majolie
Friday 4th January 2008 14:31 | A Real Superiority of Mind |
| Great chapter title. |
bookish327
Monday 22nd October 2007 16:34 | A Real Superiority of Mind |
Harry SO knew what he was doing when he stripped off his sweater right there in front of her. Men can be such teases, too.
I love how Hermione could really spew out all of the anxiety she's having to Harry. It's great that she had him, since Ginny wasn't really of any use to her right now, in her current state. Tonks was also a great choice to counsel Ginny on how to know when you've found the one you want to be with forever. She's not as annoying and "perfect" as Fleur, but she knows what she's talking about, where love and marriage is concerned.
I love the wry sense of humor in your writing (e.g.,"Fleur was always good at confidence boosters.") Even just the title of this chapter made me smile. You do such a great job. |
southpaw
Friday 22nd June 2007 04:18 | A Real Superiority of Mind |
| Please tell us what happened Christmas '99. Fred and George were perfect in this chapter. If this was fun , the other story should be a riot especially since she said she hated Harry during that night. Thanks for a laugh out loud at work!! |
jazmin03-3
Monday 2nd April 2007 18:15 | A Real Superiority of Mind |
| i really liked it...plese update soon... |
critmo
Monday 2nd April 2007 08:53 | A Real Superiority of Mind |
That was a little depressing, but this
Tonks glanced at her from beneath her hot pink hair. "He chucked you, didn't he?"
"How did you know?"
"You've got that tone. I recognize it well, it was my signature back in school."
inexplicably made me feel better. |
snuffles007
Saturday 31st March 2007 20:41 | A Real Superiority of Mind |
| Great chapter! Keep them coming! |
jeanne
Friday 30th March 2007 16:37 | A Real Superiority of Mind |
| I do like this fic. I intend to put you on my E-mail update list. Looking forward to another update. Jeanne. |
lantis222
Friday 30th March 2007 14:57 | A Real Superiority of Mind |
Ok, how could you leave it like that. Ginny is so incredibly frustrating to me right about now. I have a feeling that Harry isn't going to just go and accept her new epiphany. As much as he'd like to. It would just be too easy for him. and Ginny did have a point, they don't really know eachother anymore.
Alright, now that that is off my chest. I just found this story. I have to say that I'm loving it and you're going on my favorite authors list just as soon as I'm done with this review. I had to laugh so hard as I can relate to just about everything that Hermione and Ron are going through. Right down to Ron thinking for a second that Hermione was going to break up with him. I did that to my poor husband. I wasn't trying to call it off, but I really did have a problem with the ring he gave me. (it's a long story and one that we still laugh about.) I was devistated at the time.
ok this is officially the longest review I have ever left so I'll stop now. I just love this story. Update soon, I can hardly wait to hear what Ginny has to say for herself. And what about that lunch with Viktor. Ron and Hermione really need to go off some place and be alone for a while.
Well done, I promise the next review won't be so long. Great Job! |
BasketKiwi
Friday 30th March 2007 14:51 | A Real Superiority of Mind |
| Ah! Awesome awesome awesomeness!! I'm so excited for the next chapter! (Even though something's probably going to go very wrong...) |
ibelieveintruelove
Friday 30th March 2007 11:07 | A Real Superiority of Mind |
Wonderful chapter! I'm so excited for the next one, Harry and Ginny together at last! But I'm nervous about Hermione's lunch with Krum. And about how stressed she is. Ron needs to ake up and do something to help her out!
Update soon, I'm loving this story! |
Grandma Kate
Friday 30th March 2007 10:04 | A Real Superiority of Mind |
Lovely! Fleur cuts to the chase. doesn't she.
Now if we can only keep Hermione alive long enough to get married (with lamb chops, yet). |
cwarbeck
Friday 30th March 2007 07:50 | A Real Superiority of Mind |
Ooh, things are finally moving along!
Hermione meeting Krum for lunch and not telling Ron - not good. I can just imagine what Ron's reaction will be when he finds out - most probably from another source who'll see Hermione with Krum. Uh-oh.
Yay for Ginny finally realising that her pride won't get her anywhere but a one-way ticket to spinsterhood. I just hope that she's not too late! Why do I get the feeling that she's going to find something she wasn't expecting at Harry's place? Hopefully I'm wrong and it'll just be Harry showing off his lovely naked chest again. |
