redmeat
Wednesday 27th June 2007 15:39 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday |
ahah.
Sherman love machine. It reminds me of American Pie. |
bonbon_13
Wednesday 27th June 2007 01:03 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday |
| Wow I was trying not to scream with laughter during that one...........great job!!! |
| Wednesday 27th June 2007 08:04 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday (Author Response) |
| You should have screamed - it's healthy for you! Thanks! |
mary-v
Saturday 16th June 2007 18:42 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday |
You KILL me! This chapter was so hysterical I nearly died of laughter!
And I loved the Sherman. The Sherminator. Those pick-up lines were so lame, butso hysterical!
Amd poor Hermaphrodite. Having to endure that. LOL!
Awesome, awesome work!!!!!!!! |
| Saturday 16th June 2007 20:57 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday (Author Response) |
Hey, you picked up the Hermaphrodite line! That was actually my favourite part of the entire chapter, but of course, nothing compares to the Sherman, right?
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KMB
Sunday 10th June 2007 08:58 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday |
| all i got to say is that the "Sherman Love Machine" had me laughing out loud. it seems to oddly resemble the Sheminator that was in the American Pie movies. i think that is why i luaghed so hard. also its that Cleo has her nose in the air, she a little snot! i actually have a cousin just like her! |
| Sunday 10th June 2007 09:58 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the second review! |
KMB
Sunday 10th June 2007 08:55 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday |
| all i got to say is that the "Sherman Love Machine" had me laughing out loud. it seems to oddly resemble the Sheminator that was in the American Pie movies. i think that is why i luaghed so hard. also its that Cleo has her nose in the air, she a little snot! i actually have a cousin just like her! |
| Sunday 10th June 2007 09:58 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday (Author Response) |
| Sherman and Cleo have been a big hit. Although the bit that I find really funny is just how many people will say that they have cousins or relatives exactly like them! |
Patches
Saturday 9th June 2007 11:54 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday |
| Ok at least Hermione remembered Ginny's birthday. Things are looking up. Harry deffinitely likes Ginny's swim suit. I'm sure Ron is going to love Hermione in hers. Cleo is deffinitely a pain. I look forward to her getting her comupance! At least Harry has given Ginny a great smile. Thanks for writing. I look forward to the next chapter. p |
| Sunday 10th June 2007 02:06 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday (Author Response) |
| Oh, don't worry - Cleo will get hers! Thanks for reading. |
ilyhp102
Tuesday 5th June 2007 17:41 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday |
| love this story!!!! |
| Thursday 7th June 2007 09:09 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
stardust610
Tuesday 5th June 2007 15:44 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday |
Great chapter! I really hate Cleo, but it's fun to hate her, isn't it?! I just want Harry to kiss Ginny right in front of Cleo so she'll just back off of him But even if that did happen, I suppose she would keep on trying to win him back, but she could never break up and !
I'm looking forward to the next chapter! |
| Tuesday 5th June 2007 16:54 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday (Author Response) |
| Yeah, Cleo's just someone you love to hate. The next chapter should be up soon. |
SillyGillie
Tuesday 5th June 2007 13:01 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday |
| Aw this story is adorable. I love it!! |
| Tuesday 5th June 2007 16:53 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday (Author Response) |
| Happy you're enjoying it! |
Felix Felicis
Monday 4th June 2007 19:52 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday |
Oh, come on! You can't just leave us like that! Great bit of writing in this chapter. There were a couple of places I actually burst out laughing - one of my favorite things to do while reading. The best part was Hermione showing up and giving Ginny her present; it was about time someone remembered and Hermione was just the right person. As always, I love your writing style. It's so easy to read, and nice and clean. Your flow is good and your insight into the characters (Ginny's) feelings is quite good. You've captured her especially well in her transitions from high to low, giving us great scenes and good understanding of why she feels the way she does. Your new characters are all fun, too. One of the benefits of new characters is that you get to experiment with them, which you've done very well. We have all types descending onto the Weasley household today. Sherman might just be my favorite just because he's so relentless!
Can't wait to see the next! There's nothing as fun as seeing Harry speechless when he sees the beauty that is Ginny. |
| Tuesday 5th June 2007 05:10 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday (Author Response) |
Aw, thanks. You really leave great reviews! It's a huge compliment if you think Ginny is in character - especially since Athea and I are definitely not 16 anymore! But I suppose a part of us will always be that age.
Sherman's my favourite too, and Dodo is a close second.
