angeli
Saturday 9th February 2008 06:40 | Discovering Lily |
hi, this story of urs is FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!! pls finish it, im waitin w/ baited breath to know wat happens!!
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AurorGirl101
Monday 21st January 2008 11:32 | Discovering Lily |
| Your characterization of Remus here was very good. Kathleen sounds like an interesting twist. I can't wait to read more!! |
chiantiqueen
Wednesday 16th January 2008 07:45 | Discovering Lily |
| It's nice that Harry and Ginny have Remus to speak to about these things although it must be difficult for Remus to talk about since he lost so much when Lily and James died. Keep up the good work!! |
The Plaid Slytherin
Monday 12th November 2007 11:27 | Discovering Lily |
| I liked bringing Remus into this, to provide a connection between Ginny and the dreams. I really liked seeing Lily's anxieties about having a baby during those times, as that's something I've always wondered about. I thought you handled it well. I'm very curious to see where this goes. |
narumi
Tuesday 30th October 2007 07:11 | Discovering Lily |
| Hmm, I'm sensing a little Remus-Kathleen tension... Whee! |
gymnastgal19
Sunday 14th October 2007 19:07 | Discovering Lily |
interesting! This must be hard on harry, that Ginny is having the visions of Lily and not him...
good job on writting this! |
Patches
Saturday 12th May 2007 02:20 | Discovering Lily |
| Oh this is going to be rough. Remus knows something that won't make this a pleasant walk down memory lane. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. p |
Lily Flower
Wednesday 21st March 2007 10:25 | Discovering Lily |
Very nice. Poor Harry. He feels all left out. Also poor Remus, he is getting quite old I suppose. Although that shouldn't really be a problem other than the fact he is a werewolf. Anywho...keep it up.
Lils |
| Friday 23rd March 2007 12:41 | Discovering Lily (Author Response) |
Very nice. Poor Harry. He feels all left out. Also poor Remus, he is getting quite old I suppose. Although that shouldn't really be a problem other than the fact he is a werewolf. Anywho...keep it up.
Lils
Yes, he is quite old. I've always assumed that being a werewolf would be physically tough, and things can't always go well for him. Harry's... well, he's Harry. It's hard for him to vocalize exactly how he feels, but he definitely gets paid more attention in the upcoming chapters. Thank you for your review! |
ViolaGal
Tuesday 20th March 2007 15:25 | Discovering Lily |
Awsome!
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| Friday 23rd March 2007 12:41 | Discovering Lily (Author Response) |
Awsome!
Thank you! |
Wolf's Scream
Tuesday 20th March 2007 05:29 | Discovering Lily |
"Babysittiung the crazy lady," eh? Cute. :-) Curious that Moony hadn't mentioned anything about Kathleen to Harry earlier....
Still quite well-written. |
| Friday 23rd March 2007 12:43 | Discovering Lily (Author Response) |
"Babysittiung the crazy lady," eh? Cute. :-) Curious that Moony hadn't mentioned anything about Kathleen to Harry earlier....
Still quite well-written.
Hehe. I think there are a few of us who have felt the way Lily felt in this chapter -- out of sorts and out of control. Thank you so much for your wonderful review! |
Ari
Tuesday 20th March 2007 01:34 | Discovering Lily |
*reads**reads**reads**stops*
More? Me want more! Please? |
| Friday 23rd March 2007 12:43 | Discovering Lily (Author Response) |
*reads**reads**reads**stops*
More? Me want more! Please?
It's coming soon! Thanks for your review! |
Dollface
Monday 19th March 2007 17:57 | Discovering Lily |
| pretty cool...can t wait till next update! keep writing |
| Friday 23rd March 2007 12:44 | Discovering Lily (Author Response) |
pretty cool...can t wait till next update! keep writing
Thank you! Next chapter is in beta and hopefully we'll see it soon! |
ibelieveintruelove
Monday 19th March 2007 15:31 | Discovering Lily |
Oooo, very interesting chapter. What is Lily trying to tell Ginny? The baby's not in danger, is it? Oh, I hope not!
Update soon, I'm really enjoying this story!
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| Friday 23rd March 2007 12:44 | Discovering Lily (Author Response) |
Oooo, very interesting chapter. What is Lily trying to tell Ginny? The baby's not in danger, is it? Oh, I hope not!
Update soon, I'm really enjoying this story!
Thanks! I'm enjoying writing it. Your review is very much appreciated! It keeps me motivated. |
Chatmandu
Monday 19th March 2007 14:52 | Discovering Lily |
...where he’d been reading ‘What to Expect When You’re Expecting (The Magic Edition)
I know the Muggle edition was indispensible with all our children, but especially our first. I am afraid I went through it like Hermione does "Hogwarts, A History."
It is the nifty little bits like the above quote that make your story enjoyable. The subject matter is actually so sad... sigh |
| Friday 23rd March 2007 12:47 | Discovering Lily (Author Response) |
...where he’d been reading ‘What to Expect When You’re Expecting (The Magic Edition)
I know the Muggle edition was indispensible with all our children, but especially our first. I am afraid I went through it like Hermione does "Hogwarts, A History."
It is the nifty little bits like the above quote that make your story enjoyable. The subject matter is actually so sad... sigh
I'm glad you caught the reference to that book. It's been the Bible for a couple of my aunt's who have recently started having children as well as some of my friends. What a wonderful guide, though! Wonder what's different about the wizarding edition... Anyway.
Thanks for your wonderful review! It's so nice to hear from readers who are enjoying and noticing things that I thought no one would.
Thanks again! |
