Lily Flower
Wednesday 21st February 2007 16:10 | Monsters Come in Green Too |
| I liked this story. I liked how Percy finally understood the whole purpose for life...to enjoy it. I like how Ginny and Harry just seem to KNOW what is going on and what he needs. Good job. |
Bagelz
Tuesday 20th February 2007 15:27 | Monsters Come in Green Too |
| Great perspective, good for old Percy! Thanks for the story! |
Ladybug
Tuesday 20th February 2007 06:17 | Monsters Come in Green Too |
| It's lovely to see Percy come round to his family again and work out what the really important things in life are. On the way there, I adored the picture of Percy sending of his nephew on the Hogwarts Express and minding his niece in public. Thanks for a sweet story. |
timbers
Monday 19th February 2007 11:15 | Monsters Come in Green Too |
| Inresting perspective, it was a bit hard to catch onto first but I enjoyed reading the way you wrote Percy. Good job! |
daniel_r_crazy22
Sunday 18th February 2007 21:45 | Monsters Come in Green Too |
| Aww. That was great. At first, I thought it was going to be Ron or something. It surprised me when it turned out to be Percy. You right him well. We haven't really seen him much in the actual books, but, what we did you, you carried out. Very well written. |
nerd2006
Sunday 18th February 2007 18:04 | Monsters Come in Green Too |
| This was cute. |
Curren
Sunday 18th February 2007 03:41 | Monsters Come in Green Too |
as with any story using 2nd person perspective, i have to ask you, why did you use it? For me personally, it becomes rather painful to read. I really hate that perspective.
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batbogeyhexer
Saturday 17th February 2007 22:13 | Monsters Come in Green Too |
| I liked this Percy very much and how we see it from his POV. Great story. |
Kamalia
Saturday 17th February 2007 21:25 | Monsters Come in Green Too |
| I've always liked Percy. Such a pity he turned on the family, but I like how you showed his insecurity. Great job! |
jeanne
Saturday 17th February 2007 21:19 | Monsters Come in Green Too |
| A whole new look at Percy and I like this Percy very much. You followed him , or should I say 'led' him through so many little vignettes, which finally allowed him to arrive at the full length picture that should be his life. Excellently written, Jeanne. |
Felix Felicis
Saturday 17th February 2007 19:26 | Monsters Come in Green Too |
What a cool story! I feel for you having written this in second hand. Very tough but worth it when it comes out this well. You did a nice job. I love the idea that Percy could get all the way to the top and then realize it's not what he truly needs. Very clever plot idea. The progression of his viewpoint as the years go by is well-written, especially in the way you describe his observations of Harry and Ginny. I could really see it myself, as if I were in the story, just as it's written.
Thanks for sharing this with us! |
eaglesnest
Saturday 17th February 2007 18:36 | Monsters Come in Green Too |
| A nice turn for Percy. Not every writer shows him in such a favorabl light. |
Narumi
Saturday 17th February 2007 17:43 | Monsters Come in Green Too |
| The POV was weird to get used to, but this is a very sweet piece, and I was actually quite proud of Percy at the end. |
