The Boss
Saturday 15th May 2010 18:47 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
Love the ending to this wallpaper piece - It is always good to see Hary and Ginny together at the end of a piece of writing!
The main thing that I liked was that you named Fred and George's owl as Jester - seems very fitting
Great piece - more reviews heading your way shortly
The Boss |
| Sunday 16th May 2010 08:37 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) (Author Response) |
I liked that name for an owl! Dear Fred and George - as you can tell, I wrote this before DH! *sigh*
Thanks for reading! |
bleeblahblee
Wednesday 7th April 2010 12:01 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
| haha, I like Fred and George's letter, nice touch |
| Wednesday 7th April 2010 17:18 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) (Author Response) |
| Good old Fred and George - they're always useful! Thanks for reading! |
ibelieveintruelove
Friday 24th July 2009 04:16 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
| Oh I love it!! This story sort of takes Wallpaper Moments and HBP and blends them together with a lovely little missing moment from DH that I really wish JKR had included, hahaha. You did an excellent job with this - the Harry and Ginny romance was superb. Nice work! |
| Friday 24th July 2009 11:27 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) (Author Response) |
| I had a hard time with this story! It was a real challenge to write as you have noticed all of the things it tries to include. As long as the romance is okay, that's all I care about. Thanks for reading! |
DaniKay
Saturday 28th March 2009 16:29 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
Aww *grins*
I can just imagine Ron, Fred and George doing something like that haha, brilliant.
DaniKay
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| Saturday 28th March 2009 16:38 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) (Author Response) |
| H/G being tricked was part of the challenge over at SIYE, which is why I had to include it. I had a hard time imagining H/G getting engaged at such a young age, but that's what was in the contest. Luckily I thought of another house they could wallpaper. Thanks for reading! |
gymnastgal19
Sunday 23rd December 2007 23:20 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
I loved this! hehe there were two sets of three words that he said to ginny :p and he askd her to marry him! soo oo cute!
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The Boss
Sunday 14th October 2007 06:44 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
Wonderful story that has developed from the previous 'wallpapering' story. I loved how you still managed to get Fred and George into trouble(where they are at home)
Is there any chance that we might see another sequel, maybe after christmas or even Ginny's final year at Hogwarts?
The Boss |
| Wednesday 17th October 2007 13:32 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) (Author Response) |
| I really don't like writing things that are outside of canon - this was bad enough but I did it anyway, since it was a special request. I did write Leaving Privet Drive as a sequel to Red is the Heart (which was the sequel to the Wallpaper trilogy) before HBP came out. You might like that. Thanks for reading! |
pyromain
Friday 22nd June 2007 11:05 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
| again you write a emotional and lovely story. I really do love to read them, and the help me relax. thanks for writing them. |
| Friday 22nd June 2007 12:53 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) (Author Response) |
| I"m glad you liked it. It always makes me feel to good to know my stories are relaxing. There's too much stress in the world! Thanks for reading! |
cckeimig
Thursday 15th March 2007 20:20 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
| Yeah, I am...I let months and months (we're talking seven or eight at one point) of updates build up due to work and have been steadily 'burning through' them, as you say. Ended up saving one-shots for last unintentionally. Finished the last few last night! |
cckeimig
Thursday 15th March 2007 11:13 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
| Loved this! Very well done, as always! |
| Thursday 15th March 2007 14:43 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) (Author Response) |
| Thanks. You're burning through all of my one shots aren't you? Thanks for letting me know you're reading! |
BasketKiwi
Monday 1st January 2007 15:14 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
| This was a brilliant sequel! It had just enough backstory for us to get the picture without losing focus, and I loved the little repetitions, especially with the wallpapering. Just wonderful! The gold floss ring was interesting as well. I hope writing this made you feel a little better in the end, I know it brightened my day. |
| Monday 1st January 2007 17:21 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it. To answer your question, I felt a lot better when I finished it - just because it was done. I really wanted to do a good job and that kind of pressure is not good for writing! Thanks so much for your kind words. |
GryffindorDragon
Wednesday 27th December 2006 11:24 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
Very nice. You're going to make wallpapering stories famous .
