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GryffindorDragon
Wednesday 27th December 2006 09:56 | The Thorn in the Sand | nice explanation for Bill's treasure-hunting
Intriguing bit with the Egyptian stone being stolen. And of course it was no coincidence. But why would no one but a Death Eater know the significance of the stone? Even if it is Dark Magic, wouldn't a Defense against the Dark Arts master know something about it?
Good interplay between Holly and Chelsea and Holly and Simon .
| Grandma Kate
Wednesday 20th December 2006 10:16 | The Thorn in the Sand | | I love the way this story is developing. | Kamalia
Tuesday 19th December 2006 22:33 | The Thorn in the Sand | Great job! I love the second generation....so very interesting! And Holly and Simon are so cute, too.
P.S. Out of curiosity, do you know about how long this story will be? |
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