girlspell
Monday 13th August 2007 11:12 | Requiem of the Phoenix |
| Great plot twist. Some terrific writing here. Hermoine moving from body to body was chilling. Will they make it? Arrrrr...but at least we have Curse Breakers to ease out our wiat. |
666rastas666
Saturday 11th August 2007 06:04 | Requiem of the Phoenix |
| Absolutely awesome, well constructed fanfic. This is almost better than reading deathly hallows, can't wait for the next installment. |
GhostWriter
Tuesday 7th August 2007 06:53 | Requiem of the Phoenix |
Nooooo!
How very of you to leave us hanging like this!
Seriously, this is a great fic, and I'm enjoying it thoroughly. It's a nice alternate take on the Final Battle. I really like getting to see things from Hermione's point of view. She always have been one of my favorite characters, even if she is a bit bossy.
Great work. I can't wait for the next update. I also can't wait for the next update on "Curse Breakers." You are an excellent writer. |
| Thursday 9th August 2007 19:21 | Requiem of the Phoenix (Author Response) |
I think one of the main reasons I wrote this fic is because Hermione is not in Curse Breakers, and I really like her character. She makes a great narrator for a story and she also is a fascinatingly deep character.
Curse Breakers will be a bit before it is updated. I need to finish the chapter and get it through beta, and my beat is getting married in two weeks. My hope is early September at this point.
thanks for reading and reviewing
-JOnathan |
Uzamaki-girl
Saturday 4th August 2007 14:46 | Requiem of the Phoenix |
| What an amazing chapter. Who's their secret keeper? Would a weasley really sell out their own sister? Will Harry, Ginny and their son make it out alive? So many questions yet to be answered. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Thursday 9th August 2007 19:30 | Requiem of the Phoenix (Author Response) |
Many questions will be answered in the next chapter, but most will not be answered until the final chapter.
next chapter has been sent in for approval. So it should be here soon
thanks,
Jonathan |
eaglesnest
Friday 3rd August 2007 21:43 | Requiem of the Phoenix |
| So much suspense in one chapter. I really liked the long meeting of the Orde with everyone bickering while Harry held his silence followed by his inspirational speech to action and victory. The introduction of traitors was a shocking surprise to Hermione and she barely was able to Portkey out. I hope Arthur survives. And now harry is off with Fawkes to rescue Ginny and James. I truly hope all is well and Harry can rescue them both. |
| Thursday 9th August 2007 19:29 | Requiem of the Phoenix (Author Response) |
I've always liked inspirational speeches. Good oratory is a dying art, and I miss it a lot. However, there is an important reason why Harry is silent throughout the meeting.
Well, there has to be a traitor for the set up to work, and I wanted Hermione to know about it and who it was.
thanks for reading,
Jonathan |
girlspell
Friday 3rd August 2007 12:21 | Requiem of the Phoenix |
My goodness. This is the first I've read of this story. Amazing, that's all I can say.
There are so many parallels in this story to the world ot terroists today. Evan a kind of parallel to Deathly Hallows. Great atmosphere of tension throughout this story that never lead up. What's alarming is that the population of the order is not that high. Not looking forward to the death toll!
Looking forward for more. You have me hooked for sure! |
| Thursday 9th August 2007 19:26 | Requiem of the Phoenix (Author Response) |
Thank you very much.
I do tend to base the Death Eaters more along the lines of terrorists than a rebellious faction of even bigoted homicidal idiots. Although any parallels to DH are purely lucky guesses as the plot and outlines and most of the writing was finished before DH came out
the next chapter should be out soon.
-Jonathan |
