hg4eva13
Thursday 4th June 2009 10:11 | The Little White Bumblebee |
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Prongs739
Friday 22nd August 2008 09:42 | The Little White Bumblebee |
Ah so that is how the mysterious Albus Potter came to be.
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gymnastgal19
Wednesday 31st October 2007 20:47 | The Little White Bumblebee |
wow! that was a really neat idea!!! loved it! Im not surprised that hermonie knew about it lol
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harrysnotgoingtodiein7
Thursday 19th July 2007 06:14 | The Little White Bumblebee |
kinda weird ... a baby albus ... but good story.
PS. Finish up Bargain2 and CotM ! i loved them ! |
pyromain
Monday 25th June 2007 11:06 | The Little White Bumblebee |
| this is just one of the greatest storys I really would like for JKR to do something similar. |
Astrid
Friday 25th May 2007 00:10 | The Little White Bumblebee |
| What an original idea! Wow, if JKR does something like this, I'll totally flip for joy. You're brilliant! |
pyromain
Tuesday 22nd May 2007 09:23 | The Little White Bumblebee |
This is really a nice twist to the origanal story.
It wass fun reading it, and it gives hope to where the story might go in the deathly hollows.
although i fear jkr story line will be a bit darker. |
honourary_weasley
Friday 18th May 2007 23:29 | The Little White Bumblebee |
Wow... I mean ... Wow! That is such a cool concept! Is there going to be more?
I'm just stunned. That's really quite ... inspired.
Wow! |
BasketKiwi
Friday 18th May 2007 13:00 | The Little White Bumblebee |
there's no other chapters planned
Ohh! Okay. Yeah, I realized after I left that review that there might not be any more, but there was just a lot of backstory. It was a really interesting story. |
noylj
Thursday 17th May 2007 21:33 | The Little White Bumblebee |
No, the old fart has to remain dead.
Now, if he was cursed with having to live through 7 lifetimes or repentence for all the harm he caused Harry, it might be good.
Personally, I would have left the with Snape. Yuck...... |
ibelieveintruelove
Thursday 17th May 2007 15:14 | The Little White Bumblebee |
| Haha this is a ...different concept on Dumbledore's death to be sure, but a very cute story! |
IHateSnakes
Wednesday 16th May 2007 10:18 | The Little White Bumblebee |
| Very interesting plot. Nicely written. S. |
Arnel
Wednesday 16th May 2007 08:28 | The Little White Bumblebee |
What a wonderful story! I love the cat-with-nine-lives twist that Dumbledore has assumed with his phoenix spell. No wonder Hermione probably had that cat-that-ate-the-canary look on her face when Harry told her he and Ginny had something to tell her about Albie.
It's nice to read another terrific story by you! |
critmo
Tuesday 15th May 2007 14:17 | The Little White Bumblebee |
| A very clever idea, but creepy all the same. |
BasketKiwi
Tuesday 15th May 2007 13:30 | The Little White Bumblebee |
| Whoa. This is certainly original! I can't remember ever reading anything quite like it... I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter! |
| Wednesday 16th May 2007 08:31 | The Little White Bumblebee (Author Response) |
As much as I love this story, there's no other chapters planned.
Thanks for reading. |
topbabe
Tuesday 15th May 2007 10:33 | The Little White Bumblebee |
this is so cool, wot a brillaint idea. *pat on back*
i love it |
GryffindorDragon
Tuesday 15th May 2007 10:30 | The Little White Bumblebee |
Dumbledore as Phoenix -- rather intersesting
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J.R. Lewis
Tuesday 15th May 2007 10:15 | The Little White Bumblebee |
| Well ... that would/could certainly explain how Albus ended up with such a long name. I wonder if JK ever thought of something like this? Good story! |
Megan SQ
Tuesday 15th May 2007 08:21 | The Little White Bumblebee |
| What an original idea! I have to say, though, Albie is kind of freakish. How do you parent such a child? I suppose you stick his but in a library, with a bowl of lemon drops nearby, and that's that. :-) |
Author by Night
Tuesday 15th May 2007 05:10 | The Little White Bumblebee |
This fic had a very interesting twist. I sort of like the idea of Dumbledore reliving. And Harry's reaction to Snape was spot-on.
Just one thing. I'm not sure that I can see why Dumbledore would want to pretend to be a kid;wouldn't it make more sense for him to mainly just have memories?
I did like the fic, this is just a thought. |
| Tuesday 15th May 2007 07:28 | The Little White Bumblebee (Author Response) |
| Yeah, I thought about that. It could have gone a bunch of different ways and I dithered on all of them. Having him be a true baby with memories would have made it much 'nicer', but it wouldn't have captured Dumbledore properly. Not to mention that BJH already did that in his fic "A Fairy Tale Ending". |
Miri
Tuesday 15th May 2007 00:22 | The Little White Bumblebee |
| As the phrase goes...what a concept!! A somewhat bizaare concept but a fascinating one. However, although the story is listed as completed, there really is a very unfinished feel to it. There are an awful lot of unanswered questions, the roles of Snape and Hermione among them. Is there a sequal in the works? |
| Tuesday 15th May 2007 07:23 | The Little White Bumblebee (Author Response) |
| This was a plot bunny that wouldn't let go until I wrote it. I have no sequel plans at the moment, but there is certainly a large window of opportunity for one. You never know! |
