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Ladybug
Saturday 17th February 2007 06:23 | Air | | The way Oliver took the news about his promotion was wonderful! I could really feel his confusion and disbelief. A pity he hasn't been able to tell his father yet, but that seemed like quite a bit of bridge-building in the final scene. I really loved his maturing observations. | | Saturday 17th February 2007 08:23 | Air (Author Response) | | I can see you like the father-son stuff. It is a large part of the story, and both Oliver and Jon have learning and a dire need for understanding ahead of them. We'll see how it plays out! | Evelyn
Sunday 29th October 2006 04:01 | Air | I admit, the first scene got me a bit teary-eyed.
And of course, I'm very curious about Oliver's father... Keep up the good work. |
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