chiantiqueen
Thursday 17th January 2008 02:42 | Discovering Lily |
| I'm really intrigued by what the purpose of these visions is! I'm hooked! |
The Plaid Slytherin
Monday 12th November 2007 14:46 | Discovering Lily |
| I really enjoyed seeing James and Lily's conversation about who should be Secret-Keeper. I'm curious to see if Lily's friend provides any help. This fic is so fun to read; it's so well-written and tightly plotted that I keep coming back to it when I should probably be doing other things because I can't stand not knowing what happens next! |
narumi
Tuesday 30th October 2007 07:21 | Discovering Lily |
| Haha, so cute! |
gymnastgal19
Sunday 14th October 2007 19:14 | Discovering Lily |
so cute! I love the ending so harry like!
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trinity899
Monday 4th June 2007 15:00 | Discovering Lily |
| In chapter 1, Ron and Hermione already have a son named Andrew. But in this one it seems like this is Hermione's first pregnancy. What happened to Andrew? |
Sassenach_Mel
Saturday 26th May 2007 11:09 | Discovering Lily |
| My main comment here is continuity. In the 1st chapter, you said that and already had a son - Andrew. Yet, this chapter made it seem like this would be their first child. Loving the story, though!! |
thisgrlrox
Friday 25th May 2007 20:47 | Discovering Lily |
| Harry is such a sweet husband. I'm sure these dreams are driving him batty though. There is a certain tension in the air. Not a good thing when one is about to have a baby. I'm enjoying this look at Lily and James though and how they parallel Harry and Ginny. Way to go! |
Patches
Saturday 12th May 2007 13:13 | Discovering Lily |
| I can sure see why Harry and Ginny are so nervous abouat these dreams she keeps having. Kathleen is a puzzle and the fact that she is getting more adgitated at the same time Ginny started having the dreams is too much for coincidence. I am glad Harry and Ginny can have a light moment though. At least they are trying to keep their sense of humor. That and Ginny knows Harry still wants her close. That is so important to very pregnant women! Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. p |
magically.inclined.apathy
Tuesday 27th March 2007 16:08 | Discovering Lily |
| this story is awesome!! it's a very interesting idea. =) i'm glad someone notices how little lily is spoken of! |
Lily Flower
Tuesday 27th March 2007 12:00 | Discovering Lily |
“Dunno,” Harry admitted and then grinned. “Wanna snog?”
I love this line. Suppose it would work in real life? lol Update soon. |
Ari
Monday 26th March 2007 23:14 | Discovering Lily |
| Another exemplary chapter. Keep 'em coming! |
Wolf's Scream
Monday 26th March 2007 18:12 | Discovering Lily |
| Still quite good. Kathleen defintely has a few mysteries. :-) And the interaction among the characters is excellent. |
ibelieveintruelove
Monday 26th March 2007 16:24 | Discovering Lily |
| Great chapter! I'd love to see where you're going with all of this, what is Lily trying to warn Ginny about? Update soon, this story is amazing! |
Lily Jane
Monday 26th March 2007 14:30 | Discovering Lily |
What an interesting way to conect and compare life of Harry and Ginny with James and Lily's.
I still have no idea what motive does Lily have with those dreams, but I'm sure you know.
I like this fic very much, and I'm willing to wait all the time you need to finish it, because, well, I really want to find out. |
~delusion~
Monday 26th March 2007 02:30 | Discovering Lily |
I think Harry's correct, something in the air is not right...
Ooooooooooooh! please update soon, I love this story and how Lily is trying to warn Ginny, it's like supernatural! |