But of course no one beats and ! |
toskin
Monday 4th June 2007 16:35 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday |
| I'm rolling! The Sherman Love Machine! I can so see Anthony Michael Hall in all his glory there. Cleo - hmm, I can't decide if she's based on the sister that was getting married or the snobby rich girlfriend of the cute guy or a combo. My thought is how selfish would you have to be to knowingly plan you wedding for your sister's birthday? Keep it up. I can't wait for the next installment. |
| Tuesday 5th June 2007 05:05 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday (Author Response) |
Anthony Michael Hall was great in that movie, wasn't he? Cleo's based on both of those characters you mentioned.
Here's an interesting piece of trivia - Molly Ringwald's sister in the movie was named... Ginny. |
Grandma Kate
Monday 4th June 2007 11:11 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday |
| Delightful! Sherman is just so terrible that he is very funny. Think of how he'd look in a "bathing costume". |
| Tuesday 5th June 2007 05:03 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday (Author Response) |
| Oh no, we don't need to see THAT, do we? I imagine he'll be in teeny tiny Speedos. |
PumpkinGlory
Monday 4th June 2007 11:11 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday |
| argh hate cleo |
| Tuesday 5th June 2007 05:02 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday (Author Response) |
| There's just something about her... |
ViviRed75
Monday 4th June 2007 11:02 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday |
| Love it. Cleo is a nice added touch to shake things up for Ginny. And the Ron/Hermione interaction is priceless! Yes, dear, she wears bathing suits in public. *laughs* Keep up the good work. |
WhimsicalWhims
Monday 4th June 2007 09:37 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday |
I loved it! i'm so used to the horrible stuff on FF.net that I was shocked when I started going elsewhere! Please update soon! I would like to see dear Cleo get thrown in the pond or something
Emma
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| Tuesday 5th June 2007 05:01 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday (Author Response) |
You should definitely check out the other fab stories here at PS.
Cleo will get her comeuppance in one way or another - so be patient! |
lantis222
Monday 4th June 2007 09:02 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday |
| Oh my, the sad thing is that boys like that actually exist. Hopefully not quite to that extent. I loved this chapter. Poor Harry, will he ever survive the tornado that is Cleotilde? Update soon, I can't wait. |
| Tuesday 5th June 2007 04:59 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday (Author Response) |
Oh, I think Harry's got a few tricks up his sleeve. Besides, I don't think he's just that into her.
You actually know boys like Sherman? Oh dear... |
Soul_Blade.ville
Monday 4th June 2007 08:27 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday |
| i like this story... i think that more or less sums up everything i was going to say |
| Tuesday 5th June 2007 04:53 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday (Author Response) |
| Thank you, then, for that concise review! |
icegirl
Monday 4th June 2007 02:57 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday |
Sherman is the best! Very funny! *lol* Again a very good chapter! Hope you update soon and that Harry shows how ugly Cleo really is (in kissing Ginny) *g*
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| Monday 4th June 2007 05:03 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday (Author Response) |
Sherman's a hit! I suppose you could say Cleo's a hit (or maybe you want to hit her ) too.
Thanks! |
Ishi
Monday 4th June 2007 02:56 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday |
| Hee hee, the Sherminator ^^. I think I may love you. And I definitely love this story. You are so full of awesome. |
| Monday 4th June 2007 05:02 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday (Author Response) |
Aw, I love you too.
You recognized the Sherminator, huh? I think those who've watched Sixteen Candles would also recognize traces of Farmer Ted (played by a very young, and very geeky Anthony Michael Hall) in him.
Thanks! |
The Boss
Monday 4th June 2007 01:25 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday |
Excellent story line so far!!!
cannot wait until the next one comes out!
The Boss |
| Monday 4th June 2007 04:59 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday (Author Response) |
| Thank you for all your reviews. |
periwinklephoenix
Monday 4th June 2007 01:13 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday |
"Pull the other one!" Another Monty Python reference!
Keep the chapters coming... i only have one question, shouldn't this be set after Harry and Ginny dated? Because she turned eleven just before Chamber of Secrets but Ginny acts like she hasn't dated Harry at all. |
| Monday 4th June 2007 04:58 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday (Author Response) |
No, this is Alternate Universe, so the events of HBP never happened.
Thanks for the review. |
ibelieveintruelove
Monday 4th June 2007 00:39 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday |
| Oh this has been the best chapter yet! I absolutely loved the whole swim suit encounter with Ginny and Harry, Harry is totally into her! And I'm glad that Hermione remembered Ginny's birthday, I knew that she would ; ) Ugh and Cleo is very annoying, she needs to stay away from Harry! How old is she again? I thought she was younger than Ginny, so maybe she was just being a witch (with a B) when she was guessing Ginny to be 12 lol. Please update soon, I want to know what will happen during their swim! |
| Monday 4th June 2007 04:56 | The Unforgettable Forgotten Birthday (Author Response) |
Harry's totally into her, all right.
Cleo is 14 to Ginny's 16, but hey, you're right, she is a witch! |
