gymnastgal19
Wednesday 21st November 2007 19:39 | The Way Home |
wow!!! this is really interesting! At first i thought that he ran into a wizards family, but then you would think that the little boy, and the girl, would have recognized the scar and not ask about it...
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topbabe
Wednesday 15th November 2006 11:09 | The Way Home |
OMG! i love this story(as much as i love my boyfriend, so alot) you are such a good writer and i fink you could give the fabulous JKRowling a run 4 her money! when is the next one commin out? i crave to no wot happens next!!!!!! wb x luff Hols-Becca
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GryffindorDragon
Sunday 12th November 2006 14:45 | The Way Home |
'Once upon a time. My family is more important to me and there are so many children out there who need my help. I gave that life up and asked the Ministry to strip my magic' -- Interesting take. Have you read Girlyswot's 'Time's Winged Chariot'? She also has a character who abandoned magic. You seem, though, to have a more positive portrayal of such .
I meant to comment on this but forget in the other review. But you probably don't mind another . |
| Sunday 12th November 2006 15:31 | The Way Home (Author Response) |
| No, I haven't read it. Maybe I will though. Dunno... Just thought one more leap for Harry. Thanks for reviewing. And, no, I don't mind another. |
GryffindorDragon
Sunday 12th November 2006 14:41 | The Way Home |
I'm glad Harry found Rachel. That was good luck for him (for once), but too bad she didn't have her old wand lying around somewhere , oh well that would be too much to expect . So where's the father who allows his son to shoot people? And how did Rachel, who takes in strays marry such a man?
I'm curious to see what happens when Harry gets to London. Is he going to be able to get to the Leaky Cauldron without trouble? Probably not. Maybe not even to the coach -- though I doubt pureblood wizards would know much about Muggle transportation.
But if he makes it as planned; it will be easier than he thinks, because all the twins have to do is take him to St. Mungo's. But I gather he'll have something for those spying on his house .
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| Sunday 12th November 2006 15:35 | The Way Home (Author Response) |
Boys over-exaggerate, especially when bragging to close friends or brothers. I actually modeled the boy after a bunch of friends I have who are hunters and around the age of 12 had a fascinations with shooting things. Damien wouldn't have actually shot anyone, the gun's just there for a scare.
Only one chapter left, so I think it'll fall short of your expectations, sorry, but at one time, it was a one shot. A very, VERY long one-shot, but one all the same. Maybe a sequel sometime... I've recently had a very trying and very writable experience, so we'll see... |
hpchica
Saturday 11th November 2006 00:45 | The Way Home |
SQUEE!! What a lovely chapter! I love that last paragraph,
He had already planned out what he was going to do when he arrived in London. He was going to go to the Leaky Cauldron and get Tom to open the wall into Diagon Alley. From there, he was going to go straight to the twins' shop and have them bring her to him; it was less risky that way. They would meet in the twins' flat above their shop. His heart was beating feverishly just thinking about their meeting. He couldn’t wait.
Harry had it all planned out. =D Good job, once again. Can't wait for update!
-Alex |
| Saturday 11th November 2006 22:06 | The Way Home (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review. At that part, I just picture Harry bouncing in his seat, fidgeting like a 4 year old on a sugar high. I'm glad you liked it. |
holly
Friday 10th November 2006 22:17 | The Way Home |
| Oh my goodness! I have had a similar story in my mind, but sadly I cannot write so all it could do was run around in my empty little head. You have done a wonderful job with this story and I'm so excited to read more! Update soon! |
| Saturday 11th November 2006 22:05 | The Way Home (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you like it. Is it up to the expectations of what you wanted yours to be? Thanks for the review. |
thisgrlrox
Friday 10th November 2006 19:46 | The Way Home |
I'm looking forward to see if Harry gets to the Leaky Cauldron without anything else happening. He's in for a big surprise when he sees Ginny!
This is shaping up into a very well written story. Nice job! I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter. |
| Saturday 11th November 2006 22:03 | The Way Home (Author Response) |
| Thanks a lot. I owe a lot to my beta for making me break it up into short chapters. Hardly anyone read it when it was a one-shot posted on another site. It was too long. |
iloveyoukarineh
Friday 10th November 2006 18:32 | The Way Home |
| oo im excited for the next stuff |
| Saturday 11th November 2006 22:02 | The Way Home (Author Response) |
| soon. thanks for the review |
Rhiannon17
Friday 10th November 2006 16:36 | The Way Home |
| This story is brilliant. Your writing style is origional and the plot is captivating. Please Post more soon |
| Saturday 11th November 2006 22:02 | The Way Home (Author Response) |
| Thanks a lot. The last chapter will be up by Thanksgiving. |
