Guenivere
Monday 28th December 2009 21:42 | Defining the Relationship |
| Not cool. *glares* |
Stag Writer
Tuesday 3rd November 2009 16:07 | Defining the Relationship |
| i have just started reding this chapter when i realised that the physciatrist is in with the american reporter!!!!!! (i think) |
majolie
Thursday 8th January 2009 19:26 | Defining the Relationship |
You ARE evil - lucily for me your next chapter is waiting right here for me, but your poor original readers!
I found the idea of Hagrid's 1st year of teaching stories to be highly amusing. |
jeanne
Monday 11th December 2006 09:43 | Defining the Relationship |
| Love this fic. As I read over your reviews, I noted that one I sent you was not there. Maybe I sent it to your e-mail address? If not I asked if you were combining your two fics. The one DTR and the one about Chris and Penny. Since Ron and Chris are working together in DTR, on the Malfoy incident, and Chris and Penny are making beautiful music together, combining the two would be easy for you , I,m sure. I just finished re-reading your two fics re: DTR and the other, but can,t remember the name, as it,s been a while. They are a great read even the third time around. i only read the best fics more than once. Thanks muchly, Jeanne |
jeanne
Monday 11th December 2006 09:32 | Defining the Relationship |
| Love this fic. |
Lauberry
Saturday 18th November 2006 12:14 | Defining the Relationship |
Wow, I love this story! It had been on my back burner for awhile, ever since I read the Ron/Hermione story. (When I come across long WIP, I try to wait until a weekend, when I can let myself just read until I'm done. So thanks for updating it so close to the weekend! I clicked on it on Thursday, and was very glad to find it again.
Lauren |
daniel_r_crazy22
Wednesday 15th November 2006 20:29 | Defining the Relationship |
| Oh no. Not Remus. How did he get caught with silver? It was Malfoy wasn't it? And I hope Harry will be okay. And this all happens right before the start of term. I wonder what is going to happen in the next two days. It is two days right? Haha. And it wasn't completely Hermione's fault. It was stupid Malfoy's. And what is Harry going to do about his 'appointments' when term starts and all that? Can't wait for more. And yes, you are evil. leaving us on a cliffy like that. Gosh. But, this is a great story so far and wonderful chapter. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Wednesday 15th November 2006 20:29 | Defining the Relationship |
| Oh no. Not Remus. How did he get caught with silver? It was Malfoy wasn't it? And I hope Harry will be okay. And this all happens right before the start of term. I wonder what is going to happen in the next two days. It is two days right? Haha. And it wasn't completely Hermione's fault. It was stupid Malfoy's. And what is Harry going to do about his 'appointments' when term starts and all that? Can't wait for more. And yes, you are evil. leaving us on a cliffy like that. Gosh. But, this is a great story so far and wonderful chapter. |
zafiro
Wednesday 15th November 2006 19:11 | Defining the Relationship |
AGGGHHHHH!!LJDFLKSDJFXCVLKNDSFGODGU
How could you!? I'm going to die, with a cliffie like that ....
I would be less hostile if it weren't for the speediness of the chapter.
I'm very worried about our poor Remus, though ....
Very good, nevertheless. Your writing is awesome, and I love the plotline. Wonderful job.
I just hope that you update soon! |
brad
Wednesday 15th November 2006 14:38 | Defining the Relationship |
You are, indeed, super ultra evil. So this is why you've taken such pains to build up such a great relationship between Harry and Remus? Only to kill off the latter? Boo!
And Draco Malfoy must be killed. Please.
I was a bit disappointed in Harry's battle performance. Why tell Hermione to duck if he was only casting an Expelliarimus? Can't help but contrast Harry's "bellowing" of spells with Malfoy's apparently casting his stabbing curse silently.
I think it's spelt 'Imperius' rather than 'Imperious'?
Thanks for the chapter. And please arrange matters to accommodate Malfoy's grisly end, okay? |
SillyGillie
Tuesday 14th November 2006 15:37 | Defining the Relationship |
| Oh my gosh!!! How cruel. I hope Remus is ok!! Thank merlin Harry was there for Hermione. Ron's reaction was adorable. Remmy!! |
ginnysohma
Monday 13th November 2006 19:03 | Defining the Relationship |
| oh my god. HOW DARE you LEAVE me with THAT!!!!!!!! my favorite character...... *sob* my poooooor remus..... poooooooor remus....... *cries* |
| Tuesday 14th November 2006 13:06 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| Don't cry. More coming soon! |
cryslin
Monday 13th November 2006 19:02 | Defining the Relationship |
| Yes you are...And it's about time I commented. Great story. |
| Tuesday 14th November 2006 13:06 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I'm already working on the next chapter, so not too long to wait. |
lilangl65
Monday 13th November 2006 18:34 | Defining the Relationship |
You are a horrible, horrible, horrible person.... plz write soon.
