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Saturday 8th December 2018 19:13 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
Nony
The chapters I've read so far has this power of taking me to a hole other world |
| Sunday 9th December 2018 14:17 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| Thank you! What a nice thing to say. |
daviduphold
Sunday 30th January 2011 15:27 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
| great story |
| Sunday 30th January 2011 16:55 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you like it. Thanks for letting me know. |
chrisguy9017
Sunday 10th May 2009 10:26 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
Wow very erotic it so caught me off guard . But it was a cool chapter very straight foward.
Thanks. |
| Sunday 10th May 2009 13:42 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| This was a difficult chapter to write, so I'm glad that it was a nice surprise in the story. Thanks for reading and for letting me know. |
gymnastgal19
Sunday 4th May 2008 00:08 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
nice love scene you wrote
good job! |
gymnastgal19
Saturday 8th December 2007 17:23 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
i loved this! must have been sort of tough to write good job!
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txreina
Tuesday 20th November 2007 17:29 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
| Beautiful chapter. |
lenzlaw1
Friday 27th July 2007 22:39 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
Summing up everything in part 1, this is by far the best harry/ginny fic. Fantastic job, simply great. The culmination of everything in part1:7 couldn't have been written any better to convey a better sense of their situation.
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| Saturday 28th July 2007 09:54 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it so far. It's all AU now - but I think the essence of H/G's relationship is still consistent with DH. |
Narumi
Thursday 19th April 2007 13:53 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
| I'll have you know I read this yesterday and then dreamt all night about my own wedding! What powerful imagery you present! |
| Friday 20th April 2007 05:20 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| I'm glad the imagery worked. Weddings are so hard to write because they are the same and yet different for everyone. Thanks! |
Patches
Wednesday 21st February 2007 16:46 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
| Very well done. I am really enjoying this story. Thank you so much for writing. I have enjoyed Fan Fiction for several years now and this is a very good story. I look forward to your updates. p |
| Wednesday 21st February 2007 19:09 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| I know you've reviewed me before, so thank you for that! I hope to have quick updates from now on. |
ravenchaman
Thursday 1st February 2007 16:58 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
| Very sweet and classy! Who's Neville's girlfriend? I really hope you update soon the next part, looking forward to it! |
| Friday 2nd February 2007 18:58 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| We're just waiting for Sherry's next chapter before part II is posted here. I have 18 chapters on my LJ if you really can't wait. Thanks for reading! |
Musings
Monday 18th December 2006 11:57 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
| This is, truly, one of the loveliest chapters I've read in a long time. Thank you so much for sharing it with us and have a wonderful holiday season!! |
| Monday 18th December 2006 16:42 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I really had a hard time writing it, so I'm glad all of that effort paid off! I can't wait to see what Sherry does with it. I hope you have a holiday as well - with time off! (That's all I want) |
DeborahSu
Tuesday 12th December 2006 03:16 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
What a beautiful conclusion to Part I.
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| Tuesday 12th December 2006 15:16 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| I'm so glad you thought it beautiful. I wanted to do that for H/G. |
jeanne
Monday 11th December 2006 09:56 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
| Me again. I also wish you a very Merry Xmas, and a Prosperous New year. I will wait for your updates as I print them out for rereading as I said earlier. Jeanne |
| Monday 11th December 2006 12:34 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| A very merry Christmas to you, too! Sherry's going to put up a Christmasy one-shot I wrote - so hopefully that will give you a "fix" until the New Year. |
jeanne
Monday 11th December 2006 09:49 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
| Words can hardly describe how much I am enjoying your story. It is awesome. Has Sherilynn given up on hers ? I,ve printed them both out, as I enjoy reading them a second time around. Will anxiously await the New Year and your update. Jeanne. |
| Monday 11th December 2006 12:33 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| Sherry is very busy right now, but she's hoping to have some time after Christmas to write. (Which is why I thought we'd stop here with chapters) If you want to read more, Part II is up on live journal. (Same name!) |
Sionwitch
Monday 11th December 2006 09:20 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
This is the best R rated chapter I have ever read. It is so beautiful and full of love, real love, so deep that need a new word because just "love" doesn't quite express it.
I have enjoyed all chapters of this fic but this was the best for me.
Now I'm going to your Live Journal.
Happy Holidays |
| Monday 11th December 2006 12:32 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| I'm so glad you liked it and that the loving part came out. Anything less than that would be disrespectful to my favorite characters, I think. You're welcome to look around my LJ! Thanks for reading! |
Rachaol
Sunday 10th December 2006 06:35 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
St. Margarets, thank you for a lovely fairy tale beginning. I've enjoyed all your fics, and I can't wait for the adventures to come in New Zealand. I LOVE Luna's enchanted flower veil, it sounds exactly like the kind of thoughtful, yet off-beat gift she would give. Tossing virgins to the volcano! How appropriate!
Now for one picky point. I apologize, because it is a silly criticism, but fan comments are an outlet for this pet peeve of mine. It is my loss because it's an obsession that pulls me up short as I read, and then I have to work get back on track.
the teasing was making her taunt with impatience
The word you are looking for is "taut" which is a descriptive word that means under tension. "Taunt" is a noun and is a teasing utterance.
If it was simply a typo, and I am preaching to the choir, I apologize for my perpetual proofreading ways!
