freshwater
Saturday 19th April 2008 16:03 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
Winky's reference to Hermione as "She-Who-Knits" totally cracked me up! Now I must check out Full Penseive's fic.
I love the way you end little sections with a counter-comment, such as 'the elves thought Harry could not hear them. But Harry did hear them.' (not an exact quote) It's great fun knowing that bits of data or insight are buffeting around, ready to become significant in another chapter. |
huskers
Saturday 29th December 2007 21:34 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
I'm not exactly sure why Harry was needed to talk with Justin, why couldn't a more wizard friendly goblin have taken the boy under his wing and helped him out a bit. This whole thing of treating Justin so poorly is why wizards treat goblins poorly and her we go in a stupid and vicious circle.
I look forward to seeing the fall of the M.I.D.
What the heck was Steph Granger doing for the Order? I know, I'll find out soon.
Some real movent for Harry and Ginny. Strange how he can plan a zillion things for the future, like business, change society, ect, but thinks there is no room or time for a girl.
She-Who-Knits??? That is great! I doubt you thought of it like this, but it is almost like Hermione is the house elves' own Voldemort and they are afraid to say her name.
I also love that Harry overheard Dobby and Winky. It will really give him something to chew on.
Ok, I've been waiting on this one. Harry takes the Aberration Day potion, winds up in a fight for his life, and is now a superwarrior because of it. Ron and Hermione end up worried sick about him, and are now even more concerned with his well being than they ever were. To the point wher Molly Weasley, the queen of mother bears, thinks they need to back off a bit. Neville and his female guest for the day, I forget who she was, end up forced to exercise by Luna, and now, at least Neville, is some kind of Arnold Schwartzenhager. I'm sure I butchered the spelling on that one. Abberation day and the activitiy of the palidins that day seemed to have a permanent and profound affect on the palidins. You've shown a lasting affect for the rest of the paladins, are you going to make it permanent? It would seem to me you have to if you are with Harry, Ron, Hermine, Neville, and his partner. Seems to me we have some pretty troubled palidins if that's the case. Just curious. |
alzeeb
Tuesday 30th October 2007 15:03 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
| wow great story though really long, have added you to my mailing list just for this story, please get the next chap up soon |
king_lloyd11
Sunday 21st October 2007 18:28 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
| cmooooooon we need more!!!!...plzzzzzz? |
jcouned
Saturday 6th October 2007 22:01 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
I just finished reading this story and have found it to be one of the best I have read. Hope you will finish as I'm really into this story.
Rich Cardin
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lumia
Saturday 29th September 2007 01:18 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
Hi, I am really enjoying this fast moveing and involved story
I love the 'history' and the way you handle the battle scenes, giveing the enmotional responces to the situations, but tempering this with reason and cool logic
I look forwards to reading more
Lumia |
mexpems
Friday 28th September 2007 21:32 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
| first sory i did not review all theo ther chapters, since I read all ofthe today and i was really amazed and glad I did, Great story sorry I only have two thumbs, can wait for the following chapters, I love the story and the way its being developed, Again great work |
spencer122
Thursday 27th September 2007 18:04 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
| Great chapter I cant wait for your next, looking foreward to reading more. one of the better fics out there. |
SpellBound
Monday 10th September 2007 00:03 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
We're due another chapter soon, right?! Hope to read more soon...
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Hollu
Thursday 6th September 2007 20:20 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
| Loved it! There's so much going on. I understand Harry's self-sacrificing attitude, but I hope that Dobby and Winky's comments will help to think otherwise. . Poor Steph Granger. No rest for the weary. I take it the Grangers will never really get to return to muggle society? Then again, will the want to or really need to? Unless there are other family members to visit they don't really have much in the muggle world. I can't wait for more, now that I have time to read this again! |
Paladin11
Thursday 30th August 2007 04:00 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
this is really good
i like the granger and business parts of the story because they add something new from most other fanfics
please update soon
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lonny_lupin
Saturday 11th August 2007 14:21 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
| Very good story. I hope you write more. |
wichitatwister
Sunday 24th June 2007 18:27 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
Yes! FINALLY something substantive for the Tonks parents to do rather than
hover in the background at Grimmauld Place or St Mungo's while Tonks or Remus or Harry lie at deaths' door!! Well Done! Abso- Bloody-lutely marvelous backgrounding for Sol Lovegood and a perfect setup to let Harry become a backer or co-owner of the Quibbler should the need arise a la Deatheater or Ministry thug sabotage. Looks like Dr. Granger pere' could have used a spell-mongered Canary Creme to fly the scene instead of that can and stick pseudo-portkey. What's with the stick? A WWW one-time / disposable wand?
MOREMOREMORE...need Potterfix...HBPtoo boring Deathly Hallows too far in the future..... |
CrumpleHornedKiwi
Saturday 23rd June 2007 01:35 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
Phew - it took me three days to finish this one. I'm still trying to process the complicated plot.
She-who-knits - hilarious!
I don't like all the business stuff but I'm sure it will all mean something in the end.
Cute little / romance bubbling along nicely.
And I would love to see the keeping device made for real! |
lupinspup
Tuesday 19th June 2007 22:49 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
wahoo! an update!!! thank you !
love the story... keep 'em comin! |
wandwavingwannabe
Tuesday 19th June 2007 17:49 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
I'm enjoying this story with each chapter that I read. When I get my email from PhoenixSong with your name I know I'm in for a good, long, awesome read in just one chapter. Keep up the excellent work and I look forward to more chapters of this story to come.
WandWavingWannaBe |
