitely can't wait for a comapnion piece! I know I would definitely love to see a companion piece that shows them returning to the common room, hand in hand. The Marauder's, and especially Sirius', relentless teasing, etc., etc., ...
Brilliant work!
~Maria~ |
| Tuesday 17th October 2006 19:00 | She Said Yes (Author Response) |
Maria, you humble me. Truly. To know that not only did I help you feel James and Lily's love ... but that I helped you grieve their death as well ... it is a very humbling experience for this new author. Thank you, from the bottom of my heart.
And ... YOU HIT ME WITH A PLOT BUNNY!!! *eeeeeeeeeeep*
Now I think I may have to put their Hogsmeade trip on hold and do their return to the common room. Hmmm ... I may just have to make a chaptered fic out of my dear James and Lily and the Marauders. |
OHGinnyfan
Tuesday 17th October 2006 03:40 | She Said Yes |
Yay!! Another story up! And in James's POV, too! I honestly think I adore this story even more than Yes, and I really loved Yes. There is something about James's voice in this that I just love. And the part with Sirius telling James to prostrate himself starkers and sing "God Save the Queen" with a rose in his teeth cracks me up each time I read it.
Love it, love it, love it. Great job, hon!! Glad to see it up!
*smooches* |
| Tuesday 17th October 2006 18:57 | She Said Yes (Author Response) |
You know beta-mum, it's funny ... when you first suggested writing this fic to me, I did jump right on it -- but I did so with trepidation: I didn't think I could do James justice. I identify so much with Lily, writing her POV came so easy to me, that doing James' POV scared the stuffin' outta me. But ... here the fic is ... and if I do say so myself, I think it turned out pretty good. And I've got you to thank for that ........... not only just for the idea, but for all the help you gave me along the way. So ... thanks.
*snugs you up and gets right in the middle of a Sirius-James-Remus-Mari-beta mum sammich* |
