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Tuesday 20th March 2007 01:02 | Coming About | | For a first story this is very good. I enjoyed the by-play between Ron and Hermione and the fact that Harry was finally becoming annoyed with them! Overall, you have a feeling for the characters and I found myself wanting to know more about them. I hope you post another story soon. | Grandma Kate
Monday 19th March 2007 16:56 | Coming About | | I enjoyed the story and the disclaimer and both A/Ns. You have a way with words. | EvieMarie
Monday 19th March 2007 09:38 | Coming About | | I thought this was lovely. And I really wish there was more! It ends on an almost cliff-hangery kind of note. |
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