mnrox
Thursday 13th January 2011 21:52 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
| Somebody's copying ur stories word FOR WORD! |
| Friday 14th January 2011 04:46 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| Thanks for telling me. Where? |
DaniKay
Sunday 22nd March 2009 12:21 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
Other than saying it's an excellent chapter, I don't actually have much to say haha.
"A lover with no clothes on."
I don't usually review each chapter, but I think I'll give it a try for this one cause it's awesome lol
DaniKay
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| Monday 23rd March 2009 04:47 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| That's so nice of you to review each chapter - thank you! This is a looong story - so take your time. |
gymnastgal19
Saturday 3rd May 2008 20:43 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
yikes! must be kinda scary to be marrying someone so wealthy.... especially when you are not htat rich people think that you are a gold digger...
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gymnastgal19
Saturday 8th December 2007 16:06 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
interesting That is a lot of money that harry has now... lol
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txreina
Tuesday 20th November 2007 17:20 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
| Ginny has too many worries hope nothing goes wrong. |
cckeimig
Wednesday 7th March 2007 21:44 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
| Amazing insight in this last bit. |
| Thursday 8th March 2007 04:19 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| I really wanted a physical reminder of just what Harry had done - and in a post Voldy world without a battle scene that's hard to convey. Thanks for reading! |
bbnaz
Thursday 1st March 2007 14:14 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
A steady foundation here. Hermione is in trouble and both Harry and Ron know it.
Excellent work. |
| Thursday 1st March 2007 14:43 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| Yes, they both care a lot about Hermione. |
lantis222
Monday 13th November 2006 18:08 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
| Such a good story, I'm really enjoying it. I really like the idea of Harry Search and Rescue, it's the kind of thing that he would really enjoy doing. Good Job! |
| Monday 13th November 2006 18:14 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you like that idea for Harry. I think it fits what we know of him. Thanks for reading! |
Curren
Monday 13th November 2006 10:01 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
| nice, don't have time to write a lot about it, but i enjoy this story a lot. Will put you on my favorites |
| Monday 13th November 2006 18:13 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you like it. I understand completely about time. Thanks for reading! |
Felix Felicis
Sunday 12th November 2006 19:56 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
| Great chapter. The language and emotions you used to describe the whole ordeal at the bank were exquisite. Truly. The last paragraph was absolutely beautiful and uplifting! |
| Monday 13th November 2006 09:49 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked the last paragraph. I didn't know if it was too "preachy" but then I didn't know any other way to express it. Thanks for reading! |
daniel_r_crazy22
Sunday 12th November 2006 17:49 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
| Yeah. I read all these chapters on your LJ, but I can always read them a second time. This is a great chapter. All that money...wow. Stupid reporters. I would hate to be one, 'cause everyone would then hate me. Haha. |
| Monday 13th November 2006 09:48 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| Bless your heart, you don't have to read this twice! LOL. Well, it's nice to know you did and what your liked. Thanks for reading! |
Kelleypen
Sunday 12th November 2006 16:43 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
Too bad Harry can't just buy Ginny from the Weasleys and leave them a bit wealthier . . .
Nice chapter. I'm glad Ginny's okay, and I do understand her hormonalness. |
| Monday 13th November 2006 09:47 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
I think the Weasleys are in good financial shape by now. All the kids are out of the house and earning money. I think Arthur and Molly deserve a contented second half of life - although I can't see either one of them content to do nothing. Hence Arthur is still at the Ministry and Molly is busy with all of her friends and family.
Poor Ginny. We all have those days. Thanks for reading! I've missed seeing you, Kelley. |
GryffindorDragon
Sunday 12th November 2006 15:29 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
'probably because this story about Harry had nothing to do with war and death and personal loss' -- that should be a positive thing, shouldn't it?
What kind of pictures did these witches send ? and are they in the same stack Ginny received? Shouldn't there be two stacks of letters? It reads like the witches pictures are in the letters Ginny received, even though it says 'sent him their pictures'.
'Not only were the Ginny-heads too big for the bodies, but her hair was sopping wet and her lips kept pursing into a kiss' --
'She also couldn’t find it in herself to him that' -- do you mean 'to tell him'?
Nice tension you set up with the swimming and flying issues. Is this resolved later?
Harry is a bit insensitive . 'nevra, Ginevra,' -- can I groan?
Nice touch with the bit about the photographer!
Interesting take on the depths of the Gringotts vaults -- Claustrophobia. I'm glad the pain is nothing serious . 'a horrible clawing feeling around her throat' -- nice imagery; I can almost feel it.
Okay, now I see why Harry 'has the most assets in this branch of Gringotts'; I suppose this would include Malfoy's wealth. But why would Harry get all this? Doesn't the government usually take the wealth of criminals? I wonder what you're going to do with all this later .
Very nice chapter.
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| Monday 13th November 2006 09:44 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| Harry wants neither the money nor the fame - but he's got both. And yes, he'll do something with it - eventually. Thanks for reading! |
snuffles007
Sunday 12th November 2006 14:22 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
| Great story! I can't wait for the next update. |
| Monday 13th November 2006 09:43 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| I have a lot of this written. Hopefully it won't take quite as long for the next chapter to be loaded. Thanks for reading! |
mary-v
Sunday 12th November 2006 10:14 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
Wonderful! Simply wonderful! And I love the questions the media was asking... hysterical! Either way, you did a brilliant job with this chapter!
~Maria~ |
| Sunday 12th November 2006 11:41 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
Hi Maria,
Thanks for reading. The media does ask the dumbest questions in real life, so it worked here! |
Melindaleo
Sunday 12th November 2006 06:50 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
| Aww, I liked the ending and the physical reminder of what Harry's done. I was happy to hear Ginny's thoughts at the end, and her first childish reaction was worrisome. That's what most couples argue about, isn't it? Money. My favorite part was Ginny's dislike of swans. Ha! Very nice, and I liked Harry's neutral reaction, too. |
| Sunday 12th November 2006 08:17 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
LOL. That swan would have bothered *me* so I figured it would have bugged Ginny, too. (And Harry wouldn't even notice)
Yes, money is always an issue - although I think it's worse when you don't have enough, as opposed to too much.
Now that you've finished another story (congratulations - you've been working hard) you'll have to check out your "cameo" in my anniversary challenge story. |
BasketKiwi
Saturday 11th November 2006 22:21 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
| Oh, I just love your Harry and Ginny, they're so perfect! They're realistic in their arguing and stuff, but the love is...there... If any of that makes any sense at all. Anyway, I hate that the press is always so intrusive and awful, but it wouldn't be Harry Potter without some evil paparazzi! Interesting descriptions of Gringotts as well. |
| Sunday 12th November 2006 06:09 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| I don't like to write arguments, so I'm glad that it seemed realistic and that the love was still there. And I don't want to make Ginny look bad - but she still has a temper every now and again. LOL. Poor Harry. Thanks for reading! |
