bookish327
Wednesday 13th August 2008 17:05 | Dumbledore's Man |
| Fantastic job! |
ibelieveintruelove
Wednesday 9th July 2008 21:15 | Dumbledore's Man |
| Very sweet - I love the pre-Harry and Ginny kiss fluff |
pyromain
Friday 24th August 2007 05:54 | Dumbledore's Man |
| beautifull missing moment Really enjoyed it. thanks |
| Friday 24th August 2007 05:58 | Dumbledore's Man (Author Response) |
Thanks, and thanks for reviewing!
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elusive
Tuesday 22nd May 2007 15:39 | Dumbledore's Man |
| Yay! Yet another great story by you! 10/10... again. |
Patches
Friday 18th May 2007 05:56 | Dumbledore's Man |
| This is a nice story. I just wish it had gone somewhere. It stopped too soon for me but that's me. I appreciate your writing. I look forward to more. p |
timbers
Monday 19th February 2007 11:13 | Dumbledore's Man |
Ah, that was very sweet. I really liked how you captured Harry and Ginny's relationship. As with all well written missing moments, I really liked your integration of canon into this fic.
Lovely job, I enjoyed reading it throughly. |
critmo
Saturday 17th February 2007 04:57 | Dumbledore's Man |
| I would expect Ginny to be just a touch more interested in Harry, but you've hit on his insecurity very nicely. Good story. |
Ladybug
Friday 16th February 2007 08:26 | Dumbledore's Man |
| What a warm and cosy scene, I just love it. Poor Harry and his ego - that was so Harry. His quietly satisfied mood at how he'd sent Scrimgeour off was nicely done - I think he has matured from OotP Harry who would have moped about it. Now, instead of Ginny pulling him out of it, she can just enjoy being with him in it. Wish I could have joined in the snowball pelting - would have been very satisfying indeed! |
DaFalcon
Thursday 15th February 2007 08:45 | Dumbledore's Man |
I love well written missing moments and this was definitely it! Very nice job. I wish there were more missing moments with Ginny's pov while still dating Dean. Any girl can easily move on, but it's hard to get over. I love her concern for Harry throughout the story. It's so obvious that she still has feelings for him deeper than she lets on to others.
Great job! |
| Thursday 15th February 2007 19:38 | Dumbledore's Man (Author Response) |
Oh, thank you so much for your kind words!
It's so obvious that she still has feelings for him deeper than she lets on to others.
This is one of the things I really wanted to convey while I was writing this; I'm glad you think I managed to do so.
Thanks again for reviewing!
~Julie |
clarilumos
Thursday 15th February 2007 05:15 | Dumbledore's Man |
| You have such a wonderful way with words. Thank you for sharing this with us, it was absolutely lovely. Well done! |
| Thursday 15th February 2007 19:32 | Dumbledore's Man (Author Response) |
Thanks so much for the compliment! And thank you for taking the time to review.
Julie |
Jner
Wednesday 14th February 2007 20:59 | Dumbledore's Man |
| Wonderful, as always. Well done. |
| Thursday 15th February 2007 19:31 | Dumbledore's Man (Author Response) |
Thanks so much, Jner!
~Julie |
Astrid
Wednesday 14th February 2007 15:38 | Dumbledore's Man |
| Very nice. I especially like having Percy and the minister in effigy. |
| Thursday 15th February 2007 19:30 | Dumbledore's Man (Author Response) |
I have to tell you, I think that was my favorite part to write. Every time I read that scene in HBP, I want to just strangle both Percy and Scrimgeour. Making snowmen replicas and then allowing Harry et. al. to destroy them helped me get rid of some of my frustration with those two.
Thanks for reviewing!
~Julie |
Grandma Kate
Wednesday 14th February 2007 14:07 | Dumbledore's Man |
| Quite satisfying because we know what is going to happen after the last Quidditch match. |
| Thursday 15th February 2007 19:26 | Dumbledore's Man (Author Response) |
LOL! I definitely kept the last Quidditch Cup (and its aftermath) in mind while I was writing this.
Thanks for reviewing!
~Julie |
mary-v
Wednesday 14th February 2007 11:57 | Dumbledore's Man |
| This was wonderfully written! I love missing moments like this one! Lovely work! |
| Thursday 15th February 2007 19:25 | Dumbledore's Man (Author Response) |
Thank you so much!
~Julie |
Chatmandu
Wednesday 14th February 2007 11:40 | Dumbledore's Man |
| I like this story! You managed to foreshadow the events we know will happen in canon, without making it too fluffy. A nice amount of tension, with Ginny's (somewhat) platonic concern for Harry, and his obvious craving for her attention without trying to look like he is craving it. The pacing of your plot moved nicely for a short story, not to briskly, but quickly enough to keep me wondering what is next. Oh yeah, well done with the tension caused by that little problem about the secrets Harry (and R/H) keeps from Ginny. Your ending was well written. I can see, in my mind, Ginny sitting there in the quiet of her home, watching her socks and pondering Harry. |
cckeimig
Wednesday 14th February 2007 10:02 | Dumbledore's Man |
| I really enjoyed reading this story. You have a realy nice writing style. |
Elvenlaughter
Wednesday 14th February 2007 07:21 | Dumbledore's Man |
| Awww... I love this moment. It shows the friendship between Harry and Ginny really well and leaves an opening for romance later - which of course, we already know comes to pass! Well done! |
| Thursday 15th February 2007 19:24 | Dumbledore's Man (Author Response) |
Hee. Thanks! I really wanted to show that they'd become better friends and still leave the door open for what happens later. This was even more fun for me to write because I *did* know that they ended up together later.
~Julie |
parakletos
Wednesday 14th February 2007 05:54 | Dumbledore's Man |
I think you captured the state of play in their relationship very well.
Thank you. |
| Thursday 15th February 2007 19:21 | Dumbledore's Man (Author Response) |
Thanks, Richard!
Julie |
nerd2006
Tuesday 13th February 2007 21:47 | Dumbledore's Man |
| This was great, I really enjoyed reading it. |
| Thursday 15th February 2007 19:18 | Dumbledore's Man (Author Response) |
Thanks for taking the time to read and review! I'm glad you liked it.
Julie |
Arnel
Tuesday 13th February 2007 21:05 | Dumbledore's Man |
| This is a wonderful story! You show Ginny's lingering affection for Harry even though she's "given up" on him beautifully, making me smile every time she chides herself not to really care about his opinion of her and her opinions. My favorite part was the end where they just sat and talked about everything they could think of without the pressure of someone interrupting. By the way, I love the dragon socks! |
| Thursday 15th February 2007 19:17 | Dumbledore's Man (Author Response) |
Thanks so much, Arnel! I really wanted to show that Ginny sitll felt something (more than just friendship) for Harry, even after giving up on him, so it's nice to hear that you think it worked!
I want a pair of those socks, too.
Julie |