I love your style, it captures the reader and throws them into the story..... making horrible cliff hangers agravating.....
have a fantastic week (writing hopefully)
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Kamalia
Monday 13th November 2006 18:23 | Defining the Relationship |
Oh, no - is Remus okay? *Crosses fingers* Evil, evil.
Still very good, though. Can't wait for chapter 26! |
| Tuesday 14th November 2006 13:05 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| You'll find out soon! Thanks! |
lavenderdusk
Monday 13th November 2006 17:32 | Defining the Relationship |
Lovely chapter!
One small editor's point: “I’m sure Ron, doesn’t care, Hermione," should probably be minus the comma after "Ron."
I hope your campaign experience wasn't too draining, it seems like quite an undertaking to run for office these days.
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| Tuesday 14th November 2006 13:05 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
I thought we'd caught that. Oh well.
Thanks for the review! More to come soon, I promise. |
jawsinnc
Monday 13th November 2006 17:17 | Defining the Relationship |
| You may be evil, but it's a great story and I'm enjoying it very much! Sorry about the election! Look at it this way...give you more time to write! Please keep those chapters coming! |
| Tuesday 14th November 2006 13:04 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| Ha! Good way to look at it. More to come soon. Thanks for the review! |
isabel152
Monday 13th November 2006 15:05 | Defining the Relationship |
| yes yes ur reallyyyy evil u can't let me like that. for a moment i thought it was harry .i wonder what happen to remus.updatee soon plz u take a really long. |
| Tuesday 14th November 2006 13:03 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| More to come soon, I promise. Thanks for the review! |
juliet
Monday 13th November 2006 13:49 | Defining the Relationship |
Not evil - brilliant. It was getting all together too cosy for Harry and Ginny and company. Malfoy seems to be striking from all sides - no wonder he was so quiet the last few chapters - must have been hidden somewhere plotting away.
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| Tuesday 14th November 2006 13:03 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you liked it! More to come soon! |
swngnblues
Monday 13th November 2006 12:57 | Defining the Relationship |
At least you recognize that you're evil... what're you going to do about it? Seems to be a common theme of stories this week - highly evil cliffies. Or I'm imagining things.
Don't think I've reviewed before, but I've been slowly working my way through, and now I'm caught up. I've enjoyed it so far, and while there's fluff/romance, I don't think it's overwhelmingly sweet for a multi-chapter fic, which is a good thing. I find myself having trouble following the plotlines if there's too much fluff.
Sorry to hear about your results in the race. Perhaps with some more lead time, you'll make a better run. Nothing to sneeze at in getting 1000 votes for state congress. I'd never be crazy enough to enter politics and campaign!
Looking forward to the rest of the story here. Keep up the good work! |
| Tuesday 14th November 2006 13:02 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
Thank you for stopping by! I love first time reviewers! I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far, and I hope that you'll enjoy the rest as it comes out. I think you'll find it satisfying.
It was just a bad year for my party, so maybe next time.
Thanks again! |
mary-v
Monday 13th November 2006 12:11 | Defining the Relationship |
Ahhh!! And so the action really begins! Absolutely wonderful! Just brilliant! I really can't wait for the update!!!!!
Maria |
| Tuesday 14th November 2006 13:00 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| Thank you! Glad you liked it, and I won't keep you waiting long, I promise. |
Melindaleo
Monday 13th November 2006 10:45 | Defining the Relationship |
Whoa! Evil is right! Very cool ending. At first, when they all came rushing down the hall, I'd thought something happened to Harry when they tried to remove the curse. Very interesting with Remus. Hmm, Malfoy had just been with Hermione so I don't think he could have got there so quick.
I felt bad for Harry worrying that Ginny would think less of him. It's a valid concern, particularly where he hasn't had the best of support systmes growing up. Okay, get writing! |
| Tuesday 14th November 2006 12:59 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
You're perceptive!
Harry is only just now getting the support system he lacked growing up, and learning how to use it. I love writing scenes with Harry and Remus, as they both try to fill roles that the other is missing.
And as Remus said, Ginny has her own baggage.......
Thanks again! |
bmp412
Monday 13th November 2006 10:00 | Defining the Relationship |
| Oh!!! You and your cliffhangers. I love it though. Please update quickly. |
| Tuesday 14th November 2006 12:55 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| I will. And soon! Thank you! |
AwesomeGryffindor
Monday 13th November 2006 09:56 | Defining the Relationship |
| OH.MY.GOODNESS. How could you leave us with a cliffhanger like that? Excellent work, I've been waiting for your DTR updates and I love the story so far. I knew you were building up the momentum for Draco to make his move, but... whew, what an entrance for the twitchy little ferret. Can't wait to see what's next! |
| Tuesday 14th November 2006 12:51 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| I do it so nobody out there falls asleep, dontcha know? :-) And don't worry, more coming soon! |
Grandma Kate
Monday 13th November 2006 09:11 | Defining the Relationship |
Yes you are, truly EVIL!