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| Sunday 10th December 2006 06:57 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| Yes, that was a typo! Thanks for pointing that out - we both missed it. I'll have Sherry fix it later. Anyway, I'm glad you liked the fairytale beginning - the plot does deepen in Part II! |
EJH0904
Saturday 9th December 2006 18:24 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
| That was so beautifully sensual. It was steamy but in a sort of oblique way - we knew what was going on without anyway explicit words or untoward references. Very nice job! Can't wait for Part Two! |
| Sunday 10th December 2006 05:07 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked the chapter. It was so hard to write - to keep it sensual and romantic - but realistic, too. I'm glad it worked for you! Thanks for reading! |
CrumpleHornedKiwi
Saturday 9th December 2006 15:07 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
Awww - the ending was so cute! Thanks for a realistic first time, Harry is just so ... Harry.
Truly - the New Year! I guess you have a real life to live. Look forward to seeing the next update. |
| Saturday 9th December 2006 15:22 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
It's my beta who has a life, not me! LOL. I wanted to give her a break. I do have Part II written. It's on my live journal (same name) if you're interested.
I'm glad that Harry seemed like Harry. That's high praise for me! Thanks for reading! |
Jner
Saturday 9th December 2006 02:29 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
She contently placed her head on his shoulder, wondering what the word was for this bone-deep feeling that was beyond joy.
I loved this line. Beautifully written. |
| Saturday 9th December 2006 05:23 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| Last lines of chapters can be hard to write, but this one wasn't since to me this is how Ginny feels about finally marrying Harry. Hopefully what preceded showed this and didn't tell it. Sigh. This is why love scenes are sooo hard to write. Thanks for reading! |
Lorelei Lynn
Friday 8th December 2006 16:03 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
| I've thorougly enjoyed this story & I'm looking forward to part two. |
| Friday 8th December 2006 17:19 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| I have part two written, so updates should come quickly after the new year. Thanks for reading! |
mary-v
Friday 8th December 2006 13:00 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
Ohhh!!! *squee* Wonderful! You've outdone yourself. My heart is full to bursting... this entire chapter was just so romantic! Gah!
Amazing work!!!!!!!
I seriously can't wait for teh New Year. Which reminds me, Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays! (A little early, but the combination of sun and snow and cold and this fic has made me all happy and giddy.)
Wonderful!!!
~Maria~ |
| Friday 8th December 2006 15:28 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
I'm glad you thought the chapter was romantic. I so wanted to do my favorite characters justice on their special day. Weddings are always all alike - but always different because of the two who are being married. I wanted to show that here. Thank you for your holiday greetings! The same back to you!
I have another story on my LJ that you might like - it's about Harry and his daughter and it takes place on Christmas day. I think Sherry will post it here, too. But it's there if you're in the mood to read more about Harry and Ginny. |
lilyp
Friday 8th December 2006 12:55 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
I'd read it in your LJ and was looking forward to reread it here. but it felt even better than I expected. I don't know if you've changed much or if rereading we can enjoy it more thoroughly. I really love it too much to express it.
Their passion, ther frustration, his commitment to her their love. It's all so beautifully written!
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| Friday 8th December 2006 14:49 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
I'm glad it was enjoyable on re-reading. So many times it's the novelty and surprise that makes something fun to read the first time through. So it's good to know this held up, since I really wanted to do these characters justice.
I changed some transitions and some word choices in the wedding scene. The rest of it is the same. |
topbabe
Friday 8th December 2006 10:41 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
| brilliant! no other word 4 ur work |
| Friday 8th December 2006 14:46 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it. This was a tough chapter to write. |
snarkhunter
Friday 8th December 2006 09:46 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
| Every time I read this, I am in awe of how beautiful it is. I can only hope that, should I ever get married, I have someone has lovely as your Harry as my husband. |
| Friday 8th December 2006 10:22 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| You didn't have to read this again! But I'm glad you liked it. And yes, you will find your very own Harry that's just right for you. Timing is everything. Thanks for reading! |
lantis222
Friday 8th December 2006 09:19 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
| You have an amazing gift for writing, and I'm so happy that you have chosen to share it with all of us. I can't wait for part two. Keep it coming. Great Job! |
| Friday 8th December 2006 10:21 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked this chapter. It was very hard to write - but very satisfying to finish once I finally mustered up the courage to say what I wanted to say. Sigh. Fluff isn't easy! Thanks for reading! |
GryffindorDragon
Friday 8th December 2006 09:10 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
Sounds like Harry was a bit rushed there, the first time . At least he made it up to her
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| Friday 8th December 2006 10:19 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| Yes, Harry was really looking forward to starting married life - bless him. And yes, it all worked out fine for both of them. That's what honeymoons are for. |
Kelleypen
Friday 8th December 2006 07:16 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
| OH my goodness. That was very very hot. What a lovely breathless way to begin the day. Very well done. |
| Friday 8th December 2006 10:18 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it. This chapter did not come easy to me, since I really wanted to do the characters and their situation justice. Thanks as always for reading! |
Grandma Kate
Friday 8th December 2006 06:05 | The New Zealand Chronicles |
I love this chapter. It is very appropriate for a wedding and wedding night. Ginny is my favorite character and her thoughts are so faithful to her nature- "It was that ‘please’ that did it – that ‘please’ and the glint of gold from his wedding ring that she happened to see as she looked down on him."
She is finally Mrs Potter (or Waslib). Happy grin! |
| Friday 8th December 2006 10:17 | The New Zealand Chronicles (Author Response) |
| You didn't have to read it again! Anyway, I'm glad it holds up to a second reading - since it caused me all sorts of agonies to write. Thanks for reading! |
