gymnastgal19
Thursday 24th April 2008 21:57 | Before The Beginning |
omg!!! thats so sad!! To think that that one decision to make peter their secret keeper lost them their lives
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jovelyn_mark
Monday 17th March 2008 20:49 | Before The Beginning |
| awwwww not i feel worse than before..... amazing story. That Petter!!!! |
gymnastgal19
Wednesday 5th December 2007 06:53 | Before The Beginning |
Wow! This was really well written!
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STUFA
Friday 12th October 2007 09:23 | Before The Beginning |
| ITS A EXELLENT STORY! THANKS.... |
D.A.D.A.chik
Thursday 4th October 2007 16:13 | Before The Beginning |
| OMG...this was an amazing story. I love the high pitched laugh...so real! |
DebbieO
Wednesday 3rd October 2007 17:08 | Before The Beginning |
| Great job. A very believable and creepy scenario. |
RIPHedwig
Tuesday 2nd October 2007 12:29 | Before The Beginning |
*sigh*
that was really good.
but so sad.
i hate what happened to James and Lily. I read the chapter 'Godric's Hollow' of DH last night and cried my eyes out. You wrote really well, though. |
pixie7
Tuesday 2nd October 2007 08:10 | Before The Beginning |
O wow, poor lily.
thanks for clearing up how the switch took place. |
ktem1724
Wednesday 11th July 2007 07:11 | Before The Beginning |
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ktem1724
Wednesday 11th July 2007 07:11 | Before The Beginning |
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DeborahSu
Tuesday 10th July 2007 14:20 | Before The Beginning |
Well done! The emotion really came through!!!
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DeborahSu
Tuesday 10th July 2007 14:10 | Before The Beginning |
Well done! The emotion really came through!!!
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lantis222
Monday 9th July 2007 19:03 | Before The Beginning |
| Oh No! They were so content, it's so sad. You did a great job, I liked it. |
pyromain
Monday 9th July 2007 13:08 | Before The Beginning |
| I really like this explanation about how the switch was made. |
aurora luminis
Sunday 8th July 2007 22:50 | Before The Beginning |
| This is powerful, very powerful. You have conveyed with painful realism all of a woman’s fear and despair at the ‘loss’ of a child. All of it heightened by the anticipation, the if and when of it. It is very daring to end it as you did. The perfect ending, the true-life ending, but still daring. The common urge is to turn to a piece that gives more comfort. This is more in the genre of cleansing… Well written, and given the time element, almost perfect. I would have found it helpful, more convincing, if the switch from Sirius to Peter had been given a fuller coverage. Kudos just the same! |