Harry's life is never dull and now we have to bite our nails about Remus. |
| Tuesday 14th November 2006 12:55 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| Try not to bite your nails! It's not hygenic! ;-) Glad you enjoyed the chapter, more to come soon! |
GryffindorDragon
Monday 13th November 2006 09:07 | Defining the Relationship |
I'm sorry that you didn't win your State Representative race -- maybe next time. But I am glad to see another chapter .
'It’s a little bit scary how much I remind myself of Hermione lately' -- Aw, poor Hermione ; she's not that bad, is she? Hm, well, all right .
'His face was scared' -- do you mean scarred?
All right, Malfoy is being a royal pain.
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| Tuesday 14th November 2006 12:54 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
It was a rough year for my party all around, so my own loss is the least of my worries on that front.
And yes, Malfoy knows how to make a nuisence of himself, doesn't he?
More coming soon! |
lantis222
Monday 13th November 2006 09:00 | Defining the Relationship |
| Oh I hate cliffies, without them, thre would be less to look forward to I suppose, and I'm guilty of them myself. Great job I really like this story. Post Hogwarts fics are my favorite. Keep it up, I can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Tuesday 14th November 2006 12:50 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm working on the next chapter already! |
thisgrlrox
Monday 13th November 2006 07:29 | Defining the Relationship |
| Totally evil! I will say that is a good cliffie though. That was a well written chapter. It was full of action and kept me on the edge of my seat. Harry needs to bring his guard down a little further and let Ginny into his counseling sessions. Otherwise, I fear for the relationship. I'm looking forward to the next chapter...keep them coming. |
| Tuesday 14th November 2006 12:49 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| It's coming soon, I promise. Thanks for reviewing! |
amamama
Monday 13th November 2006 06:52 | Defining the Relationship |
Aaargh! Finally the tension starts to pay off, and oh how I hope they make mincemeat of that sick ferret when they finally get to him. . Apart from that, this is as nicely written as always. Congratulations on securing 1077 votes - at least you have a nice handfull of friends??
Thanks for sharing!
Berte |
| Tuesday 14th November 2006 12:48 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
Thank you, as always. Glad you enjoyed it. It was just a rough year to be a member of my party, I guess. Maybe next time around.
And Malfoy will get what's coming to him, I promise. Soon. |
Wolf's Scream
Monday 13th November 2006 06:44 | Defining the Relationship |
Evil, indeed. Though it seems that it's Malfoy who's evil, rather than you. :-}
Looks as if folks in Harry's extended family probably ought to go into "lockdown" mode until Malfoy is permanently neutralized. :-} That would be a tad disruptive, though, especially to Hogwarts.... |
| Tuesday 14th November 2006 12:47 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| Heh. It would be rather disruptive, wouldn't it? Thanks for your review, and the next one isn't far away, I promise. |
lvlupin
Monday 13th November 2006 06:20 | Defining the Relationship |
oh...you are evil leaving it this way!
I am so enjoying this story along with chris and penny's as well... i think you have done a fabulous job on characterzation! i love your OC chris, and i like where you are going with this story.
hope all turns out well for harry and remus! don't keep us hanging for too long! and make sure harry understands that ginny would do anything to make him happy.....even going to a muggle psychologist! |
| Tuesday 14th November 2006 12:45 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
Thank you! I'm fond of Chris as well. One of the things that has always intrested me is what about those people who live on the edge of both worlds. Chris gives me a chance to explore that.
And it's coming soon, I promise. |
martita
Monday 13th November 2006 05:29 | Defining the Relationship |
*growls* This better mean an update's not far away!
This might actually be the first time I've reviewed, but I enjoy your story immensly, and await every update eagerly. Keep up the good work! |
| Tuesday 14th November 2006 12:44 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I love getting first timers! The next chapter is coming soon, I promise. |
gemz1313
Monday 13th November 2006 05:03 | Defining the Relationship |
OMG! You can't do that Well ok you can because it's your story but seriously! That's just pure evil. Poor Hermione for blaming herself, and poor Harry. I hope he does take Ginny along because I agree with remus....:'( Remus has to be alright, he just has to be. I am so desperartly waiting for the next chapter now. I have to find out what happened!
Please update soon.
10/10
44ever |
| Tuesday 14th November 2006 12:43 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I won't keep you in suspense long, I promise. I'm working on the next chapter already! Glad you liked it! |
Wandrin_Dreamer
Monday 13th November 2006 04:58 | Defining the Relationship |
Great!
It was good to see another up date from you. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
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| Tuesday 14th November 2006 12:42 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
| Thank you! It's coming soon, I promise! |
snowbear96
Monday 13th November 2006 02:41 | Defining the Relationship |
You are evil but it's very well done, so I forgive you. Sorry you didn't do well in the elections.
As always, update soon! |
| Tuesday 14th November 2006 12:42 | Defining the Relationship (Author Response) |
Thank you! I won't keep you waiting long, I promise.
Maybe next time, eh? |