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| Wednesday 27th December 2006 15:48 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) (Author Response) |
| LOL - Or I will be "famous" for wallpapering stories! Thanks for reading! |
wokka42
Wednesday 27th December 2006 01:08 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
| I can't think of a more heartfelt and perfect tribute to someone who, even though I never met her or spoke to her, I can tell was loved much and will be sorely missed. This is a beautiful reminder of your roots, St Margarets, an echo of what is still one of my favorite fanfics. But even though it's a little fic that ends happily I can feel the sadness and pain you must have felt writing this. I hope you're taking the same comfort in the endurance of love that Harry and Ginny take from the gold floss ring and the hope that it represents even in the face of pain and grief and death, that despite everything there is still something more beyond. This is very well done - it mourns and gives hope, and that is the best any of us can do. All my condolences and prayers for Jaq's family and friends. |
| Wednesday 27th December 2006 15:47 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) (Author Response) |
| Oh, thank you David. I didn't want that pain to show, but I couldn't seem to gloss it over - so there it sits. I do think that DH will have that sort of tone - at least at the beginning - so perhaps that is the nature of seventh year fic. I'm so glad you read this. It was great to hear from you. |
hp4-sauce
Wednesday 27th December 2006 00:20 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
| That was a lovely little story. Fred and George as matchmakers; makes perfect sense to me. |
| Wednesday 27th December 2006 15:45 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it. It was soooo hard to write. |
Musings
Saturday 23rd December 2006 11:25 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
Oh, Mary. You've created yet another truly beautiful work. Jaq was such a lovely woman and this piece would have made her so very happy. Thank you for sharing this with us, for working through the pain to create this...
Bless you, always! |
| Saturday 23rd December 2006 14:10 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) (Author Response) |
| *sniff* Thank you for such sweet words. I really appreciate your acknowledgement that this was *hard.* I have no perspective on the writing whatsover, so it's good to hear it turned out okay. Thanks again. |
Uzamaki-girl
Friday 22nd December 2006 20:24 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
| I loved this story and even though I didn't know her I think Jacquelyne would have liked it to. I like to think that somewhere in Heaven she's looking down and smiling. |
| Saturday 23rd December 2006 05:17 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) (Author Response) |
| Thank you for that. It means a lot. |
Gabriella Du Sult
Friday 22nd December 2006 17:38 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
I'm glad you posted this here as I rarely get over to SIYE anymore. I really love this. I enjoy the meshing of JKR's universe and your early Red is the Heart Universe. And I thought it was effective for Harry's dream to reflect his words in COS.
I think Ginny must have wanted to see Harry just a little bit on a subconcious level -- otherwise I'm not sure F&G could have fooled her -- I just about cried when she told Harry he would have to touch her for a side-along Apparition. Poor thing.
I know this was hard for you -- but the end result is as lovely as ever. |
| Friday 22nd December 2006 18:45 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) (Author Response) |
I'm glad you read this! That means you had a bit of free time. I hope you get more of that over Christmas.
I know, poor hurting Ginny. She did want to see him, of course, but she didn't want to mess anything up for him, which is why she was so frantic to get away. And she didn't want to feel what she felt at Dumbledore's funeral all over again, either.
Oh, this was hideously hard to write - so many conditions to the challenge and such *young* kids for this sort of a step. And then wanting to make it extra good - LOL. Set up for writer's block/anxiety - I'll tell you!
Anyway, thanks for reading! It's great to hear from you. |
Kamalia
Friday 22nd December 2006 13:51 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
| Sniff...That was cute. A fitting tribute, I think - good job! |
| Friday 22nd December 2006 15:16 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it. I hope it will some comfort to someone. Thanks! |
mary-v
Friday 22nd December 2006 12:13 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
| (And P.S.: The whole continuing the wallpaper universe: !! Love it!!) |
mary-v
Friday 22nd December 2006 12:12 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
This was wonderful... just so beautiful.
And my deepest regrets go to Jacquelyne's friends and her family... just...
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| Friday 22nd December 2006 13:00 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) (Author Response) |
| Thanks, Maria, you're a sweetheart! I hope you have a good Christmas. |
lacyrachil
Friday 22nd December 2006 09:36 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
| Something happened on cpu when reviewing this the first time. I wasn't sure if it got added...just wanted to say that once again your work is amazing. |
| Friday 22nd December 2006 11:02 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) (Author Response) |
| Oh, thanks. That's always the best gift to know that someone is reading! I appreciate it! |
Ima Quidditch Fan
Friday 22nd December 2006 09:12 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
| *sniff, sniff* OH, that was lovely. I am so thrilled that you continued WPM! |
| Friday 22nd December 2006 11:01 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it. I thought I should use material that Jacquelyne had read and liked. Thanks! |
amulder
Friday 22nd December 2006 08:16 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
Lovely, Mary. Happy Christmas to you and yours!
But I still hate wallpaper! |
| Friday 22nd December 2006 11:00 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) (Author Response) |
| LOL - no wallpaper was actually cut or pasted in the making of this story. Merry Christmas to you, too! |
DaFalcon
Friday 22nd December 2006 07:12 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
OMG!!! You are my absolute favorite H/G writer. I loved this. It was simply amazing. I can never tire from the "Wallpaper" stories. You write Harry and Ginny how I picture them in JKs books. Gosh, I'm at a lost for words here. Just beautiful. What a wonderful Christmas present. Thanks for sharing.
Dee |
| Friday 22nd December 2006 10:59 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it. I wasn't sure if anyone would remember the Wallpaper Universe, so that's a wonderful Christmas present for me! Thanks for reading! |
Kelleypen
Friday 22nd December 2006 07:03 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
| St. Mags--this was a lovely and touching one shot. I'm sure Jaqueline is pleased. |
| Friday 22nd December 2006 10:58 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it - I didn't mean to make it so serious - but that's the way it came out. |
cootiepatootie
Friday 22nd December 2006 06:26 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
Sob. So so sweet. I love the three little words - I think they mean more than any others.
No wallpapering! - priceless. Love the portkey packages. It would have been funny had they both been caught. Tee hee hee - Harry at the Burrow, Gin at Figgy's. (snickers with devious laughter)
Sigh. Again I say, perfect mix of angst and transcendence. I love it.
Cheers and Happy Christmas,
Cassie |
| Friday 22nd December 2006 10:57 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) (Author Response) |
I thought about that - what if Fred sent a Portkey to Harry and George sent one to Ginny. LOL End of story. There was a time lapse there, so they obviously saw that Harry didn't take the bait when Jester returned.
I'm glad you liked it - I can't wait for Harry to have that happy ending at the end of book seven. |
CrumpleHornedKiwi
Friday 22nd December 2006 03:05 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
A beautiful story as always - I never knew Jacquelyne but I'm sure she would have loved every single story that has been written for her in the last couple of weeks.
Merry Xmas St Margaret |
| Friday 22nd December 2006 05:03 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) (Author Response) |
| I think so, too. She was always such an enthusiastic and supportive person to writers. I was glad to do this small thing for her. Thanks for reading and Merry Christmas to you, too! |
Ladybug
Friday 22nd December 2006 02:37 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) |
| Stories have a power that nothing else has, so I don't think your hope is a foolish one ... lovely story, how wonderful that you weave the gorgeous Wallpaper Moments into the later canon so seamlessly. I love your use of rings again and the ending is perfect - both for the story and as a tribute to Jacquelyne. |
| Friday 22nd December 2006 05:01 | These Three Words (Wallpaper Moments II) (Author Response) |
| I'm glad the seams didn't show with this one! Yes, the last line about being home does do double duty. I'm glad you noticed that. Thanks for reading and for your kind words. |
